Jaya CC#1 Members Only (Notes on Pg#12,19)Please Vote Pg 135 - Page 84

Originally posted by: KURT15

Awesome Brishti!! It was amazing! 👏. The young girl on the threshold of womanhood and the creepy old man... superb!!!

Originally posted by: AnuMP

Brishti

I hope you make Kunti clever. Because she actually was a very politically astute woman. In fact that more than her 5 sons put tigether.

Originally posted by: Arijit007

hmm, nice post, maatey, so, karna's dady is durvasa, ok, now it seems that it is time to figure out about the fathers of us pandavas.

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

@captain spark: i loved little kunti playing with the sun. She is playing with fire there quite literally throughout the chapter. Durvasa just creeped me out.

Great work!

Originally posted by: AnuMP

I am mostly looking forward to seeing the BheemDi love scene😆

Wrestling match or food fight?😈😆

Originally posted by: shyam09

I think this is what Anu means:

"They stood in the center of the dirt area facing each other, their eyes locked on the other's beautiful face. It was a strange sight to behold, a man and a woman facing each other in a wresting arena. The man smirked and beckoned the lady to attack. The lady tossed her dark bluish hair over her shoulders and using two small sticks, she swirled her hair into a messy bun. Crouching, her brown eyes drift across the empty arena, seeking out the best places. She swallows and with a breath, she lurches forward and strikes her opponent on the chest with her palms, leaving a red mark over his heart.

The man grinned, this was exactly how he had imagined his nuptial night to be. Doing the one thing he loved the most (after eating and cooking of course) with the woman of his dreams. He brought his fingers to his lips and kissed it and touched the red palm mark.

The lady raised her eyebrows and stomped her feet into the dirt ground, creating a cloud of dust to rise. She once again ran towards the man and moments before reaching him, she dug her right foot into the ground and twisted her body enough to leap into the air and deliver a kick.

The kick never came for he ducked out of the way. With her back towards him, a huge disadvantage, she could only hope to land on her feet quickly. But her feet didn't touch the ground. The man's strong arms quickly crossed her stomach, and she was pulled in. She felt the warmth of his breath lingering on her neck; she heard the beating of his heart. She paused and slowed down her breathing. She slowly turned around and looked into the eyes of the golden-hued husband of hers, lost in a river of love and emotion.

"Arya Bhim." she murmured softly. She rested her head on his broad shoulders and closed her eyes. The moment was here and now. She could feel the mighty mace warrior's hands slowly inch up her slender back. She gasped as she felt the sticks from her hair pulled out, as her bluish curled locks fell, and as they danced on her shoulders.

"Priya Valandara." came the masculine voice of Bhim.

Draupadi, the fiery princess of Panchaal, opened her eyes, red with rage. "What did you call me?"

The end 😆😆😆 Ok I ruined the ending, but I didn't want to end with romance (otherwise that would go for pages)

But the food fight couldn't happen Anu. Bhim would be like "Woah there honey sugar, let's not waste good food that I can eat. Let's go wrestle instead!"

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Originally posted by: frappie

Hey blindy !!! I was reading my bhratha Yuddhisthir's long lost track of Upadates now I am back basically I have not been given a role so I have called you Blindy dont mind and forgive me though I know that you dont have such a forgiving nature yet I am sure you will pretend 😆😆

Guys on a serious note can be Draupadi Uloopi Chitru and Subhi???😔 or atleast give me a proper character for now😭😭😭

Originally posted by: CaptainSpark

Seems like I am in serious demand 😆 Eveyrone wants to be my wife../son/Gurudev to have scenes with me 😃 Love you Shyam and Frappz 🤗 We will have soo much fun! 😉