The Return of the CRIMINAL - by Shagnika

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

one more thing the last scene reminded me so much of bomb robbery last scene , I loved ACP sir's expression in that episode and could clearly imagine his expression here as well and i loved my imagination

@didobhav, yes thats the reason why i was asking all sort of nonsense questions yesterday Anyways thanx for helping me with that!!!

My Pleasure 😊

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Actually my story was like - Idhar se udhar se chori karke compiled..😆😆😆

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Shagnika
Actually my story was like - Idhar se udhar se chori karke compiled..😆😆😆

Ye bhi ek Art hai. You have that. Its not chori you presented the way at actual place it should be like.

Like if one have one one idea but if don't use at actual place where it should actually fits its of no use. To actually make it fit at place is important.

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

see..everybody like your story..plz tuhi nahi aur bhi jo yaha story likhi hein uanko eak request hein...aap apane story ko pahelehi koi apane aapko remark nahi dijiye.hum sab hurt hote hein...sab ko apni creativity kabhi achhi nahi lagati..kyo ki vo aur bhi achha dena chahata hein..etani achhi story to likhate hein..aur koi loopswhole hoge towe will tell you...plz keep writting good stories...its like treat for all of us😊👏

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Arre wah, mazaa aa gaya. Kya kaam kiya hai Madam T ko bhej diya. Thank you. Subah Subah kuch achha padne ko mile to mazaa aa jata hai.

Thank you for this shagnika

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

👏👏Very well written shagnika!!! well done!!👏 👏 and abhi was rather cute here!!!😃 😳

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Loved it 👏

The story and plot were very clear, that's the best part. I didn't have to re-read anything a second time.

Hope to read more from you. 😃

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Monika

@monika21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

wow shagnika.. well done yaar.... just read the whole story.. too good. while reading i was imagining the scenes also visualizing the story... 😊 very well handled. n especially good use of our famous jodi. i think u should add DIG's thinking or his expressions in the climax. but its really too good.👏👏 fantastic. keep it up.😛👍🏼
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