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Originally posted by: Madhura..

Disgusting! Sorry to say, but he isn't some public property, ki the way you are objectifying... Hoping I used the right word.

It's sick!! Like talk about the acting, story, character. Looks thik hai but to some extent, this is literally like giving a license kinda.

This was one main reason I wanted to punch my friend last weekend, cos though she didn't use these words, she meant this and gave me feedback randomly, like come on.

I have to go for some cleaning work, will come later. Ye bolne aaye the, but Had to reply to Nikki

Exactly my point!! You just can't objectify him. Upar se, no one was discussing his character, his acting skills and all. They are only discussing his looks!! Asking the others to watch the show just because the actor is hot??

I agree that he is good looking but just praising his looks and overlooking his talent? Asking someone to watch the show just because of his looks? Ye kya baat hoti hai? He is not a mere eye candy, right?

Okay, see you when you'll be back. 🤗

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Disgusting! Sorry to say, but he isn't some public property, ki the way you are objectifying... Hoping I used the right word.

It's sick!! Like talk about the acting, story, character. Looks thik hai but to some extent, this is literally like giving a license kinda.

This was one main reason I wanted to punch my friend last weekend, cos though she didn't use these words, she meant this and gave me feedback randomly, like come on.

I have to go for some cleaning work, will come later. Ye bolne aaye the, but Had to reply to Nikki

Completely agree with you.

Okay, see you later when you come back.

Sorry I gayablfied... FF forum par gaye the. Finally socha ki Shattered de dein review ke liye but un points par kya fill kare samajh nahi aaya.

Cool! So confusion dur huyi?

That's so true. No matter how much we hate it, people actually see this only.

That is one thing that I never ever want to remember.

Hayee!! Kya yaad dila diya behen!! 🤢 🤢 🤢

Me neither. Kya bakwas tha woh! And I think it was around that time when you and I got our title as PiyAnsh Haters! 🤔

Cool! So confusion dur huyi?

Nahi yaar... In points par kya fill karna hai samajh nahi aa raha hai.

Name of the Fiction:

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS):

Word Count (approx.):

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+):

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify):

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness:

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy):

Specifically the trigger warning and age group.

Also, how are the words counted? Like in school when we used to write essays we didn't count single and double letter words. Yahan ka kya system hai?

Me neither. Kya bakwas tha woh! And I think it was around that time when you and I got our title as PiyAnsh Haters! 🤔

True. That was one utterly bakwas sequence... I was only too glad that I was busy with my cousin's wedding and hence didn't watch that.

And yes, we got our title as Piansh haters around that time only...

Nahi yaar... In points par kya fill karna hai samajh nahi aa raha hai.

Name of the Fiction: Shattered

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): OS

Word Count (approx.):

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): I think it would be U

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): None

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: Death of the protagonist's daughter

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): None

Specifically the trigger warning and age group.

Also, how are the words counted? Like in school when we used to write essays we didn't count single and double letter words. Yahan ka kya system hai?

Well, maine to copy karke word file mein dala tha. To waha pe to page ki left corner mein automatically word count hota hain. Wahi likh diya.

True. That was one utterly bakwas sequence... I was only too glad that I was busy with my cousin's wedding and hence didn't watch that.

And yes, we got our title as Piansh haters around that time only...

😆 😆 😆

I gotta go now dear. Agar aur koi confusion ho to batana. Hum aakar reply karenge.

Name of the Fiction: Shattered

Type of the Fiction (FF/SS/OS): OS

Word Count (approx.):

Reader’s Age Group (U/13+/16+/18+): I think it would be U

Genre: Trigger Warnings (violence/trauma/molestation/domestic-violence/kidnapping/crimes-against-women/suicide-ideation/self-harm/mental-health-issues/swear-words/abuse/slight-reference-to r*pe/miscarriage/prostitution/drugs/trafficking/gore/others please specify): None

Specify Death-of-a-Character/medical-illness: Death of the protagonist's daughter

The extent of Trigger warnings mentioned above (Just mention/light/moderate/heavy): None

Thanks for this... So, is OS mein koi trigger warning nahi aayegi?

Well, maine to copy karke word file mein dala tha. To waha pe to page ki left corner mein automatically word count hota hain. Wahi likh diya.

Actually humne ab apni stories ki copies delete kar di hain... isliye problem ho rahi hai.

Ab kuch karna padega word count ka.

I gotta go now dear. Agar aur koi confusion ho to batana. Hum aakar reply karenge.

Okay, will let you know if I have any other confusions. Thanks a lot. ❤️

See you later when you're around. 🤗

Thanks for this... So, is OS mein koi trigger warning nahi aayegi?

I think so. After all, the narration was pretty straight-forward. A father mourning his child. Aisa to nahi ki tumne bohut dhishum-dhishum dala aur woh death sequence describe ki. So I don't think anybody would get triggered by this.

Madhura, what do you think?

Actually humne ab apni stories ki copies delete kar di hain... isliye problem ho rahi hai.

Ab kuch karna padega word count ka.

No problem. Tum apna OS open karke edit chapter option mein jao. Phir woh copy karke word mein paste kar do - simple. 😎

Okay, will let you know if I have any other confusions. Thanks a lot. ❤️

🤗

Waise, mujhe bhi ek help chahiye the bahen mere FF ko lekar. 😳

I think so. After all, the narration was pretty straight-forward. A father mourning his child. Aisa to nahi ki tumne bohut dhishum-dhishum dala aur woh death sequence describe ki. So I don't think anybody would get triggered by this.

Madhura, what do you think?

Well I guess so... Because poora death sequence and all to detail mein describe kiya nahi hai humne. Bas itna hi mention kiya hai ki the bodies were charred beyond recognition. I don't think this should trigger anyone.

No problem. Tum apna OS open karke edit chapter option mein jao. Phir woh copy karke word mein paste kar do - simple. 😎

Yup, karte hain thodi der mein.

Waise, mujhe bhi ek help chahiye the bahen mere FF ko lekar. 😳

Okay, I'll try my best to help. 😊

Okay, I'll try my best to help. 😊

Thanks! 😃 🤗

Actually, I need help with a particular dialogue. I love certain dialogues/quotation from the show. So in between the chapters I tried to blend them.

Ab waise hi ek dialogue hain jo mujhe puri samajh nahi ayi. Don't know if it's my hearing problem or the actress's voice was low. 🤔 To tumhe bas mujhe woh 3 lines Hindi-mein bolna hain. So I have to share the clip with you.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Okay, I'll try my best to help. 😊

Thanks! 😃 🤗

Actually, I need help with a particular dialogue. I love certain dialogues/quotation from the show. So in between the chapters I tried to blend them.

Ab waise hi ek dialogue hain jo mujhe puri samajh nahi ayi. Don't know if it's my hearing problem or the actress's voice was low. 🤔 To tumhe bas mujhe woh 3 lines Hindi-mein bolna hain. So I have to share the clip with you.

Okay no issues. I'll watch the clip and let you know the dialogues (provided I am able to understand because as you said, the voice was low)

Btw, can you suggest me some random username for insta? I don't want to use my own name...