Thoughts(poems)4th August2011-Radhika page 55 - Page 35

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tilashini

MISTI !!!!!!!!!!! *BOUGHS* HATS OF* hahahhaa...😆 👍🏼
loved the way u expressed it.....im missing my janu....................😭



Thanks Tigu.........you have finally got your janu back now.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
I did think about starting a new thread of poems but decided to continue with this as a journey of Radhika.........a different journey. I have been itching to write a poem on Radhika when she hears Devs flute in the boat and when she follows the sound of his flute in the college.........so here it is.........

Sounds of Music

Who is this whose calls I hear

That makes me question is someone near

The memories of melody heard in times of yore

Lets me to wonder whether it is the same as before

The strains of music that makes time stand still

And propels me to marvel what is this that I feel

Is it just a tune that is pleasing to the ear

Or is there more to it, something that is dear

All I sense is that it touches emotions deep in me

That people who are around cannot see

Are these the recollections of happenings long ago

Which have become a part of me that I cannot forgo

The figments of memory that have become my essence

Are those the thoughts that are making me lose my sense

Is it that need that is making me believe that the calls I hear

Might belong to the person whom I have always held dear.



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Posted: 14 years ago

All I sense is that it touches emotions deep in me

That people who are around cannot see

Are these the recollections of happenings long ago

Which have become a part of me that I cannot forgo


Is it that need that is making me believe that the calls I hear

Might belong to the person whom I have always held dear.

Misti

Lovely thoughts and feelings of Radhika for her KK 😃 Its been a long time since u wrote poetry
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Posted: 14 years ago
Misti Di,
You have beautifully expressed Radhika's feelings and attraction towards the sound of the flute played by Dev in your poem. 👏 Both scenes were beautifully done. You are gifted when it comes to poetry and expression. Keep them coming.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very beautifully you have expressed Radhika,s thoughts....You can very well imagine these thoughts going through Radhika.s mind when she listens flute playing..... you are really gifted with Expressing your thoughts whether in prose or poetry ....Misti Thanks again for beautiful poem...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

All I sense is that it touches emotions deep in me

That people who are around cannot see

Are these the recollections of happenings long ago

Which have become a part of me that I cannot forgo


Is it that need that is making me believe that the calls I hear

Might belong to the person whom I have always held dear.

Misti

Lovely thoughts and feelings of Radhika for her KK 😃 Its been a long time since u wrote poetry


Thank you Chalhov. It has been a long time since I have written a poetry on Radhika........I do write poems frequently but they are about other stuff. Guess I needed Rubina on the screen as Radhika to start writing here again.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansa786

Misti Di,

You have beautifully expressed Radhika's feelings and attraction towards the sound of the flute played by Dev in your poem. 👏 Both scenes were beautifully done. You are gifted when it comes to poetry and expression. Keep them coming.


Thank you Kiddo. Although I was joking about the stones in the boat scene......I did like the scene. It was beautifully executed and I liked the expressions on Rubinas face as Radhika when she was listening to the music and trying to see who was playing the flute.......that made me write this poem.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely poem, Misti 👏 ..

... Rubina did an awesome job conveying those emotions

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: neerjashingla

very beautifully you have expressed Radhika,s thoughts....You can very well imagine these thoughts going through Radhika.s mind when she listens flute playing..... you are really gifted with Expressing your thoughts whether in prose or poetry ....Misti Thanks again for beautiful poem...


Thanks Neerja. Radhikas expression prompted me to write this poem. Some of the lines came when I was watching the boat scene, just needed some time to string my thoughts into a poem. I am glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Misti,

Your poem is beautiful and captures the essence of the boat scene perfectly. The emotions expressed in the poem goes very well with the song they played.

Really happy to see this thread back and am glad that you continued with the previous thread.

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