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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Riddhima appeared like an ethereal dream to Sid as she entered the party or should i say his house.
Sid appeared a distant but endearing dream to Riddhima as her eyes found him in the party. Their eyes met - and for once , Sid was not being the pseudo-mean husband that he is trying so hard to be these days - he looked at her with the softest and most subtly sensuous expressions possible. And Riddz was relieved that Sid was not raging a mad bull upon her sight. Hesitance , reluctance , to-be or not-to-be all was there but as destiny - sometimes in the veil of Tamanna, sometimes in the face of Shankypanks and now in the guise of Armaan always puts them on the same plane where they have no option except to collide and face each-other.

As SR explore the geography of the pool, Armaan introduces them to the world as a beautiful couple by the name of Siddhanth Modi and Riddhima Modi , asking them to start the party with a beautiful couple dance. SR take center-stage and look at each-other. Riddhima, as she looks at Sid's face remembers the hope that Armaan gave her regarding herself and Sid. She stands put there , like always , searching for a sign from Sid. Sid looks at her with a face that oscillates between harshness and innocent tenderness for Riddhima. And as he gives out his hand to Riddhima to hold, she looks at his face and as if once again taking a chance on her heart , she slowly puts her hand in Sid's hand and Sid slides his hand around her slender waist. And as they both sway to the music, looking at each-other and looking away from each-other , you see a myriad of emotions and sweet memories flash over their faces. They both remember what is so beautiful between them - they remember how they are meant to be - peaceful, loving , made-with-each-other , away from all the venom and bitterness that they are trying to force between themselves.

Riddz wants to give her heart another chance and not be scared of loving Sid while Sid doesn't want to give in to his love for Riddhima and get hurt again. So , he shakes out of his Riddhima-fied stage and tells Riddz that this party , her invitation and all this doesn't mean he is opening the doors of his heart for her...and that makes Riddz' heart droop in disappointment and part anger and shutting her eyes in frustration so that she doesn't beat the pulp out of her husband, Riddz storms off.

Later , in an immensely fun-filled episode, the most touching and beautiful SR moment that stays with you is when a drunk and tipsy Sid throws down his shirt and it lands on Riddhima. And as she holds it in her hands , the happy tenderness on her face makes you realize that what SR have between them goes much beyond love - it's simply something else which not only you and I but above all Armaan sees as well.

And before i sign off, there is something i want to say to everyone.

A love like Armaan happens once in a lifetime. A soulmate like Siddhanth comes after waiting an entire lifetime.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Riddhima at under the butcher's knife.

Looking at the track record of Riddhima and the shocking inconsistencies of this potentially poignant character , I can only say

Kisi bhi janam mohe Riddhima na keejo.

What is wrong with you woman? I know that you are a wee bit cuckoo in the head and your cuckoo-ness has driven both Armaan and Sid to limits of insanity ( what with Armaan proving his love all his life and Sid handling her hatred and proving his innocence all his life) ... but what you are doing right now is CRIMINAL. It is the worst kind of injustice against Armaan and it is the worst kind of emotional attyaachaar against your husband Siddhanth. Armaan has every right to know that Riddhima is married - he does not deserve such deceit. Instead of venting out venom at Armaan , catch hold of your grey matter and tell him that whatever he is doing is not right because you have married Siddhanth. Why should Armaan go through the suffering of feeling guilty of having hurt you when that is not the case in the first place? This is what i call butchering of the emotional flow when it is stretched to such and extent that you stop feeling sorry for the victim. And why the freaks should Sid be wiping her tears and giving reassuring words to her when she is not doing what is in her hands ? Why should Sid stand through Armaan and Riddhima's FE escapades when his wife doesn't have the guts to open her mouth? And what light does it show Riddhima in? Riddhima as in Riddhima Modi , a married woman when Armaan almost kisses her in innocence? People may not give two hoots about marriage but it is a pious institution and like every relationship, it has it' sanctity - so , what are the creatives trying to convey? That Riddhima is letting her lover live in fool's paradise and at the same time oscillating between her feelings and commitment towards her husband Sid? Ah,well, at this rate , we will need rocket science to understand the characters.

If Sid wouldn't have sent Armaan and met her in Pune and if she would have told him that she loves him and would have encountered Armaan after that, then,what would she have done? Gone hopping with Armaan and oscillating like a pendulum between the two men? I seriously wanted to butcher myself when she said that 'Ek taraf Armaan hai aur doosri taraf Siddhanth , main kya karoon?'...*Poco dies of brain hemorrhage*... wake up woman! Pick one man and just trot off so that the other man can live in peace.

Okay Mr. Butcher , you can put the knife on her now.


This post is not about SR/AR... it is about Armaan, Siddhanth and Riddhima, Right now, they are forming a classic example of how things go east-west-north-south when the characters go out of hand due to the horrid permutations and combination of your story graph. In a bid to pull in the ratings , take time to think, test your viewers, mark juvenile strategies to keep the audience at tenterhooks , you end up butchering what you have so laboriously built.

And once the characters and the story graph goes out of hand and the characters become synonymous with twisted multiple personality disorders , you can never build them back. Renovation is impossible. They try all angles , all combos , all situations and characters go round and round in circles and ultimately even if you get what you want , you feel cheated because the journey has been bitter and alien.

Love stories require deft and sensitive handling where you explore the deepest emotions of the character by removing the layers of his/her heart one-by-one , building a beautiful relationship through a properly marked out journey. Be it SR or AR , the couples are not about spine-tingling chemistry, nice good-looking picture frames , for how many years or how many months who has loved whom or getting married and having babies. NO. It is the journey that matters - a believable poignant journey where the character have stayed consistent and their story has been beautiful.

Sadly , DMG has no story , i mean come on, any educated person with even 2% neurons can tell that DMG ran on it's characters , cast and their tuning - it never had a consistent story graph except for a few water sprays here and there. Nothing much has changed because they make great tracks and ruin them. Rahul-Muskaan stay the worst example till date followed closely by Yuvi-Naina. But how do you blame the script department when scripts are butchered as per orders and stories tampered with almost every week. This is what happens in the business of emotions.

P.S- By the way, the current creative team has spoonfuls from ex-Balaji staff. Now, figure out what you have stored in coming weeks. I am suddenly getting nightmares of Kashish, Prerna, Anurag, Mihir,Tulsi, and all other packs of ham in the butchershop.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
This is an OS
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The door of the Modi Penthouse opens with one soccer-kick of Armaan's leg. Armaan walks in , or rather staggers in with a lot of weight on his two shoulders- Sid clinging to his right arm and resting his head on his right shoulder and Riddz clinging to his left arm and resting her head on his left shoulder. Sid-Riddz wake up at the sound of the door and look at Armaan...

Armaan ( trying to get inside )- Goodmorning ! Ghar aa gayaa...ab meri baazu chhodo , Modis! Ek saath hum teenon ghar ke andar nahiin ghus sakte! My figure is super sexy lekin tum dono ke baare mein aisa leh sakta. Chhodo mujhe aur jaao ghar ke andar.

Sid ( cheek to cheek with Armaan )- Nooo! Cootchie! Tum mujhe chhodkar chale gaye to mera khayaal kaun rakhega? ...

Riddhima ( slaps Sid )- Abe chupp! Bewade kahiin ke ! Sharam nahiin aati itni peete hue?... Biwi main hoon tumhaari.

Armaan ( trying to free himself)- Bewade Sid , ye teri Bewadi Riddhima hai... le dhyaan se dekh... ( Armaan holds Riddz and Sid's face closer to each-other and they blink their eyes at each-other)...ab gaana bajaaoon background mein , badtameezon? ...Tere aur iske sapne ab ek rang hai... o ek-dooje ke jeevan saathi!...

Sid ( touches Riddz' nose and cheeks gingerly)- O TERI! Ye to sacch mein meri biwi hai... shaadiwaali biwi... ( puckers his nose and clings back to Armaan)...lekin isne meri shirt kyun pehni hai?

Riddhima pounces on Sid's neck where her red dupatta is hanging and Armaan has a hard time balancing...

Armaan - O aunty! ... ye tumhaara shaadiwaala pati hai! Kya kar rahi ho? Iske liye Karwachauth ka vrat rakha tha... remember?...Flashback mein jaao...

Riddhima ( clutching Sid's neck and being held back by Armaan )- Arre kaun sa shaadi waala pati!... Ye Sid nahiin hai ! Sid mere kapde nahiin pehenta... isne mera dupatta kyun pehna hai?...Oye , tu jo bhi hai , meri izzat waapis kar.

Sid laughs and lets go of Armaan and holding Riddhima by the arm jerks her inside the house... Sid laughs and lets go of Armaan and holding Riddhima by the arm jerks her inside the house...

Armaan ( cautions )- Sid sambhaal ke! Gir jaayegi , teri ek hi biwi hai!

Sid ( swinging Riddhima's arms )- Biwi nahiin saas-bahu ka TV hai!... Waise to 5 liter aansoo baha -bahaa kar mera ghar bharti rehti hai... lekin party mein dekha tha ise... ( copies Riddz)... uff ! teri adaa!...i like the way you move... wahaan to izzat ke kabootar uda rahi thi tum ... ab tumhe izzat waapis chaahiye.

Armaan ( in comic shock )- Suna Riddhima! Kya kaha Sid ne ? Tumhaara koi dupatta nahiin hai... i mean tumhaari koi izzat nahiin hai! ... aur isliye tum Sid ki shirt ... i mean uski izzat pehenkar ghoom rahi ho!

Riddhima grabs Sid by his shoulders and shakes him like a wet cloth put up for drying...

Sid ( like a baby )- Chhod de chudail! Chhod de mujhe!... Armaan bachaao mujhe! Ye meri izzat par hamla kar rahi hai.

Armaan ( sitting comfortably in a couch)- Lutne de, beta ... waise bhi is society mein kaun sa tum dono ki koi izzat bachi hai...

Riddhima - Siddhanth Modi ke bacche!

Sid ( thinking )- Bacche? Abhi nahiin hue ...kab karne hain?

Riddhima ( latching on to the dupatta )- Ye tumhe divorce papers bhejne se pehle sochna chahiye tha... badtameez, bewakoof aadmi! Bacche hum baad mein plan karenge...Ab mera dupatta waapis karo aur mujhe ... bar mein... sorry ... JP ke ghar chhod kar aao...

Armaan ( sifting through a magazine and biting into an apple)- Tch , tch... kya biwi hai teri Sid... tujhe chhodkar JP ke paas ja rahi hai...

Sid ( holding Riddz by the shirt collar )- Kya?... Tumhaara JP ke saath bhi chakkar hai?...Maine tumhe 1.5 chammach sindoor aur 2.5 kg ka Cartier ka ... oh ya , Mangalsutra ye dinn dekhne ke liye pehnaaya tha...

Riddhima ( jumping up and down like a kid)- Pehle mera collar chhod , Sid!... Armaan bachaao!

Armaan ( getting up)- Filhaal , mujhe tum dono se bachne ki zaroorat hai!... Ek Club Soda aur doosra Rum ka Tadka...

Sid ( not leaving Riddz )- Armaan mera hai! Mera Cootchie meri side lega!... Aur ab tum meri shirt utaaro!

Riddhima ( running away)- Tum mere kapde utarwaaoge! Kaise pati ho tum!

Sid ( running after her )- Party mein kapde utaar kar twist kar rahi thi! Kaisi biwi ho tum? Apna dupatta lo , aur meri shirt do...

Armaan switches on the playstation and sits down to play a game , putting earplugs in his ears as Sid-Riddz run all over the house chasing each-other.

Riddhima throws cushions and furniture on Sid...

Sid ( throwing things back at her )- Phenk chudail, phenk , kal subah tujhe uthaakar poore ghar mein jhaadoo-pochaa nahiin karwaaya na , to mera naam bhi... naam...

Riddhima ( throwing a fruit basket at him)- Abe Siddhanth Modi hai tu! Mera shaadiwaala pati!

Sid ( flying kiss to Riddhima twice )- Thanks! Haan... to mera naam bhi Siddhanth Modi nahiin!

Finally , they both get tired of running around and collapse on a sofa together behind Armaan...

Armaan ( still playing )- Ho gaya tum dono ka...Main ghar jaaoon?

No response. Armaan turns around and slowly tears well up in his eyes but with a beautiful smile on his face.

Sid-Riddz have collapsed together - their faces facing each-other and noses touching. They are holding each-others' hands in sleep. Armaan shakes his head , still smiling and putting a blanket on both of them , he goes out , switching off the lights...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
I fervently thank God that I never ever like ever watched DMG. Because without fail I would have shipped Sid - Riddhima as much as I shipped Armaan - Riddhima and without fail I would have been disgusted ( not that I am not now)
As for the OS - That was hilarious to say the least *giggling*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Jaan u online? And read them too...?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Yes jaan I am taking a break. I was in IPKKNDEBP forum about the latest crazy Astha antic and saw this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Well i have become sid-ridzz shipper long back, though i hated the story line. and double hated it it when armaan came back. Poco said it rightly, AR story was a magical fairytale and was beautiful as long as it lasted. And SR story is a wounded fairytale and is beautiful in it's own away. By bringing armaan back they have done injustice to both AR and SR.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Jaan SR had such a beautiful story and such phenomenal scenes that were not written for any couple till date and the dialogues,, they were something else. But the story is butchered. Like making riddhima give in her emotions and cheat on sid by having a one night stand with armaan. I mean where on earth does that happen in a tv show where LEADS do that. And guess what the makers did.. they glorified it and brushed under the carpet later.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
They have done what every other fan following CV's have done.
Give importance to what fan's want and what gives them the most TRP's. Story and character consistency be damned!
Pathetic really.
Which makes me wonder why two very brilliant writers are ruining Sayukta in SH.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Happens in western TV I guess.
Absolutely insulting to the institution of marriage and shows just how good the character is. Sheesh!

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