To be or not to be - AKR Thread #6

amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: zeffy2k2
Hi Amu,

The weekend is a regular one, relaxing, helping mum out. The weather seems to be nice as well.
Light showers over, they instantly remind me of your write-up.

Sorry didn't spare time the other day to pen down a few things.

Khushi and nature's way of helping her introspect, she oblivious to the voices around, deep in thought is something the first time I have come across, it is very unique and intriguing. To pinpoint a scene, depict it with a variation is an indication as to how closely you are attached to the character/show and your version is superb. 👍🏼

Agree with Jiji and Ria you should really start writing, maybe combine with them to come up with something amazing.

Zeffy darling 🤗

thanx for the lovely comment.It was actually these light showers that made me write this introspection.I was just writing just to share my thought with my buddies and what better place than the CC thread to share it.

This is based mainly on the reality of life.When I pursued this introspection further to give in to flights of fantasy I was able to give fictional characters to these voices and even a background for them.If you noticed it is written in first person - perceived by Khushi and so if I continue this way of writing then it has to be in first person itself and so would become more of a reality rather than a story.If so, then I dont think I would be able to give it a happy arshi-fied ending.Yes, life would bring arshi face to face but a lot of water would have flown and so comes the question is it right to say arshi lived happily ever-after.

From my POV, I found it difficult to say that they have a happy ending and if I write such a tale then what is the point because to me at the end of the day the story should be all about hope and atleast a ray of JOY.

This based on reality would be intense and with feeling of heaviness rather than perceiving the cheerful Khushi as she has undergone a ruthless character change.

And so, my conclusion was that I will not be able to write that story even if I do have the framework as giving it a logical happy ending was quite doubtful. This fact sort of depressed me. However, if any of you wishes to continue and give a happy ending then I can gladly give them the framework. 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: cineraria

Amu behen se bahut daant padegi nandkissore.

Beerother ji ghar aaye hue the, CAT ki bhi padhai ne thoda momentum gain kiya tha, now it's all back to square one and I am on IF. 😆

Aman 🤗 dont worry Naraaz nahi hoon sirf besabre se intezaar kar rahe thi sab ke 'eggjams' khatam hone ko...koi baat nahi ...tumhare na aane ka karan toh jayaz thi... I understand 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: amus5

Zeffy darling 🤗

thanx for the lovely comment.It was actually these light showers that made me write this introspection.I was just writing just to share my thought with my buddies and what better place than the CC thread to share it.

This is based mainly on the reality of life.When I pursued this introspection further to give in to flights of fantasy I was able to give fictional characters to these voices and even a background for them.If you noticed it is written in first person - perceived by Khushi and so if I continue this way of writing then it has to be in first person itself and so would become more of a reality rather than a story.If so, then I dont think I would be able to give it a happy arshi-fied ending.Yes, life would bring arshi face to face but a lot of water would have flown and so comes the question is it right to say arshi lived happily ever-after.

From my POV, I found it difficult to say that they have a happy ending and if I write such a tale then what is the point because to me at the end of the day the story should be all about hope and atleast a ray of JOY.

This based on reality would be intense and with feeling of heaviness rather than perceiving the cheerful Khushi as she has undergone a ruthless character change.

And so, my conclusion was that I will not be able to write that story even if I do have the framework as giving it a logical happy ending was quite doubtful. This fact sort of depressed me. However, if any of you wishes to continue and give a happy ending then I can gladly give them the framework. 😉

Behen what you wrote was beautiful. I understand your quandary, the plight of wanting a happy ending and yet feeling that a happy end wouldn't do justice to the story you have in mind.

I also totally understand the the point of not wanting to let go off the pleasure and hope happy endings bring. I am there with you, frankly I chicken out. Pretty faint heated there, can't take sad ends. It's always picture abhi baki hai mere dost.

But then that's what fiction is about. That's what it ideally should be. Not that there aren't happy endings in real life or fictional tragedies. But I feel tragedy takes away the essence of fiction, that gateway, that escape to another world which seems so much better than the real one. So don't feel that giving the story a happy ending would take anything away from the "realistic" attribute of it. That's the essence of fiction, that's what it is. And that's what makes it different from reality, you have the liberty to choose. To make it all right in the lives of the protagonists.

Another thing I reckon is no one else can do the justice to your framework that you can. It's your mind and heart after all. Your story. Nobody would understand it better than you. Nobody could be as dedicated as you. Your mark should be yours, it'll shine like no other then.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: amus5

Aman 🤗 dont worry Naraaz nahi hoon sirf besabre se intezaar kar rahe thi sab ke 'eggjams' khatam hone ko...koi baat nahi ...tumhare na aane ka karan toh jayaz thi... I understand 😃

Sherlock behen 🤗 bahut miss kiye aap sab ko.

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Sumneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: cineraria

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Sumneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi Amu di,

Will be responding shortly, intermittent network connection here.

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Lumos_Solem

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: cineraria

Oye Yashi ki bacchi, ab toh teri Surbhi Maiyya ka naam le liya, bahar nikal nalayak. 😡

Teri fav ki baat hoing. 😆

Kuch bhi. 😆

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Lumos_Solem

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sher that was really good. wish you'd write more.

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Sumneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi Tommy,

How is the day/night going?

I was reminded of this nickname, given I am busy catching up with the show Arrow, and the character was Oliver's best friend. Just finished watching Season 1, the action is superb.

Well, after all that I like the name Yashi better. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Zeffy darling 🤗,

Amu di 🤗so sorry to respond late. The brown text is what I typed away in, realizing that the essay type responses are unavoidable. Now I know why Ria uses small font 😆.

thanx for the lovely comment.It was actually these light showers that made me write this introspection.I was just writing just to share my thought with my buddies and what better place than the CC thread to share it.

Your welcome, and I do feel that nature works its wonders when it comes to jump start a creative mind. Glad that the weather is nice, a relief from the heat. The CC allows one and all to share things, have an interesting discussion as well and your thoughts are always something to ponder about.

This is based mainly on the reality of life.When I pursued this introspection further to give in to flights of fantasy I was able to give fictional characters to these voices and even a background for them.If you noticed it is written in first person - perceived by Khushi and so if I continue this way of writing then it has to be in first person itself and so would become more of a reality rather than a story.If so, then I dont think I would be able to give it a happy arshi-fied ending.Yes, life would bring arshi face to face but a lot of water would have flown and so comes the question is it right to say arshi lived happily ever-after.

I like the fact that you are honest and are able to stay true, in terms of writing, even before venturing/indulging into it completely. Having a dose of reality in fiction is good, but basing it entirely on reality is what would be make it epic and different. Yes they are characters who have voices, and being able to narrate a story with a dose of daily life is what I would personally like as a reader. Having a non-happy arshied ending is something that I would look forward too, it is the creativity that would be personified. Life has its hardships, it is the journey that matters, ultimately defining the individual for who he/she turns out to be. Arshi living happily ever after - depends on what you have/had in mind!

From my POV, I found it difficult to say that they have a happy ending and if I write such a tale then what is the point because to me at the end of the day the story should be all about hope and atleast a ray of JOY.

👍🏼 Just realized that you summarized things in a precise and apt manner, exactly what I would have thought. There are numerous movies/stories/tales where the ending is left over for the audience to decipher and they have been successful, (Sorry do not have any examples to substantiate the same) but if the writing/narration allows the readers to be so deeply involved/affected that they are able to relate to the tale in reality, that indicates the impact of a story-teller.

Life has its up and downs, being able to give that a voice, put them in words is the essence (from a writer's point of view), and the reader is left/free to interpret his/her version of the same, which shouldn't discourage you in any manner. In fact, this is what makes you stand apart from the many, being bold enough to imagine a world of reality in fiction.

This based on reality would be intense and with feeling of heaviness rather than perceiving the cheerful Khushi as she has undergone a ruthless character change.

I think making a character more real is what appeals to an audience. Hope I am not misinterpreting anything here and the response is appropriate. 😳

And so, my conclusion was that I will not be able to write that story even if I do have the framework as giving it a logical happy ending was quite doubtful. This fact sort of depressed me. However, if any of you wishes to continue and give a happy ending then I can gladly give them the framework. 😉

Happy ending or not - Please do write, you did have a vision/thought and we all would be more than happy to know what was going on in you mind/heart. I am sure writing is something you have a knack for, and would easily impress all of us, undoubtedly. A small version, sneak peak was enough for us to deduce the the same, the story awaits a thread over here! Ria does have a huge stock of rumaals 😉

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 10 years ago

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