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misti73

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: rajsri
Lovely poem, Misti 👏 ..

... Rubina did an awesome job conveying those emotions

Thanks Rajsri........yes her expression were very poignant and were with me for some time after the episode finished.

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misti73

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

isti,

Your poem is beautiful and captures the essence of the boat scene perfectly. The emotions expressed in the poem goes very well with the song they played.

Really happy to see this thread back and am glad that you continued with the previous thread.

Thanks Angie

I did think about another Thread then though why not continue with Radhikas journey.......a different path that she might choose this time. It was these expression that made me write....

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Angie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#353

Misti,

I know CB1 for you was always Radhika's journey. It started for me the same way but I lost my sympathy for Radhika somewhere after she confessed her feelings to Dev and it did not reappear until after she moved to PB after the second wedding. In fact your analysis made me see some of her actions from a POV of an abused person later on. Of course they ping-ponged her character so much especially in June-August 2009 (pre-engagement period) that she came across as a selfish person whose priority was to appear great in eyes of the society. For me that was not an essence of Radha. So I preferred your analysis over what they showed. Unfortunately, they never showed a proper groW*H and a proper realization on Radhika's part of her actions. It all became those ritualistic punishments for something which she didn't do.

I am liking her characterization a lot in CB2 and she is my favorite over Dev even though I do feel sympathetic to his character too. Hope they don't mess up her character later on as they did for Dev during the Abhay track.

In any case your poem fits her characterization perfectly.

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neerjashingla

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Posted: 14 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: why3
Misti,

especially in June-August 2009 (pre-engagement period) that she came across as a selfish person whose priority was to appear great in eyes of the society. For me that was not an essence of Radha.

Why do you think that she wanted to appear great in the eyes of society,will you please explain Angie....

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misti73

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Posted: 14 years ago

#355

Just felt like writing something based on Radhika wandering in her thoughts.........

Quandry

Will the search ever end

Will a broken heart ever mend

Why do I always yearn for someone

When I get repetitively told that there is no one.

Are my thoughts only dreams

One that I thought I felt but to others it seems

That they are nebulous feelings of times long gone

But to me they are the essence that completes me as one.

Why are others always telling me

That what I believe is like a boundless sea

That has no end in its unending optimism

Because to them my thoughts have no realism.

But yet the heart still holds dreams

That makes me live life although it may seem

That I am caught up in the years long departed

Waiting for the one from whom I have been parted.

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Putija

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Posted: 14 years ago

#356

Will a broken heart ever mend

Why do I always yearn for someone

But to me they are the essence that completes me as one.

That I am caught up in the years long departed

Waiting for the one from whom I have been parted.

Beautifully expressed Misti That scene was well done and Rubina acted very well.

Ur poems touch the very essence of Radhika and the scene

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radhika5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#357

beautiful poems--words are very meaningful..and touches the heart..

Rubina looks beautiful and her expressions are priceless and your words enhance her beauty..and brings soul to her expressions.....

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neerjashingla

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Posted: 14 years ago

#358

Misti you write so beautifully .....You can feel Radhika,s yearning, her pain, her sadness., as if she is someone of your own.....While reading your poem Radhika,s face comes to your mind and it makes you sad...Your poems are a pleasure to read .....Thanks Misti for expressing Radhika,s inner thoughts in poetic language....Why your poem moved me , do not understand....Thanks anyway

Edited by neerjashingla - 14 years ago

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ChinadollTwo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#359

Musti - Just discovered this thread of yours. I love, love your poem.. "will this broken heart ever mend .... waiting for tge one from whom I have been parted"

Chalhov & Neerjashingla expressed my thoughts about your poem. Keep it coming! Why don't you publish your poems? When I have time, I'll read your poems & thoughts from page 1. I'm definately behind!

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misti73

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Posted: 14 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: chalhov
Will a broken heart ever mend

Why do I always yearn for someone
But to me they are the essence that completes me as one.
That I am caught up in the years long departed

Waiting for the one from whom I have been parted.
Beautifully expressed Misti That scene was well done and Rubina acted very well.
Ur poems touch the very essence of Radhika and the scene

Thank you Chalhov.......As I was watching her yesterday I felt I should write something.......so wrote this in my lunch break today.

Rubina was good in that scene....they should just give her the scenario and let her emote.....The always spoil the effect by giving her crappy dialogues.......the temple scene on monday was good but they spoilt it by giving her the silly gulal dialogue.

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