~*~Dream Girl~ *~AVINA FF#2~*~Thread:1 ~*~ Thanks* - Page 87

di i love this ff so much..❤️
wow now Dev is waiting to see Rad..
same to Rad also...
coool yaar wow..
hey Rad's sweety Devs buava Some times I can't understand her..may be It will come out latter..
di waiting for next update and hope marriage will go fine..
Love your updates and waiting for the next update...👍🏼

Yippee!! our prince is back 🥳 lovely di... black beauty horse so every thing is coming ture of nani story our prince coming in black beauty grt...liked surender excitment to find the prefect one for this son.... sushma's advice n wish was touching... loved the way dev tried to see radhika in surrounding nature n he himself behaving like her...

lovely update...thx for the pm

Beautiful update--
Loved Radhika's haldi ceremony--Dev applying haldi to her (in his imagination)..reminded me of CB1..
So our prince will be on a black horse to take his princess away...
Loved Sushma-Dev's conversation and Sushma talking to him about Radhika and her dream world and her love for her prince--I know these words will be back later in your FF---something Dev will remember some day (just my hunch)...

Your FF is flowing very nicely--love the interplay between nature and emotions..How both Dev and Radhika have changed----Dev is liking the things Radhika used to do--climbing the trees, sitting along the river bank, playing with the fern--all these little things making him part of her world;... and how your Radhika has changed, ever so subtly,--still living in her dream world where only her prince exists and his love for her...and she is willing to follow him where he takes her---her eyes only see him, her mind only feels him and her smile is only for him---

But to really feel the depth of emotions in your FF and appreciate the nuances--I had to read it all the way from the beginning and I realized, there are so many things that I had missed from conversation between different people, description of the nature and how it related to the moment...

I loved your first FF--and I love this one even more...

Waiting for tomorrow and more so for the rest of the story to unfold...

Dev is back but both are waiting to meet each other desperately...Liked surender is serching for black horse and trying to fulfill his son's wish....Sushma's talk was touching and Dev understands her feelings to Radhika and Dev..... Loved Dev's dream like he applies haldi on Radhika's face....That made me remember the haldi scene in CB😉...

yes yes yes diiiiiiiiiiiii dev is back omg im so happy to gd haiiii the next part will be the wedding cant wait now update soon and thanks 4 the pm

wonderful update , finally prince is back to take his butterfly with him forever ... eagerness is growing to see each other ... the way u make them sharing their happiness with nature is beyond description , sushma's talk with dev show her happiness & her concern for them esp. about dream's of radhika ... THANKS .

Devika very interesting the haldi part the parents wanting to go along with their daughter and then Sushma Dev interaction😃 then the black horse search by Devs father parents want to do everything for their children😊 waiting for ur update today by the time u updated I had to start for the work and then during the lunch break I had to post SBS and then just got busy .

Thank u di for the lovely update... Glad that u've taken a small leap in time to directly give us the haldi function update.. I was really getting impatient to see Dev and Radhika together... :-)