Thoughts(poems)4th August2011-Radhika page 55 - Page 44

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansa786

Misti Di,

🤗 ❤️ 🤗
Missed you ... 😳
Read both of your poems ... like we say, expressions alone say thousand words and you have very beautifully expressed it thru your poems ... very touching. It was a shame that we did not get to hear these dialogues from Dev. But Avinash's expressions were just brilliant and spot-on. 👏

kiddo you are back!! How is your dasting going on. Hope that you are looking after yourself.
Thanks for liking my poems...yes it is a shame that we did not get to hear of Devs anguish. Avinash is doing a brilliant job.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sigrid

Kya Baat hai misti...you have it all...yes the poem for Dev's feeling and the pictures..say it all..Superb


Thanks Sigrid...well I had to write something...his expressions were shouting of his pain. I am glad that you liked what I wrote.
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Posted: 14 years ago


The voice for whom my heart longs for

Who is this whose voice I hear

It seems to be owned by someone near

Is it part of a name whom my heart beats for

Or is it a dream that might turn sour

The voice pulls me towards itself

And I cannot stop but see for myself

The face to whom this voice belong

For I think it might be the one for whom I long.

Since all day I have listened to derision

That has risen from years of fission

Due to circumstances that are beyond my clout

Yet as always I am the one at whom others hit out

Sometimes I wonder will it ever end

Or will it continue since I cannot openly defend

My right to choose how I breathe

Hence my yearning for that voice that senses my need.

With trepidation I peeked without letting my presence be known

Because I was afraid that my mind might disown

To glimpse the presence of the face that is part of me

For I was filled with doubt as regards to what I would see

But my fears were put to rest

And my happiness rose to the crest

For I saw the face to which the voice belonged

And it was the one for whom my heart has always longed.
(c) MistiB
Edited by misti73 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Misti,...tears re coming ...you have written so beautifully the feeling of radhika...and the picture...wow...
( I knew u will write on this picture as u had ask Niha to put it picture gallery)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful poem Misti. very well written...
loved it, u described Radhika's longing for Dev so vividly. 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
Misti Di,
I am at loss of words with your poems ... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
The whole scene in Mansaram's house was very good and I particularly liked the peeping bit ... Rubina's expressions from sadness in the beginning and then happiness at Dev's words was just perfect. You have given meaning to that scene thru your poem.
Thankyou for asking about my fasting. They are just going okay ... 😊 ... I come on to the forum to pass some time whenever I feel hungry. 😳
Edited by Ansa786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Misti--a beautiful ode to a beautiful moment-..

Rubina was fantastic in this scene-----her expression spoke of the yearning with a glimmer of hope and happiness...the moment was the highlight of the episode for me and you have so beautifully put it into words-----Thank You
Edited by radhika5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Misti you have beautifully given words to the expressions of Radhika , with sheen of tears in her eyes ...Radhika in that picture with your poem stays with you ...Thank you misti for writing such lovely poem ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Misti ... a very beautiful and poignant poem ... love the way you write

i wish zee would use this picture of radhika with dev standing outside ... love it

both the poem and the picture will stay with me for a long time ... just like your earlier one on dev
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Posted: 14 years ago
Misti what a lovely sad poem for Radhika and I liked the last two lines very much

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