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Me_Harini

@Me_Harini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda
Meenu mirchi update? ?
And Ranju I'm still waiting for the next part of your ff.

haiyyo ratna... yeah I need to write ok...Just for you a small glimpse...let me think

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@LotusPetals

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Posted: 8 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: poetic

Himalayan Herbs again?😃

Haha... or the Kerala herbs? 😉

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Me_Harini

@Me_Harini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#703

Kanna song continuation- sequence 3

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This is a very quick update guys...Not proofread...do pardon me if there are any mistakes...

P:s : - This entire converstion happens between amarasena where amara is in front and turning back towards deva while speaking

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Ee ardha raatrilo...shastrabhyasam yenti Yuvarani? (It's almost midnight and you want to practice weapons yuvarani?)

She glared at him

As she was riding the horse, she couldn't concentrate completely as his breath was brushing her back.

She was loosing her concentration with each passing moment and abruptly halted the horse.

Nuvvu digu...he just looked at her (Get down she said)

Digamantunnana? (I asked u to get down...didn't u listen?)

He stepped down

Nuvvu mundu Kurcho, Nenu venaka kurchunta...sarena? ( I will sit at back...and u sit at front)

I dont know horse riding yuvarani, If I sit in front who will ride the horse?

Chappindi cheyavayya ( do what I say...she ordered)

Without any other option he had to sit in front of her this time

She was trying hard to get hold of the halter as he sat in front of her, putting her arms around him...she failed in her every attempt

For a moment he thought ...what exactly is this lady trying to do? looking at her itself he was loosing his senses but now her antics is driving him insane...he had a hard time controlling himself around her

Why are u sitting so quiet, help me with halter she said

Ohh halter ok...and he handed her the halter

She could only feel the halter in her hands, and was unable to see the road as her visual was confined to her strong arms.

However she continued her teaching ...saying...hold it like this (Pointing to halter) and pull it like this...the horse riding technique is very simple...she said

As he saw her face which was explaining him abt horse riding...he couldn't stop himself from praising her innocent face...she was cray, she was innocent...at the same time she was fierce

How on earth was a woman has all these qualities he wondered

Her neck was already suffering trying hard to reach out to halter around this man...and now this man instead of learning how to ride horse was only looking at him

She glared asking...what are you looking at?

I am looking at your eyes deva which is making me love you more day by day...I am trying to understand how is it even possible that your eyes are piercing my heart every moment causing a happy pain called love...he uttered in his mind

When she didn't get the reply...she again asked what?

He innocently said...I am unable to understand what you are trying to teach maharani...he replied

I am teaching you to ride horse...she said with pride

I am unable to understand...he replied giving a confused look

Try to learn and ride the horse...she said strictly

Naaku telidu maharani...(I dont know maharani...) he replied

Inkem telsayya...neeku? (Then what else do you know?)

Inka chaala telsu naaku Yuvarani...he said with a smirk (I know many things)

Yenti? (What?)

U bought me to teach not to scold, if you remember

I remember everything...she said

Miku yemkaaledu kada yuvarani?

What? she asked

Mee drushti...yekkado unnatundi...

She couldn't answer him as she was completely lost in him but to make sure she doesn't loose her stance she said

Naa drushti...gurram meda undi...now stop your blabbering

He raised his eyebrows

Abruptly she said Digu (Get Down)...he gave her a confused look

Digamantunnaana? she glared at him (I am asking you to get down)

He was all shocked and confused and again he had to follow her words.

As he was to again get back on horse, the all mighty had other plans to bring them closer as god of rain showered his blessings on them.

It started raining heavily and they were in their mid-way to other palace where they had planned their shastrabhyasam...but now due to heavy rain, they neither could go back or stay at the same place.

They had to get inside the forest to search a show of tree under which they could save themselves from heavy rain...

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To be continued...

I wrote this abruptly😕 dont blame me

Edited by -Ranju- - 8 years ago

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bahubalifan

@bahubalifan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: MeenuCrazyPanda
in short.. whole of prabhas!

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@LotusPetals

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: bahubalifan
Truly a match made in heaven 😳

And I've no words too Meenu! This is heaven!

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#706

That was very nice Ranju. Such a romantic getaway to train him in horse riding 😆

And now here's the rain. ❤️

Rim jhim rim jhim, rum jhum rum jhum

bheegi bheegi ruth mein, tum hum hum tum ...

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bahubalifan

@bahubalifan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#707

@ Ranju - "I am looking at your eyes deva which is making me love you more day by day...I am trying to understand how is it even possible that your eyes are piercing my heart every moment causing a happy pain called love...he uttered in his mind" - Loved this stanza...👏

As it is your update is oozing romance as if that is not enough it has started to Rain hmmm Devasena is sure to get drenched !! ( in the love of Amara )

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Gems.musingsRN

@Gems.musingsRN

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#708

Very good Ranju! Loved the horse riding episode. ..

And why did you stop it right there??Pls update the next part soon.

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Me_Harini

@Me_Harini

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#709

Originally posted by: poetic
That was very nice Ranju. Such a romantic getaway to train him in horse riding 😆
And now here's the rain. ❤️

Rim jhim rim jhim, rum jhum rum jhum
bheegi bheegi ruth mein, tum hum hum tum ...

thanks rachna ji

Baarish devta...bhigane aarahe hai😆

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Me_Harini

@Me_Harini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: bahubalifan

@ Ranju - "I am looking at your eyes deva which is making me love you more day by day...I am trying to understand how is it even possible that your eyes are piercing my heart every moment causing a happy pain called love...he uttered in his mind" - Loved this stanza...👏

As it is your update is oozing romance as if that is not enough it has started to Rain hmmm Devasena is sure to get drenched !! ( in the love of Amara )

Thanks priya😛 u r right deva will get drenched in love of amara😳

However we got lotus in BB...So imagining something atleast instead of lotus and writing😛