New SS: The Cursed Face pt. 7 pg. 8 20/01 - Page 2

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sonia871 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant ss...loved it...
Pm me plz...update soon cant wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear its very good n interesting ...plzzz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ekta--

but what I heard 'you needed encouragement ' .You have already given two stories and still apprehensive ??Don' t you dare to hide your stories in future from us !!

Anyways meri taraf se ek bada sa thnx and hug to you for giving this beautiful Diwali gift.And sush ,thnx to you too for making her give this story.🤗

thx ekta well even i was surprised when she said she wont update it.. she said she was shy so i said her to send it to me through pm but wen i read it i was so much excited that i told her to post it.. she was little apprehensive at first but happy that i was able to help her
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice started and keep posted
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the story is interesting.loved it.pls do cond soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ekta--

Rajit di (I hope I wrote the name correct ) .Actually you will not believe me .I mean is it a coincidence?Today only From no where I got recalled of your SS the captive and felt strong urge to read it again.Then in train I started it like you know - my phone's battery was going down and still didn't leave in between.There I read my replies too and was amused but at the same time loved to read how I was feeling over 'luv luv' calling of dev to radh. And In the last update ,I felt 'no!! Its finished ' .and I felt like to ask you start a new SS like of that one with a different story .Although I was debating to myself on asking .You know how many times I had asked you ,so.

But when I opened the forum now after coming home ,I was as much pleasurable to see your thread title that you can't imagine even.
Now I want you to give at least one update daily as its diwali break .This story is as much interesting as that one .I am hooked really seriously .Can't wait to read more :-)


oh thank you so much for appreciating my efforts..ur wish got accepted without even asking..,i'm glad i gave you a diwali gift though without even knowing haha..but sorry to break your heart i cant update daily and i dont have diwali break because i dont live in india, i actually live in philippines..though it is my semestral break but still i'm not much free, my college is going to start on nov. 7..but i'll try to update asap!! N you got my name right..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ekta--

but what I heard 'you needed encouragement ' .You have already given two stories and still apprehensive ??Don' t you dare to hide your stories in future from us !!

Anyways meri taraf se ek bada sa thnx and hug to you for giving this beautiful Diwali gift.And sush ,thnx to you too for making her give this story.🤗



actually i was bit shy because the story for me was corny, so i thought it wouldn't be that good!! that's why..since you guys are saying its nice then i think i was wrong!!

you're welcome i hope you loved my diwali gift!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soniaman

Brilliant ss...loved it...
Pm me plz...update soon cant wait



thank you and i would try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

Dear its very good n interesting ...plzzz continue



thank you for liking it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

She had never seen such a handsome guy in her entire life. His arrogant features, his strawberry colored lips slightly curled, so soft like a feather, his chiseled sharp nose, intoxicating metallic steel like eyes filled with passion, mass of pitch black hair covering his head and making small curls on his forehead and at the nape of his neck. She had almost lost her breath when she looked at him but the interruption brought her back. He is a masterpiece to look at, ruthlessly handsome that one look at him is not enough.

But who he was, she thought. She had never seen him in the village ever since she came here. Why his face looks slightly familiar?? What he is doing here?? What was he doing with the village boy she usually sees?? Is he related to him?? What if he?? No, no, that can't be possible!!

She caught her reflection in the mirror and touched her covered face. She recalled her fight with the shopkeeper, how he called her evil.

"You're life is already hell, Radhika!! It's not your face which is cursed, it's your life!!" She said to herself.

***

She had another encounter with Dev which she wished would never have happened because she made a complete fool of herself.

She was bringing a big heavy pot full of water, she was very careful while bringing the pot as it took all her strength. After few strides, her eyes fell on him and just stayed there. He was walking on her way, talking to the same village boy. His skin had turned bronze due to the sunlight, his shirt hugging his broad muscled shoulders and wide chest, tucked in his pants. She couldn't look away, tried hard but failed to do so. She was so engrossed in admiring his beauty that she didn't saw the stone and tripped right away on the ground. The pot in her hands broke, and the water splashed all over her body.

Dev who just saw her, chose not to notice her because of Birju, however, when he saw her falling, he ran towards her.

"Are you okey??" He asked concernedly while trying to help her. She looked at his metallic steel like eyes and got lost in them. Dev, who have always adored her eyes felt the urge to look more of her, her enormous hazel eyes were like two shiny stones whom one will just look again and again.

"You okey??" he asked softly. His tender voice brought her back into the reality, anger start simmering and solely directed to him, if he wasn't so handsome she wouldn't have been losing control over her feelings. He felt the changes in her emotions from soft gaze turning into rage, which he didn't understand.

She pushed his hands which were holding her by her shoulders and accused "It's your entire fault!!"

Stunned by her sudden push, he utterly got confused at her accusation.

"how the hell it is my fault???" he asked.

"It's your fault, if you weren't..." she said but stopped realizing what she was about to say.

"I what??" he asked.

"You're fine, Lady??" Birju asked while coming towards them.

She shifted her attention to Birju then looked at Dev, after few moments she spoke "Yeah, I'm fine, absolutely fine" and then walked away mumbling something to herself.

"Did I ever said she's strange??" Dev asked still following her with his eyes.

"NO, but why??"

"Because she is that!!"

***

"we got some progress!!" A male voice interrupted her thoughts.

"How much time would it take??" Radhika asked sadly.

"If I could tell, I would've done that but I really don't know how much time!!"

"I don't want to stay here anymore!! People here despise me, I can't take much hatred!!"

"You got no choice!! You brought this unto you!!"

"I never thought it was going to be worse every day!!"

"Don't be sad, honey!! You know you will be saving hundred lives by covering your face!! Once that cover is gone you know what will happen!! You know you are doing good to others, that's what you're mother wanted!! She protected you from them, now you have to follow her steps!! Stay here till everything would be ok"

"I know that!! But I'm alone, no one is here with me..you come only twice a month, just to give me money..i'm afraid if.."

"Sshh, you know I would always protect you, I will never let anything happen to you!! Before they touch you, they have to fight with me!!"

She hugged him for assurance and said "Thank you for being there for me!! I don't know what I've done if you didn't came into my life!!"

"I'm glad that I've found you!!" he said and tucked her in his warm embrace.

***

Radhika came out of her thoughts when she heard a familiar deep voice; she looked back and got astonished to see Dev. She was feeling lonely in the house, so she went for a walk outside. Upon seeing the beautiful pond, she thought of sitting there. It had been an hour or so since she had sat at the bank of the pond.

"Hello??" Dev said again.

She shifted her attention back to the pond and dryly replied "you shouldn't be talking with me!!"

Without being invited, he sat beside her.

"what the hell are you doing?? Where is your companion?? You shouldn't be here with me!!"

"and why is that so??" Dev asked.

"Because you're too handsome and I can't handle my feelings!!"

"since you aren't leaving, I'll go!!" She said and was about to go away. Dev held her hand, she gasped at his first touch.

"How dare you??"

"you won't leave until you answer my question!!" Dev said sternly.

"don't you stay here?? Haven't your companion told you about me?? Don't you know who and what I am?? Release me!!"She said while struggling to get out of his hold.

"Birju told me everything about you, but I don't believe him!!"

She stopped struggling, her eyes widened, fear engulfed in her eyes but suddenly it changed into fury.

"who are you and why are you talking to me??" she demanded.


Thank you guys for supporting me!! i hope i'll keep up to your expectations!! here's my next update..hope you'll like it enjoy!!😃 Luv you all n take care!!


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