Thoughts(poems)4th August2011-Radhika page 55 - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: neerjashingla

Misti you have beautifully woven emotions in your thoughts about Dev and his dream...There is pathos , yearning ,fear for shattering of his dream and hope for the future....Thanks Misti always a pleasure to read your thoughts whether in prose or poetry....As Angie mentioned would like him to rise above it and do something to fulfill his dreams....



Thanks Neerja for liking the poem. What I felt I wrote it down...thats what I usually do.......I write what I feel, whether poetry or prose.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: misti73



Thanks Chalhov. Dev does tell his thoughts to dadaji and in front of amma he sits mutely hoping that she will read his expressions but amma does not........well you got your statue scene today.😉



Well I was watching that and remembering what I posted😉😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: radhika5

WOW!!! Misti
Very beautiful



Thanks Radhika5. Glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ekta_bajaj

WOOOOOOOOOOOW
what a poem completely describinghis situation
u were saying what should he do,he should definitely tell.are rohan ko pyaar thoda na hai usse ,use koi aur mil jaayegi na.use kya fark padta hai



Thanks Ekta....well whether Dev tells or does not tell depends on the creatives.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haven't seen the entire episode but did see the statue scene. His silence was good in that scene. But hope they see him coming out of the depression when he again sees Radhika and decides to fight for her. Don't want Radhika to do the entire fight. The initial fight is hers now as she has to convince Dev that they are meant to be together (repeat of Dev's actions in CB1 unfortunately as they seem to be going towards it). But do show Dev standing with her when she publicly opposes her marriage (that is the melodrama creatives are going towards with all the mistaken identities etc.).
Again don't want Chanda and Chirkut's actions to be sole reasons for the stopping of the wedding and do not want to see marriage in ghungats or sehras with Dev absent from the venue.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: why3

Haven't seen the entire episode but did see the statue scene. His silence was good in that scene. But hope they see him coming out of the depression when he again sees Radhika and decides to fight for her. Don't want Radhika to do the entire fight. The initial fight is hers now as she has to convince Dev that they are meant to be together (repeat of Dev's actions in CB1 unfortunately as they seem to be going towards it). But do show Dev standing with her when she publicly opposes her marriage (that is the melodrama creatives are going towards with all the mistaken identities etc.).

Again don't want Chanda and Chirkut's actions to be sole reasons for the stopping of the wedding and do not want to see marriage in ghungats or sehras with Dev absent from the venue.

Well if they take it logically then the depression should be there for some time but they have also shown him waiting to break loose of the restrictions........so it is basically should be a fight between these two emotions in him and a catalyst will be needed to break him free.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful poem, Misti ... depicting Dev's pain, shattering of his dreams, etc ... but also hope for him to rise above that ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful, Misti Di ... 👏 ... love the depth in which you express a character's feelings or emotions in various situations .... whether it is for Radhika or Dev ... glad that you wrote for Dev this time.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: misti73

Well if they take it logically then the depression should be there for some time but they have also shown him waiting to break loose of the restrictions........so it is basically should be a fight between these two emotions in him and a catalyst will be needed to break him free.

The problem is that they minimize the emotions when needed and suddenly from one emotion to another without any reason. So logical progression for Dev would be depression, withdrawal from Radhika, unable to resist her when he meets with her, starts coming out of his shell when she also sheds her aloofness from him and finally comes out of all the brainwashing and starts thinking of Radhika's dreams too and fights with her. The catalyst probably would be seeing her all alone in her struggle and also seeing her as an outsider in her family who is being forced into something that is making her miserable.

Similarly, logical progression for Radhika would be initial euphoria that KK and Dev are the same, confusion when that doesn't seem to be true, a sense of hurt and loss when she sees Dev withdrawing from her and acting like a different person, self realization that if it comes to choosing between childhood beliefs (Rohan as KK) and an adult Dev then she would choose Dev and so on.

But when they regress characters back and forth, then it is hard to predict. They showed Radhika's joy and awe at the acceptance of her mother, but then there was no betrayal shown at Shanti's deceit. Neither was any groW*H in her actions.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rajsri

Beautiful poem, Misti ... depicting Dev's pain, shattering of his dreams, etc ... but also hope for him to rise above that ...


Thanks Rajsri........well for me life is based on hope, thats the one thing that usually keeps a person living even when face with very tough situations in life......so thats why decided to leave it open ended.......the hope is always there but it is upto a person whether he or she will decide to do something about it or just leave it.

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