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misti73

@misti73

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Posted: 14 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: sigrid
OMG Misti,...tears re coming ...you have written so beautifully the feeling of radhika...and the picture...wow...
( I knew u will write on this picture as u had ask Niha to put it picture gallery)

Thanks Sigrid. Yes you did guess correctly. When I saw the precap I knew that I have got the topic for my next poem.

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misti73

@misti73

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Posted: 14 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: -Shankar-
Beautiful poem Misti. very well written...
loved it, u described Radhika's longing for Dev so vividly. 😍

Thanks Shankar...well it was all in the expressions and in her eyses.😃

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misti73

@misti73

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Posted: 14 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: Ansa786
Misti Di,

I am at loss of words with your poems ... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

The whole scene in Mansaram's house was very good and I particularly liked the peeping bit ... Rubina's expressions from sadness in the beginning and then happiness at Dev's words was just perfect. You have given meaning to that scene thru your poem.

Thankyou for asking about my fasting. They are just going okay ... 😊 ... I come on to the forum to pass some time whenever I feel hungry. 😳

Thanks Kiddo.😳...The scene inMansaram's house was very good...good concept, well shot and well acted. That was a good team effort. It was not that difficult to write this poem...I just followed Rubina's expressions as Radhika.

Good to know that your fasting is going well.So the forum takes your mind off food...😉

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#444

This is for you misti 👏 👏

Yes,she wished for her kk to be her voice and he was,he spoke her truth ,her pain,her need!
She would never answer back to shanti cause thats her nature...kind and obedient...but time has come for her to hear that voice more often and then she wont have to just peek from the back to admire how he fights for but she has to walk from behind the d oor and stand by him and all those emotions like chains which are holding her, and you described them in you poem,must go away..very beautiful work,thank you for sharing it with us...

Edited by Myra.nelly - 14 years ago

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laxmi_avinafan

@laxmi_avinafan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#445

Misti

loved poem with Radhika's expression ! Rubina is brillant actress and in that picture she was looking very young girl like little child , so innocent with tears and also pain in her eyes and we could see charm eaily on her face , capturing also was very good on ruby's that picture and you have written very well on Ruby's picture .we can say only Ruby was saying everything without spoke through her picture 😳.

Edited by laxmi_avinafan - 14 years ago

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Niharika

@Nihariikaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: misti73

The voice for whom my heart longs for

Who is this whose voice I hear

It seems to be owned by someone near

Is it part of a name whom my heart beats for

Or is it a dream that might turn sour

The voice pulls me towards itself

And I cannot stop but see for myself

The face to whom this voice belong

For I think it might be the one for whom I long.

Since all day I have listened to derision

That has risen from years of fission

Due to circumstances that are beyond my clout

Yet as always I am the one at whom others hit out

Sometimes I wonder will it ever end

Or will it continue since I cannot openly defend

My right to choose how I breathe

Hence my yearning for that voice that senses my need.

With trepidation I peeked without letting my presence be known

Because I was afraid that my mind might disown

To glimpse the presence of the face that is part of me

For I was filled with doubt as regards to what I would see

But my fears were put to rest

And my happiness rose to the crest

For I saw the face to which the voice belonged

And it was the one for whom my heart has always longed.

(c) MistiB

Misti 🤗

WOW, just beautiful.

U went so deep into the scene, and wrote the discription of Radh's heart at that few secs.
U described it so beautiful.

Ur poem is as beautiful as Radh's innocent look.
very beautiful.

thanks misti.

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Cristina Hriscu

@instcris

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Posted: 14 years ago

#447

Extraordinarily sensitive lyrics, Misti. You play with such skill, Radhika feelings of that moment of need for her mind: sadness caused by the quarrel between adoptive parents

< Since all day I have listened to derision

That has risen from years of fission

Due to circumstances that are beyond my clout>

and Dev's coming, which caused him great joy, knowing that the man who belongs to the long

< The voice pulls me towards itself

And I cannot stop but see for myself

The face to whom this voice belong

For I think it might be the one for whom I long.>.

From her corner, hidden in the shadows < With trepidation I peeked without letting my presence be known>, Radhika fears were wasted, and happiness filled his heart

< But my fears were put to rest

And my happiness rose to the crest>.

Bravo, Misti, your poems are true insights of the characters loved by us, you empathy with each extraordinarily well.

P.S. I read that too Rubina writes poetry, does she published some poetry?

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#448

Cris,superb pic dear...its amazing the way her teary eyes are shown,so innocent,like a child...amazing work,i love it...

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neerjashingla

@Neerjaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly
Cris,superb pic dear...its amazing the way her teary eyes are shown,so innocent,like a child...amazing work,i love it...

Agree with you Myra , Cris has done wonderful job with this picture , its only her eyes , with sheen of tears stays with you , there is innocence in her ...Then Misti has stilled that look in her poetry ...

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neerjashingla

@Neerjaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: instcris
Extraordinarily sensitive lyrics, Misti. You play with such skill, Radhika feelings of that moment of need for her mind: sadness caused by the quarrel between adoptive parents
< Since all day I have listened to derision

That has risen from years of fission

Due to circumstances that are beyond my clout>
and Dev's coming, which caused him great joy, knowing that the man who belongs to the long
< The voice pulls me towards itself

And I cannot stop but see for myself

The face to whom this voice belong

For I think it might be the one for whom I long.>.
From her corner, hidden in the shadows < With trepidation I peeked without letting my presence be known>, Radhika fears were wasted, and happiness filled his heart
< But my fears were put to rest

And my happiness rose to the crest>.
Bravo, Misti, your poems are true insights of the characters loved by us, you empathy with each extraordinarily well.
P.S. I read that too Rubina writes poetry, does she published some poetry?