The new creative team, few words of appreciation

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Posted: 14 years ago
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To the new creatives,

I have been thinking of writing something for the new creative team that started their work about 10 days back. When the new creative director joined the show Dev and Radhika were on the run to save Dev's life. I was pleasantly surprised when we were shown Dev's feelings of guilt for being responsible for Radhikas problems and for her sticking to him. The scene showing Dev feeding water to Radhika and then washing her feet and then telling Radhika that because of him she is in this problem was very poignant and romantic in a very subtle way. Radhika understood his insecurity and his guilt and reassured him in her own way. The next day when Radhika was dejected when not believed by her father. True to Radhikas nature she did not shout or cry but looked completely lost, because she has lost the main support of her life, the one person who has been with her through all trials and tribulations, her father. She was standing in the broken down cottage with a little girl look and this time it was Dev who became her support. He actually became the adult in this relationship and spoke to Radhika as one will reassure a little girl and told her that to give her father some time, that once he realized his mistake, he will be back and also told her to have faith in God. You all must be wondering why I am repeating scenes that have been shown more than a week back. The reason is after a long time I saw emotional closure. Both these characters were hurt by people whom they have trusted all their lives, both have broken down in their own way and in both the cases the other stood up and became the support. Even Mansaram turning his back was also shown realistically as the reaction of an emotional father who has been hoodwinked by a far more cleverer character of Rohan and although he in his anger he rejected Radhika, yet in his own way he is also protecting her.

Although both of them were being chased by Rohan and Virat, the episodes were not just about the chase, it also had romance which was of the soft and soothing kind. The chase was also used to show some character traits of Rohan that Dev was not aware of. For example, Dev never knew that Rohan is capable of brutal violence and he was dumb struck watching the level of violence when Rohan was beating up an innocent guy. It was Radhika who dragged him away from there. Both ran to save their lives and jumped on a moving bus where the audience could feel the tension that the characters are going through and when at the end Radhika managed to jump on the bus, I as a viewer heaved a sigh of relief and then started smiling seeing both Radhika and Dev at peace with each other. After saving the little girl they were given shelter in the family's house where again the lead characters came more closer to each other, got to know each other and the audience was treated to their subtle romance depicted very well by them enjoying each other's company, sharing their dreams, while the drama was carried on by Rohan in the Purohit Mansion. When Dev and Radhika were betrayed by the parents of the little girl we all were left fuming and were pleasantly surprised when the next day it was shown that it was the little girl whom Dev saved who not only returned the favour and saved Dev and Radhika but also made her parent's realize the error of their ways. Frankly I was impressed by the creatives using the daughter to teach a lesson to the parents. After that even the fight sequence also had emotional closure included in it in the form of a confrontation between Dev and Rohan where the last links between them were broken. Dev came back to take back Radhika and they landed up in the medical camp where Radhikas old friend Barkha who is a physiotherapist saved them and gave them shelter.

In this week we have been shown the further development of a close bond between Dev and Radhika, their emotional bonding with each, sharing their hopes and dreams and also their worries. With the help of Barkha they managed to reach out to daima and started on their plans to rescue dadaji. When we were shown that Barkha will be going to stay in the Purohit Bhavan, I thought that she might be going in as daima's relative and had questions in my mind that what if people related to her field recognize her...what if the police inspector who was send on a wild goose chase by her recognize her The next day again got pleasantly surprised when I realized that she coming in as physiotherapist (which she is) but one who is least interested in her work and is only after leading a happy and easy life. That answered my questions and doubts that if she comes in as lazy physiotherapist then even if her colleagues and the other doctors recognize her, it won't matter and even if the police inspector recognize her that will also not matter because that can be blamed on her scatter brain. Meanwhile in the purohit mansion, the family members had advertised in the newspaper that Dev has stolen some jewels and had run away and that was shown to back fire because the muth protested (very good work by the creatives). Since Dev has been closely linked with the muth the muths name was being harmed and as a result logically badi bahu was forced to withdraw her statement in the newspaper.

The characters in the Purohit family have also been used by the creatives to carry the story forward logically where the nature of the characters were used to provide all the twists and turns, whether it being badi bahu and her ego...Virat and his ego...Mohini and her tendency to say the right thing which results in badi bahu reacting and causing her own downfall, Padma and her insecurity. All the characters had their part to play in the logical progression of the plot. Rohan was also used to show that he is the one with the brains in this family and the one who is questioning and plotting. I was also very happy by the way the creatives used flashbacks to retell the story after the introduction of Barkha in the plot so that any new audience who have started to watch will get an idea of the story.

You all might be thinking why am I describing whatever has happened in the last few weeks. This is because I just wanted to highlight that after a long time there has been a logical flow to the story which was lacking before. We are also getting emotional closures and the characters are also projecting their emotions to the audience. It is emotions that hooks the audience to the characters. Barkha is a very good example of that until now. She is positive, helpful and a very good friend...she is someone whom most of us know ...either we know someone like her in our immediate circle or we see shades of us in her. So her story is something that the audience can relate to. The central characters of Radhika and Dev have now evolved a lot in the past 10 days or so. By projecting their feeling and emotions to the audience we are able to feel their pain, their pleasure, their joy from the smallest things in their life, their insecurities, their fear and their helplessness. Usually the questions asked by the audience are answered in the next couple of days in the episode itself and in this week humour has crept in the episodes, whether it being gentle humour in the relationship between Dev and Radhika...or Radika and Barkhs or situational comedy sort of humour in the Purohit Bhavan. So now the episodes have something for everyone...whether being drama, humour or romance and they are balanced with each other and do not over power each other. The parallel tracks are more or less well linked up and if there are loopholes they are usually solved and cleared in the next few episodes. Even small things such as Dev's wound healing up slowly has been maintained. This new creative teams hard work in presenting a cohesive story in the past few days have been supported by very good acting by the leads and the supporting characters.

I know the TRPS are low now. This new team needs time to slowly build up logical and fresh tracks. The team needs time to present their imagination to the audience and by imaginations I mean fresh ideas, fresh plots that have not been seen by the CB audience before. We all want to see a new story as CB2. I sincerely hope that the channel will give the new creative team the scope to present their ideas in their way...the channel will support them, the PH will be by their side. The show also needs promotions, not negative ones that show Dev and Radhika being separated but positive ones, intriguing ones that make the audience wait for the episodes. I know everything cannot be rosy and good in Dev and Radhikas life...so long they are together, are facing their problems together, being each other's support and strength, I as a viewer will be happy. So long a good balance is maintained and the evil do not become too overpowering. Whatever I have seen in the past 14 days or so, this new creative team has been good, all they need is some time and some patience on the part of the channel. Can we as CB audience hope for that from the channel and the production house?

Before I finish my long post (which I am hoping have not driven the readers to sleep😳), a thank you from me to the new creative team, the cast and the crew. I know that in my writing a shout a lot, but that is mainly because I care and I want the entire team to do good work.

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sigrid thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏Thanks Misti for the wonderful post...you have put in words what we all wanted to say...beautifully done...Thank you.👏
Kudos to the new creative team.👏
Edited by sigrid - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Misti, I wasn't aware that new CVs were being appointed; and yes since I watch online ! I would like to Thank them also, and I wish them a fast success in making the storyline "intrusting" and "new" for the audience.. and thus the promoters need to do their job in promising "not trajic" deposits but also good ones... :)I still have a little hope left and I wish them the best!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Misti,

Thanks for writing what I was feeling for last 10 days or so. The quality of episodes showed a marked change from the time new creative team took charge. You have already written highlights of last few days in detail, but I will reiterate them.

1. Apology of Dev to Radhika and Radhika calling Dev her KK. Then Dev repeating it next day to console Radhika when she felt hurt because of her father's actions.

2. Dev buying that blue dress for Radhika as a fantasy of his long-lost dream - that of seeing his dream girl that way.

3. Dev's stunned realization of Rohan's true nature when he saw his viciousness.

4. The whole bus sequence where their chemistry was so evident. Beautiful scene when finally Dev manages to bring Radhika inside and they are just holding onto each other. Then Dev's way of protecting Radhika in that bus from the lecherous guy without saying a word or hitting him.

5. Pleasantly surprised that they showed good deed of Dev helped him in the end when the farmer's daughter helped him in turn. Also, previous creative team wouldn't have bothered but showing that little girl's lesson in a child's innocent way was too good.

6. The whole fight sequence where Dev's body language and controlled fury was so nice. If only that episode was advertised properly.

7. Introduction of Barkha as this positive mature character and maturing of Dev to an intelligent person who is using his brains to fight back. He is macho when he needs to be and leaves the fight if needed for survival.

8. Finally the beautiful development of this relationship that started with awkwardness and has moved to a passionate and comfortable level where both can share things with each other and understand each other;s moods.

I really hope that PH and the channel give this team and this track to develop so that the ratings would go up. It takes time for audience and ratings to come up again especially when the trust has been broken so many times. But they will come provided the PH and the channel doesn't go for short-term profits. Here the actors are excellent and now the script is great. The pace is also very good. But it needs support from the PH and channel to sustain. I hope it is provided.

But good job, new creatives. The show is logical and consistent now.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful Misti👏
thanks for opening this post...

u know when they showed the promo, which disappointed many of us, then it made me to write the "Ummeed ke chirag" out of frustration and then after seeing the positive track, Dev being sahi salamath, i was really overwhealmed and wanted to applaud CV's for giving us that👏.
but the thought keep postponing...
but glad u opened this post.


My appreciations to CV's:

It is really refreshing to see CB turning into a positive note...


The drama, where Dev gets shot eventually turned out with big surprize with so logical twist and good pace in the story, unlike the promo which scared the hell out of the viewers...

I really give u a big applaude for this that u changed the track with good positive note showing RaDev winning the battle at that moment, which was a very big acheivement for them... and after that facing all the problems, and then they finally finding a place for themselves with the help of Barkha.👏 ( with exsisting all the logics)

and Barkha's entry was handled in a right way👏 into RaDev's life and her entry into PH...all the process which was handled with logic...i really applaude the script writer here👏 he/she done a fantastic job. 👏
the highlight was
first step: Barkha's entry on the word of doc👍🏼, which maheswari couldnot even suspect.
second step: Maheswari was forced to appoint because of the pressure of PF( mainly padma), the idea of RaDev.👏
third step: the team work of RaDev, barkha, daima...even though RaDev from outside the PH...which is very enjoyable and entertaining to watch.


this is when Radev ran out from PH: my thoughts...

we viewers dont leave a chance to see RaDev together, when the track of RaDev elloping was shown, i jumped with joy...and just wanted to watch how was their journey going to be...but somewhere in corner of my heart it felt, were RaDev doing the right thing? they didnt have any destination at that point, they had so many issues to handle, and they were in vanvas( hiding from everybody), nothing clear at that point...then how they'll over come the problems... but again, still i felt that track was essential for RaDev, that lead to the immense closure of RaDev's bonding. And the dialogue u used there " naye rishthe sawarne ki liye saath mein waqt bithana bahut zarrori hotha hai"👏 ( okay cant remember the exact dialogue shown) it was the platform for the track when RaDev ran away....i just waited for, how this track would turn out...but then the promo ... which shattered my hope...but thanks to u, u didnt let us down...RaDev were still on track👍🏼 👏...and then their lovey-dovey moments ( a big thanks for that🤗 😳) and again Barkha's entry.


right at the point, everything at its place...
i wish to see CB continuing with the same pace and logic as it is now past this week.
thank u.😊




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much Misti.
This thread helped me to relate to the current track, to some extend. And so glad to read that it is going at its best. Hope they will continue to give us this flow with substantial role for every charactor to move the story forward.
Once again thanks
Devika.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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totally agree.Thanks for the wonderful post. I am liking the show alot...main reason radev are together and fighting everything together...second i agree that other characters are playing important roles to move story forward and are not wasted like previously...story flow is very logical ...Other point that you raised is about closure to the story/emotion...which finally is being shown...

i am liking the interaction between barkha and dev and radhika...appears practical...

I hope zee does not mess with the show again because this show should go on ...hopefully kanha would keep creatives upper story blessed and keep the CB going...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Misti, great post. You have echoed beautifully what many CB lovers have been feeling lately.

I suggested to Devika to make sure she look at the last 10 episodes of CB2 in her post yesterday because these episodes are not to be missed.

The trps are low but at this stage of developing a fresh storyline it shouldnt be the main focus, also i am really amazed at the indian audience what really they like to see????

The episodes have been great but still trps r low...😕

To the new creative team, thank you for a job well done! Keep it up...👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Misti Beautifully written review...
Every steps have been taken logically. Even Barkha's entry in PB was logically executed. We all thought she will not enter as Physical therapist but she did. Even Daima has been used appropriately. Mohini's one liners have deep meaning to it that makes PB's react to it. I liked the way they used Mohini & Viraat's relationship.
Radev conversations about their worries were very well executed. On Thursday's episode...very important in terms of logic...Dev says to Radhika...well I said to Barkha that when we will need money...they will let her know, but they need money now...and he goes out to find work. Now days it is very hard to find the right jobs bc of economy. So many people out of work. Dev willing to find any type of job to support his family. Radhika also seemed like she is not the person who would sit around. She may have gone to find some work so that she can feed her husband. Every steps creators have taken logically...
All the best to new creative team...hope they continue to maintain that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sigrid

👏Thanks Misti for the wonderful post...you have put in words what we all wanted to say...beautifully done...Thank you.👏

Kudos to the new creative team.👏

You are welcome Sigrid. Yeh I have been thinking about writing this...this new creative director is good.I have seen the directors work in the earlier episodes of PR and liked it. Here too the logic has come back in the story and the best part is we are getting emotional closures which are very important for the audience to let go of one track and accept the next one as a logical progression to the next step in the story.Otherwise the audience is left with the feeling of that something is missing.

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