Originally posted by: CaptainSpark
Someone please tell me point wise what I have to edit in my Karna birth. I really don't know what to do about KK anymore. Please tell me what you all plan, and I will edit. 😊 Till now I have to edit that Kunti being unconscious.
My suggestions are:-
1)Once kunti realizes she is pregnant and will give birth to the baby but cant keep it she wants to do something that will protect the baby in this harsh world.So she goes to this Rishi Durvasa and tells him that she knows he has some knowledge of making an impenetrable armour he must give it to her or else she will tell her father what he did.Of course its a bluff she isn't actually going to tell any one but Durvasa buys it and tells her.She asks some of her friends from the solar dynasty to help her make this armour in secret they make it and give it to her and she sends karna in a bastket with this armour and other jeweleries
This way we will keep the theme from the epic that Kunti asks for KK from surya dev to protect karna
2)If asking from Durvasa Rishi isn't ok then we can directly show her asking some prince of solar dynasty to help her get such a n armour so that she is sure karna will remain safe
3)Karna gets it sometime later in his life .But since its a deviation from the epic i wont prefer this one.Adiratha found him with the armour so we should keep it like that.Of course he wont be wearing the armour he will just have it in a basket
Regarding the bleeding when he gives it away,he can bleed either barbecue he cuts himself while taking it out or he actually completely destroys the armour and hence hurts himself
Whatever maximum people are ok with these or something else we can go with that
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