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the notebook

@the_notebook

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

im leavin too :-p
i gotta update LOL

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: sandy1

OK SO START WILL BE MAYOON
MAINLY ITS WOMENX FUNCTION BUT MENS ARE ALLOWED TOO FRM KHAN FAMILY ND ZAFFAR FAMILY WILL ARRANGE THIS (here we can have arnav teasing her with all kinds of post marriage things)

BRIDE ND GROOM SIT TOGETHER, (here we can have a little flash back of their childhood on their joint birthday, how cry baby she was, she didnot want to cut the cake with arnav as he teased her few minutes back with some kind of kiddish stupid stuffs. like maybe he will pull her frock up and say "ho! you only wear panty underneath look at me he will pull his tshirt up and show her the vest. and she will be all embrassed. blah blah blah)

BEAUTIFUL THAAL ARRANGED WITH MEHNDI, BANGLES, SWEETS, UBTAN/HALDI, GANA,
THEY APPLY OIL IN HAIR, MAKE THEM EAT SWEET, APPLY MEHNDI IN PAN LEAVE, APPLY UBTAN...SO IS RASAM (here we can have a cute challage scene between them were she wants to put mehendi on him but he refuses. then some how or the other she will win. may be he can choose the colour of bangles for her and she will blush and ask the person who was making her wearing the bangles to make her wear those which arnav choose. sweet rasam we can really innovate maybe we can put something like as mehendi challage was given by khushi this challange will be given by him where he will ask her to eat the sweet from his mouth while he will be holding the sweet with his teeth or something).

BANGLES AND FEW OTHER THINGS ARE USED AS GIFT FOR BRIDE ND HER FRIENDS

wow cool! 😃

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

plot for chapter three

well plot was cute one i loved how he being possessive and protect her, secondly how he change her mood.

but my little tufan mail ...next is nikkah honey and in muslims after mayoon till nikkah girl cn't go anywhere out her house 😆

secondly if we move this plot after wedding it won't be bad. as appy said on first night they wnt be doing "AHEM" so chill babes hum issay baad main rakh saktay hain.

as for now think abt next scene from kiss or we can continue from next day's morning khushi got up, she was excited yet nervous, happy yet sad today it was her wedding day her big day. then she remember her last night kiss with arnav

she blush and touch her lips...she still could feel his lips upon her. She hide her face in her palms feeling shy...

her ammi enter room ...how she miss her baba today, she tell to khushi if her baba was alive today how much happy he would have seeing his little doll getting married to his best friends son...advices her how to spend her life there in zaffar haveli. she has to compromise even if arnav is wrong...its zaffar's favour upon them they fulfilled your baba's wish...she advices to khushi to respect them their family, their relatives...etc how mother advices her daughter on wedding day.

she gets ready for nikkah, ...make up artist does her make up and hairs...how her cousins come and teases her...baraat comes girls tell her how much handsome her dulha is looking...just like some prince from dreamland...

Nikkah ceremony to be held...

then khushi brought outside khushi's cousin and friends does some rasam's

dinner...things

bidaiii

khushi entering her saasural...

then bedroom

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

i chkd it babes but u can talk to appy to according to me yeh abi appropriate nahi ho ga i hope u dnt mind honey

han we can add night scene koi aisaa jis main arnav khushi key kamray main a kar ussay tease karay

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

tufan i hope u dnt feel bad yeh let appy see this hope she could give some idea...according to me after wedding your plot will be more appropriate and loving and will help both to fall for each other

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

no i didnt feel bad..
its my take. and that is urs.
so its not always true that our pov's wud be the same...
i found ur plot a bit boring lol thats why i said so dont mind hehe i always write ffs whr all this stuff is thr maybe thts why i was bored wid urs lol sorry yaar
so its better we stick to urs as ur better *no im not sayin sarcastically* lol

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

i have to go.
u decide the chapter wid appy and tell me what i have to write..
give me the part and i will pm u it asap.
thanks and sorry if i sounded rude yaar...

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

i know honey thats more simple nd traditional yet boring one

well let see how can we fit both in one coz i m planing to divide next part into two parts a and b and we post them on two different pages.

so we can post two songs hehehehe😆

erm ...where that appy tell her to come and help here

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

well im not "forcing" u to mix my part...u dont have to do it to make me feel good...

just go wid the flow.
appy...dunno whr she is...i scrapped her so mny times :(