Thoughts(poems)4th August2011-Radhika page 55 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Ansa786

Beautiful, Misti Di ... 👏 ... love the depth in which you express a character's feelings or emotions in various situations .... whether it is for Radhika or Dev ... glad that you wrote for Dev this time.

Am I no one that you gave me away

Didn't even once your mothers heart sway

Why didn't you keep me by your side

Instead of letting me flow with the rising tide

Didn't you once not think that I will be so alone

Without you by my side since, I am your own.

You thought that letting me go to pastures green

In a world that everything shines with a sheen

Will make my life better than what I will get being with you

But did you ever consider it might not be true

That all the things that dazzle have a heart of gold

Sometimes the luster hides the hollowness in murky folds.

Your one act tossed me in the darkness that no child should know

And I grew up thirsting for the love that did not ever flow

I was made to believe that my existence is not my own

Instead it belongs to others to whom you have given my soul

What was my fault that you let me go away

Was I such a burden that made you think this way.

All my life I have yearned to have you by my side

So that when things get tough you will hold me so that I don't slide

But whenever I stretched my hands thinking that you might be there

All I found was an emptiness that I could never share

How could you think that I won't feel alone

When every child needs its mother who is his own.

Originally posted by: misti73

Thoughts of an abandoned soul

Am I no one that you gave me away

Didn't even once your mothers heart sway

Why didn't you keep me by your side

Instead of letting me flow with the rising tide

Didn't you once not think that I will be so alone

Without you by my side since, I am your own.

You thought that letting me go to pastures green

In a world that everything shines with a sheen

Will make my life better than what I will get being with you

But did you ever consider it might not be true

That all the things that dazzle have a heart of gold

Sometimes the luster hides the hollowness in murky folds.

Your one act tossed me in the darkness that no child should know

And I grew up thirsting for the love that did not ever flow

I was made to believe that my existence is not my own

Instead it belongs to others to whom you have given my soul

What was my fault that you let me go away

Was I such a burden that made you think this way.

All my life I have yearned to have you by my side

So that when things get tough you will hold me so that I don't slide

But whenever I stretched my hands thinking that you might be there

All I found was an emptiness that I could never share

How could you think that I won't feel alone

When every child needs its mother who is his own.

Originally posted by: why6

Misti, this is awesome. You captured all of Dev's pain and this photo is perfect. If only we had a scene where he could have expressed these thoughts to Radhika. I am hoping that we have a scene where these thoughts are expressed. Chaya has done injustice to Dev even though in everything else she was one who lost everything.

Originally posted by: misti73

Thoughts of an abandoned soul

Am I no one that you gave me away

Didn't even once your mothers heart sway

Why didn't you keep me by your side

Instead of letting me flow with the rising tide

Didn't you once not think that I will be so alone

Without you by my side since, I am your own.

You thought that letting me go to pastures green

In a world that everything shines with a sheen

Will make my life better than what I will get being with you

But did you ever consider it might not be true

That all the things that dazzle have a heart of gold

Sometimes the luster hides the hollowness in murky folds.

Your one act tossed me in the darkness that no child should know

And I grew up thirsting for the love that did not ever flow

I was made to believe that my existence is not my own

Instead it belongs to others to whom you have given my soul

What was my fault that you let me go away

Was I such a burden that made you think this way.

All my life I have yearned to have you by my side

So that when things get tough you will hold me so that I don't slide

But whenever I stretched my hands thinking that you might be there

All I found was an emptiness that I could never share

How could you think that I won't feel alone

When every child needs its mother who is his own.