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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46



dekha jaye toh normal ladki ais situation my apni destiny maan k aapni shadi p dhyan degi..
kyu divorce aaj bi achi cheez nahi mani jati h atleast middle class setup main.
but as it story and me personally dont want khushi other than arnav , i guess her wounds can b healed after she give proper punishment or he himself repents


yes...it will but wait for the story to unfold...it has just started...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oye spo tere liye-😉
as u said i wrote 3 part of humdard, but tanu di said humdard ended well no need of another part socha yaha post kar deti hoon😆..ab likh hi liya h toh




After 2 years -

Khushi was 7 months pregnant and arnav was as possessive as ever. he kept detail of every little things, medicines on time, proper nutritious food, no work, proper rest..

Khushi used to get frustrated , but she was enjoying it too..right now she was sleeping on arnav thought so..

She only slept after listening to father - son conversation .yes, she knows it s a boy, no they didn't check it out, but she knows as a mother..arnaV sat near her for his daily late night conversation . he put his hand on her tummy and said ,

Hello baby...its papa..

Baby replied by little moving..

Baby how are you today ? I want to request something today ..

Baby continued moving as if listening to him..

Beta don't cause much pain to my precious little wife ...

"thump " baby kicked strongly.

Oh sorry , to my khushi...

" thump " baby kicked again..

Arnav rolled his eyes..fine you won... Please don't cause much pain TO YOUR MUMMA ..

"thump " thump " this time baby kicked twice which meant all gudJJ

You know today when we were gone for doctor I saw a lady screaming so badly as she was having labour pain..i don't want your mumma to go through such a pain..will come out easily please beta papa ki baat man jao, moreover your mumma is not agreeing delivery by operation she wants normally , will you do me this favour ??

Khushi controlled herself from laughing out loud..here arnav was waiting for reply..

But their little raizada had different plans .. he stopped his movement which meant he has gone to sleep.

1 week after baby is born-

You are defiantly your mumma's son, she also never agrees what I say...u caused her so much pain .she was shouting so much arnav stared at his 1 week old son's caramel eyes with a stern face .

As if baby sensed the scolding , he started crying on top of his voice.

Khushi who has just returned from washroom heard what arnav was saying rushed towards her son..

Arnavji aap bhi naa. What are you saying, see you made him cry...!!! He even fulfilled your wish.

What .. you heard what I was saying , ?

Yes . and I know about this since beginning , I used to listen your conversation during nights..

That's wrong that was between me and my son..and how did he fulfilled mu wish , don't you remember you were so much pain

Arnavji he is " our " son and arnavji its natural to have pain during child birth. You know arnavji I forgot all the pain the moment I heard his precious wail. Our symbol of love in our hands is worth of any pain.

And he does fulfilled your wish, sometime delivery can take so much time , but he ...my chocolate pie only took 2 hours , what would you have done if he had taken 2 days to come out.. haaa!!!!

Arnav immediately felt sorry .. bent his head towards his baby who was lying in khushi's arms now quietly staring at his father..

I am sorry baby, maaf kar do..papa was wrong and ran his fingers on his chubby cheeks .

Baby smiled and grasped his father's finger in his small hand and slept peacefully.


😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shona_arhilover


yes...it will but wait for the story to unfold...it has just started...




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i always ask question to the writer directly..
ab koi story reveal kar dega toh kya maza ayega ..

i did same things with spo too🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey shivi just now i read HOC update ,
cant belive we wrote samething about night convo etc.
i swear i didnt read ur chapter before
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46




😆

i always ask question to the writer directly..
ab koi story reveal kar dega toh kya maza ayega ..

i did same things with spo too🤣


😆
and the small OS was so so cute...I loved it as it was Arshi parent and their son...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

hey shivi just now i read HOC update ,

cant belive we wrote samething about night convo etc.
i swear i didnt read ur chapter before


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its ok...I dont know why people panic at seeing small similarities...its bound to happen...their are so many os/ff/ss on arshi contract marriage and some scenes do look same ..that doesnt mean its copied or something...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shona_arhilover


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its ok...I dont know why people panic at seeing small similarities...its bound to happen...their are so many os/ff/ss on arshi contract marriage and some scenes do look same ..that doesnt mean its copied or something...


i know but i was amazed about co incidence.
even if i will ever copy from urs, spo's and tanu di's work ..
i will tell you guys before hand
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shona_arhilover


😆
and the small OS was so so cute...I loved it as it was Arshi parent and their son...😳


thankyuo i asked spo to write abt their baby ,but she didnt agreed😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46


i know but i was amazed about co incidence.
even if i will ever copy from urs, spo's and tanu di's work ..
i will tell you guys before hand


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ok...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46


thankyuo i asked spo to write abt their baby ,but she didnt agreed😡


i had told you already...she agrees when she wants to...its really hard to convince her if she doesnt want to do anything...

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