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I had started writing one on rebirth too🤔 woh dundthi hu
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Rebirth:- frankly speaking ta a certain extend I do believe up this world .I do feel that God gives everyone a second chance to complete their incomplete story and this story would be somewhat on the same lines. Ok now shopping my bakwas here is the prologue and ya it starts from where the destined time for their meeting nears.

Prologue

Date:- 16th April 2012

Admist the colorful and well designed head office of the Raizaada Fashion House in Mumbai, an Havan was being performed.

The pandit was busy chanting on various mantras, pouring oil into the havan pit asking or rather requesting god to let the souls of the two beloved to be resting in peace at the comforts of the havan, but then out of sudden the fire sparkled out like fire in a fraction of seconds

"Ji ap theek to hain na", came an concerned voice of Anjali Raizada Jha, taking her husbands little bruised fingers in her hands and blowing air onto them.

"Ya I am completely fine, I think the oil got a bit out of proportion n hence that sudden outrage of fire, it isn't hurting much its just a small scar", said her beloved husband Shyam Jha.

And now the punditji spoke "This is a bad omen, a really bad omen, I am sorry I cant continue the pooja further" n he left abruptly leaving the Havan midway.

Now a sobbing anjali spoke in between her sobs "Today its their 24th death anniversary n like every year even today we couldn't complete the pooja, this is really a bad sign, my chotte n khushiji are not in good condition, they dint get a good chance to reach the heaven, maybe their soul is still stuck up", n this time her sobs increased.

An 58year old Shyam consoling his wife spoke, "Rani sahiba, don't cry they are surely sitting at the gates of havan and fighting as who is to go first in the lovely place"

This brought a smile to her face n they left in to give a call to their darling daughter Riddhima Jha.

Ok now u all maybe wondering as to what is riddhima doing in here n my answer is that arre I need characters so instead of cooking up the characters I will bring in a few loved characters from tellywood n ya even kripa n angad would be there, abhi payal aur Akash ke bhi to bache honge na

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(that's if u like my stupid piece of writing)

Nikki

The lines written in blue shows their past

Part 2:Remembering the unkown

Date :17th april 2012

New York: Nearing Midnight

"Get out', can't u hear me Khushi Kumari Gupta, just get out of my car" n the girl was left lonely on the dark streets getting all scared but out of sudden a car suddenly pulled in near her splashing all the rain fed soil on dress'

"Eeks!" Khushi woke up with an expression of disgust n hearing her voice kripa was quick to head towards Khushi n sooth her "Khushi ur fine?" n this time to kripas surprise Khushi was smiling n when kripa crooked up her eyebrows she spoke "Arre u know today I saw that a man like shadow n a girl apparently who shares her name with me sitting in the car though their faces weren't clear, I could make out that it was girl in an typical Indian were, I think it was salwar suits n it also had cute pom poms"

Now a rather confused Kripa asked, "so what was that 'eeks' for?" n just as kripa ended her statement khushis smile was replaced with anger, getting up from her bed she said "That man let that girl alone in some deserted streets, He asked her to get out from his some stupid white car n then the most important thing being he returns back'" Before Khushi could continue Kripa put in "Then that's good right, I mean it clearly shows that he cares for that girl". "U krips ki bacchi let me complete first before u start up ur never stopping mouth" in her frustration Khushi even tore apart her wool filled cushion, "U Know what he came back n halted in such a high speed that all the rainy puddle ran up on that supposed Khushi's dress n that man dint even care to apologize" completing her statement Khushi waited for Krips reaction but none came, kripa was staring at her as if she was goanna continue, "Krips that's all I saw what r u waiting for?" "Obviously for u to finish, I don't want ur super pitched anger to again get on me, n common every girl isn't a marshial art champion like u"

"She could have at least punched him n that dirty dirt feels as if it was on my dress, I mean I could actually feel up that girls emotion" said an now calmed down Khushi.

This time with an assuring n motivating smile Kripa put in, "U remember right? We had decided that these dreams of u will be viewed by us as if it is a movie playing, a typical bollywood movie with all the possible emotions in it'" Tring Tring'Kukdoo-Coo'Wake up Wake up, wake up' "Damn u krips this was ur plan for ur mission 'irritate Khushi at midnight on all her birthdays" but u know what this time I actually liked it, heehee'

They both squeezed each other n Kripa wished her best friend.

London

Sitting on the stairs of the unused fire exit Arnav was busy thinking about his latest dream, a smile playing on his lips n his heart thudding badly.

While passing through the corridors riddhima saw Arnav sitting on the stairs n she very well knew that Arnav came to this place whenever he has blackouts n he sees unknown things, but today Arnav was smiling so she was sure that this time instead of fighting with that unknown female shadow, the man n the woman whom whom he usually has visuals about may spoken in peace. She clearly remembers about each n every dream he had told her about, Firstly she used to think that Armaan n Arnav had a bad past, they actually had spent their childhood on their streets but then later she n Arnav came to an conclusion that probably it was something related to his last life, Armaan made fun of their thoughts, so they usually kept Armaan away from their discussions.

"So what did u see today?" "Ridzi come sit u know what today I had the chance to feel one of the best feelings in the world 'There was a mansion which was completely decorated by the lights, the people or rather the shadows in the house seemed to be in an festive mood, there was diyas kept everywhere, every nook n corner of the house was lighting up, I ended up with some girl on the seemingly poolside of the house, I cornered her an was about to kiss her, my heart was probably beating infinite seconds in a minute, of what I could make out the girl was wearing a red sari n I could hear her heartbeat too, n could feel her breath on my collar bone, but the whole movement got damned by an ringing cell phone'" "Ridzi now why do u have that stupid grin on ur face?" "My loverboy that's because for the first time u mentioned or used an "I" for that unknown shadow, u always told me that probably the nane of the shadow was Arnav but u never reffered to it as I"

"Ya because never before I could feel the emotions so well." Giving him an smile she spoke "Now before Armaan comes up n makes fun of us lets leave" "Na ridzi ,I know that he is busy today n that too for planning my surprise birthday"

"Haahaa'U already know that right" "Now if arman give me a surprise party on each of my birthday, I probably would know right?

"heehee' even I told that to arman but he said that he would never break this tradion".

Nikki

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Part 3 : A step closer to their meeting

"Krips come here mom n Dad r on skype they want to talk to u too". "Hello Neela aunty n Vijay uncle n btw uncle u look hot in t-shirts u should wear them more often" All the three burst out laughing n instead of Vijay uncle it was Kripa who was blushing" "Ah Kripa beta before I forget, u know ur best friend how much she enjoys going to disco , I mean going to disco is fine but she always ends up drinking a lot n '" "Dad please don't embarrass me u have been telling this to kripa on each on n every birthday of mine, since I have come here" ,Khushi put in with a pout and even kripa added "Ya uncle don't worry, she will be decent this time heehee'" "u krips ki bachi ur dead I am 1000times more decent than u, Mom dad talk to u later, now I have to teach this kripa some lessons" With that said n done a wild Khushi ran behind Kripa all through their never ending mansion, screaming in between or rather cursing "U moron rascal, ur calling me a cheapoo when ur triple dating n I am just double dating"

kripa stopped running at this n gave Khushi one of her murderous glance n then they both said together "None of is decent" n then ended up laughing hard .

London

Arnavs midnight surprise party was done with all the usual rona dhona stuff by Armaan n Arnav n in Riddhimas words there bucket got full so they went onto cutting the cake then they partied hard dancing to the latest tunes but the party was ended abruptly as they were called in by their head doctor whom they addressed as Hitler since their internship days n she had told that tomorrow early morning they would be have to head towards London as the sanjeevani branch at London had lost in their doctor strength due to a mishap in one of their wings, n the patient strength was too high to be managed by the doctors who were still grieving on the death of their colleagues .

Currently the trio were sitting at the cafeteria along with angad n discussing about the next days migration to London n Arnav was among the first to put in "I don't think I and Armaan would be having any sorts of problems, we who r born at the streets of India get to see New York along with London right buddy?" "Ya bro super right n I guess even u wont have a problem basket(riddhima) right?" "Naah no probs infact I am super happy as my cousin n her friend stays there" n then the trio turned towards Angad with all their eyes boring on him "Hey guys cool down ur gaze please, waise toh I don't have any major probs but then it will be too difficult to maintain a long distance relationship with all my girlfriends u see n if they come to know about my triple dating behind my back then I am sure the lady morcha would come all the way to New York to injure me" All the four including Angad ended up laughing hard, "Manh Angad trust u to make issue of the smallest, how do u manage a trio yaar I couldn't even manage one, that's the reason we broke up anyways am headed home, n Armaan bro end up ur coochie coo with ridzi bhabhi soon otherwise I will be asleep n no one being to open the door u will have to spend ur night at the doorstep" Arnav said, making riddhima turning a deep shade of red with embarrasement n to take revenge she put in "Arnav r u sure u left lavanya because u couldn't handle her or'" "Ridzi Bhabhi cut it out there, Bhabhi" Riddhima laughed hard but then whenever Arnav called her bhabhi she couldn't avoid blushing.

New York

"Ahh'Khushi, My moms calling n that's surprising how my bullakhad mom forgets my birthday but never forgets your, u only take the call"

With a smile of pride n putting her tongue out at kripa, Khushi took in the mobile n muttered in "Hello payal aunty,aww.. thanks its great that u always remember my birthday, no no aunty please no crying this time u always cry on while wishing me'beep'" n Khushi kept the phone n Kripa said with a sigh "As usual mom cut down the phone with all her melodrama, I really am jelous, its always been dad who reminds her of my birthday n on ur birthday she never forgets" "poor kripa Khushi teased in further, anyways kripa the laptop is already open n as tis time on my birthday I want to do something good lets start on with the project"

They both got to work they got to a sight were there were some topmost designers from the past n kripa n Khushi were scanning out their details n works n then they ended upto one particular photo n Kripa could hear was a thud on the floor with Khushis last words being Arnavji.

Pheww' done, this was long, I seriously need tons of comment to keep me goin

Love

nikki

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OMG mujhe yaad hi nahi tha i had so many unposted ya mid way left writing

Virman OS: Tere Jheel Se Ankhon Mein

"Maanvi yaar tu sure na ki u wanna sneek out,I think teri idea ekdum bakwaas hain"

"Oye u called my MY yani Manvi Choudhaty ka idea bakwaas?, then probanly teri akal ghas charney gai hain" manvi completed her sentence with a smirk on her lips ,folded hands around her chest and eyes holding Viraats black ones to her black ones.

"Oye partner u making me feel like hum koi bhaag ke shadi karne ja rahe hain haahaa…" said Maanvi with a playful smile on her lips n probably breaking the eye contact which was giving her butterflies in her stomach.

"Haahaa….partner par hum raat ko 12 'O' clock ko ice cream khane ja rahe hain,n u think bhabhi is gonna be happy when she comes to know about it? He retorted with an raised eyebrow and eyecontact which according to him for some reason his partner was avoiding.

"lo karlo baat yaha pe standing at the gate of the house tumhe bhabhi ki yaad ayi shay shay.." Maanvi teased him diluting the tense eyecontact

"Maanvi teri toh I had warned u beforehand itself,but then u were the one to say ki 'partner kyaa yaar tu toh super darpok nikla When Manvi Is hear Nothing To Fear' badhi ayi dialogue marne wali"

"partner dekh phukat mein gussa mat dila, when I get angry na, evn God cant save u from me haan nahi toh" Manvi stated with lots of fake attitude in her voice

"Tumse bachmna bhi kon chahta hain?"murmured Viraat

"Partner tune abhi kuch kaha kya?" Manvi asked innocently,to which he replied

"Kon me *with a shocked expression*, partner tu abhi hallucinate bhi karney lagi hain kya, kaan toh theek hain na?"(230)

Seeing her confused expression he breathed a sigh of relief n thanked God that she believed him.

Manvi had heard his words n now his dialogues had confused her more she would have let it out as a simple retort line but the way he answered her question made her think about the underlying meaning of the sentence.

She didn't want her thoughts to flow in that direction so she set herself on the road in search of the icecream wala n she needn't turn back to know that Viraat was following her.

She started humming the song "Yeh dostii hum nahi todenge…"

"Todenge dum agar tera saath na chodenge.." Viraat continued the song with his eyes set on Manvi n his face with a look that gave manvi the assurance about the fact that he meant each n evry word of what he said.

There Again Maanvi found herself draining in his eyes which held many untold emotions n gave her the jitters, she felt an unknown shyness run through her n her eyes automatically without her will looked down n Then came the Rains which gave her the perfect excuse to move away but she had noticed his hands moving towards her face n was curious about his intentions but then her heart had started beating with such a thud that she was scared of it to be audible to him so in a way she thanked the Rain God n let herself to enjoy the first rains…

Viraat couldn't help his lips from turning into smile looking at His Manvi dancing in the rains like a cute 10 year old,he wanted to tell her something but the rains had damned it n he was angry on the Rain God but now seeing the happiness on her face he felt like thanking the rain God

"Virat array partner who dekho ice cream wala..chalo jaldi before he goes off with his van" saying so Manvi rushed near the ice cream wala n odered for strawberry ice – cream for herself n looked towards viraat as to ask him wat he would have n he nodded his head as if saying No, manvi smiled n told the Ice cream wala ya "one strawberry ice cream that's all"

Manvi was one one hand having her ice cream n on the other hand was jumping in the puddle.when suddenly she felt the presence of some creature near her legs n looking down n recognizing the creature she shouted " Viraat yaar hold this Ice cream there is a cute little Mouse over here let me hold it in my hands"

But Viraat came near her n asked her to do against her wishes.and seeing anger on her face he turned her towards him n spoke, "

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haha 🤣🤣 bhai 🤗
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M<ere 2010 ke files missing hain open nahi ho raha🥺
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Tumhe kya bakwaas dikh raha hain😡
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bhai jaldi spam karke pages khatam karo iss CC ke 😈
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Hoola Hoola🤣🤣
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Originally posted by: Rafid.


haha 🤣🤣 bhai 🤗

🤣.🤣 ap kese ho 🤗
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Haan woh wale jo meine likhtey huye hi adha chor diya ya phir likha n badme bekaar laga

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