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Soujanya

@Soujanya_ROSID

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Posted: 4 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: MessyMind

Soujanya akka will give OS🤣

When I told 🤔🤔🤔🤔

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Soujanya

@Soujanya_ROSID

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Posted: 4 years ago

#1002

Originally posted by: MessyMind

You'll get the next thread as reward🤣

This for sure you will get...

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Manasa

@MessyMind

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Posted: 4 years ago

#1003

Originally posted by: Soujanya_ROSID
Forgot to wish...
Good afternoon all...

You came to do this and forget about it coz of mission 24😆

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Manasa

@MessyMind

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Posted: 4 years ago

#1004

Originally posted by: Soujanya_ROSID

When I told 🤔🤔🤔🤔

We told and you've to do🤪

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Andetheres

@Andetheres

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Posted: 4 years ago

#1005

Originally posted by: MessyMind

Give a brief of the story. If it's interesting then I may watch it😆

Surya invents a watch which can time travel like for .. before / after 24hrs .. He has a evil twin who wants that watch .. so he tries to kill surya’s family - wife and small child .. while escaping from his evil twin .. surya’s wife will die .. then surya will give his child to a lady in a train .. and will die .. whereas the evil twin will go to coma ..

After yrs .. the little child ( that is also surya only ) .. is brought by the lady to whom the father surya gave .... she as a single mother grows him without revealing the actual truth .. they own a watch repairing shop .. and he gets a key .. and tries to open a box which his mother says that it was with them for long .. he opens it and finds the watch .. and somehow finds its power .. and there Samantha will come to repair her watch .. surya flirts with her and impresses her with the power of his watch .. it’s later revealed that Samantha is brother’s daughter of surya’s adopted mother .. so they turn out to be cousins ..

It later revealed that .. the father gave little surya to that lady .. that time she was travelling to her home town as groom as come to see her .. but her family gets shocked seeing her getting down from train with a child in her hands .. she tries to explain but they disown her ... so starts moves away from there ..

the otherside ...evil twin wakes up from coma and he is paralysed now .. his side kick was the one who take care of him these many years .. he gets to know about that he twin’s child is alive and he has the watch .. he acts to be father surya and makes son surya to make the watch to time travel to years and later the son surya gets to know that he is not his father but the evil twin of his dad ..

And the watch takes them back to when the twin comes to kill surya and fam .. now the father surya finds the watch on his son’s hand and thinks how did it come there and sees so many extra settings which he didn’t make and understands that his son has time travelled and inform this to his wife .. so he destroys the watch and boards the train with his fam and sees the lady ( the one who brought up the son surya before ) and asks her if in her place will he get any work as science teacher ..

story ends