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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

GOOD TUFAN MAIL IS BACK TO HER CHIRPY ANTIC SO NOW EVERYONE STOP THIS EMOTIONAL TALKS.

VANI DEAR YOU HAVE TO START AFTER KISS PART

EITHER YOU CAN START FROM WHERE I LEFT OR YOU CAN START FROM LATE NIGHT OR MID NIGHT KHUSHI ALONE IN HER ROOM ARNAV GOES TO MEET HER

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

i wrote it this way...

tell me if its appropriate :-p

grr thats wronggg LOL ok..i will tell u how i imagined it, u tell me if its appropriate.and this time no gussa im shaantth now lol

ok, khushi goes to her room, arnav follows her, she thinks a lot abt their kiss and when he enters the room she explodes. she tells him how he hurts her all the time..how his frens have made fun of her and looked at her badly when she became a teenager...she tells him she is scared and all..and now his kiss has given everyone reasons...he comforts her..tells her she is pagal to think so much...she doesnt kno why but she lets him comfort her [ hug] and then he tells her that he will give her somethin...then he takes out that taaveez...and opens her hair [ her hair r very long he compliments her lol] then he slids them on the oda side and makes her wear that...and comes in front and kisses the locket..she tells him he needs to stop...and after some intimacy she breaks the vase makin him come out of his spell LOL

ok this is crap and unusual and uncharacteristic LOL but i thot it that way...and rest chapter sandy can write if she wants..

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Bapreee
this FF needs so much attention, pms scraps, chat club..grrr pagal kutta kameena kahi ka LOL

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

hahaha vani i'll read nd let u knw soon babes

i need to to go nahi tu meri mom mujhay maar dey ge ab

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

bang on vani

i loved it

both of you just keep it in mind that they are not going to make love to each other before their separation. they will be passionately intimate after their separation track.

So please keep it to nok jhoks and teasing only

Ocassional hugs and kisses are ok.

but nothing more intimate than this.

this is my pov please.

there is no hard and fast rule

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

ok
so shall i write like that?
sandy will write after that right?

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

ok, khushi goes to her room, arnav follows her, she thinks a lot abt their kiss and when he enters the room she explodes. she tells him how he hurts her all the time..how his frens have made fun of her and looked at her badly when she became a teenager...she tells him she is scared and all..and now his kiss has given everyone reasons...he comforts her..tells her she is pagal to think so much...she doesnt kno why but she lets him comfort her [ hug] and then he tells her that he will give her somethin...then he takes out that taaveez...and opens her hair [ her hair r very long he compliments her lol] then he slids them on the oda side and makes her wear that...and comes in front and kisses the locket..she tells him he needs to stop...and after some intimacy she breaks the vase makin him come out of his spell LOL

I LOVED IT THIS ONE IS PERFECT ONE.

MY SUGGESTION ITS NOT IMPORTANT U HAVE TO FOLLOW IT ITS JUST SUGGESTION U CAN GO FOR IT IF U DNT ITS OK.

khushi gets angry and leave from there, she is mad at him she shuts door on his face, he bang door but no result. From childhood though arnav how much love to tease her but when she gets mad at him, arnav can do anything to set her mood back.

later night arnav sneak in khushi's room

khushi is sleeping her room's windows were open.

then you add your taveez and mana thing.

in this way you can add teasing from childhood or bold talk of arnav etc etc...

is ka faida yeh ho no onewill be there to disturb them.

i again repeat tufanmail its not important for you to go for this advice. if u wnt to follow its ok if not no problem baby

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

ok i will write like urs nawabzaadi :-D
she cries..in start...

and in the end they get intimate.

what in the middle? i mean wat will u write in middle?