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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 19:
Sameera quickly wipes her tears and then moves outside her room and walks away...she takes her cell and calls up Sapna...
Veer would have just thought of moving inside her room when she walks away....he feels sad...he has two daughters.....one is constantly bent on hurting the other and the other is unaware of everything.

Meanwhile, at the Sarpanch's house, Farhan and Tanvi and Abhi would be just moving in...settling in and getting used to their surroundings....carrying out investigation.....and making reports.

On the other hand, when sameera would have run from her room, she would have met a person....in fact Sameera clashes with a woman....she would be none other than Sunaina.
Sunaina gets angry seeing a girl clash against her and would catch Sameera by her hand and shout at her:" Kya dekh ke nahi jaa sakthi? Are you mad?"
Sameera would have fallen...she slowly gets up and stares at the woman......
Sunaina brushes her dress where Sameera would have clashed against her.....as if Sameera was some untouchable or something....
Sameera looks a little hurt and turns away, when Shikha comes there and meets her mother:" Maa toh aapne end main Sameera ko dekh hi liya...I was telling you mama...she is Sameera."
Shikha says this with a look of disgust on her face.
Sunaina now looks at Sameera staring at her....yes she is Anuradha's daughter....as she looks so much like her....so this was also Veer's daughter...

Sunaina gets angry at the very sight of sameera...she pushes Sameera to one side and walks away, leaving Sameera all to her self...
Sameera is damn fed up with everything taht is going on in her life....she has had enough...too much..everything seems to be going outta control..she is just frustrated.

Sameera walks behind Sunaina...and then says:" Excuse"
Sunaina turns behind and sees her:" Kya?"
Sameera:" Aap ko kya lagatah hain....hello..I am also a human being....ok..so dont u dare try to push me...I know what to do with people like you who are so bossy....if only our country could have respectable officers' wives!"
Sunaina is outraged...this girl has the cheek to insult her in front of everybody? How dare she?
But just then, Veer comes to the point and sees Sunaina there...he talks to her and leads her away.

Sameera takes a very big decision taht evening....she is leaving for Bhallar...she has had enough of everything...no more...she is an officer and her country comes first...she will do whatever required to save her country...the mission will also provide as a way for her to forget her thoughts.

Will cont soon........
PRECAP: Mission Bhallar

Aranya




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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
please update it soon
reallya nice one
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
it is becoming interesting day by day
cont fast
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
Fantabulous!!!! I seriously do not have more words for your praises, so as usual. Please continue fast!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 20:
Sameera reaches Bhallar early in the morning....she walks up to the Sarpanch's house and greets him saying that she is a government officer doing census and suvey and would kindly like a place to stay.
The sarpanch looks at her with a smile and calls her inside...she walks up to him and produces her card to him.
While Sameera would have been walking in, Abhi would ahve just come into the hall....he was surprised to see Sameera there...why her time ogf grounding has two days left then what the hell is she doing here....That girl must have defied Veer sir again...

Sameera gives the card and the Sarpanch asks her name...she says Manisha Pandey. The sarpanch looks at her closely...he then tells her:" Pandey? Lekin tum toh Rahul Mishra ki patni hoon?"
Sameera:" Kya? Patni...main kiski patni hoon?"
Sarpanch:" Rahum Mishra..."
The sarpanch saya this and points towards Abhi...Sameera turns and looks at Abhi a look of shock on her face!!! 😳
Abhi undersatnds that there has been some mistake in the card...he immediately walks up to her and hugs her.

Sameera is angry...who the hell is this Rahul and how dare he hug her....Sameera breaks free from the hug and looks carefully at the face of Rahul....he is Abhi!
Abhi then tells the Sarpanch that Sameera was at her mom's house because she was not well and now has come to join him....Sarpanch asks why she coulnot recognise him...Abhi tells him taht she doesnot know her husband's name and that they are newly wed!!!
The sarpanch accepts it!!

At the base, veer sir is annoyed...that Sameera has left and run off...he will punish her after the mission....he will see to that he does punish his daughter when she does a mistake!

Abhi and Sameera go inside the house...Abhi takes her to room where all his stuff is thrown about...SAmeera asks him if she can have another room....Abhi says:" Face it Sameera....Indian society expects husband and wife to saty in the same room"
Sameera:" But I am not yr wife!"
Abhi:" Ecven I am not yr husband ....lekin this is it."

Will cont soon.........

Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
wow its really amazing after reading it i remembered those moments when iqbal and janhvi were mr and mrs mishra and the cute fights which they used to have
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: akshayshenoy

wow its really amazing after reading it i remembered those moments when iqbal and janhvi were mr and mrs mishra and the cute fights which they used to have

Yeah I am writing this part of the FF keeping in mind those cute scenes...i really do hope I am writing them well and doing a good job....😉

Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
Hi all.....
It will take me a few days to update the FF's ...please bare with me and do wait for me...i will update them soon...its just that college starts next week...So I will not be able to update on a two - day basis but will be updating on a four- day basis.... 😛

Thanks for understanding...... 😛
Luv all of you and yr replies.... 😳
Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice one please update it soon


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Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I seriously have no more words left to justify your Fanfic. Its amazing yaar, please continue fast!!!! 👏

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