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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

hi i am here. sorry was stuck with 50 pms 🤢

i dont know how on each people started pming me 🤢

i am tired answering them 🤢

Vani sweety thoda relax karo yaar.

I know this story is your baby but i want to give you a suggestion and i hope sandy agrees with me (not forcing her)

I feel right now we should continue rasams and marriage these parts can come a bit later. i think we can include the tabiz part it is really sweet and adorable. Let arnav go to meet her the night before their marriage and make her wear the tabiz. it can be a loving gift from his side as he is not earning on his own and he wanted to give something from his side. he had Rs 100 given by his grandfather when he massaged his foot. We can show that his grandfather was dying in cancer. He saved that because on that day his grandfather died and he just couldnot spent that Rs 100.

We can show that maybe he will give loads of gifts to her but she will taunt him that these gifts doenot hold any value for her. she will only embrace something which he will give on his own money.

What say? Howz it?

Vani you can write this part.

Next update i will do the checking part only then.

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

yeh appy i too told her that

what she wrote we can add that later after marriage to make them fall for eachother.

i agree to her i too gave her same advice somewhere above to continue wid wedding andwe can add sneak at night scene arnav coming to meet her.

i think she is feeling bad coz i told her we will add her plot later on.

actually tufan mail we can add same teasing and vulgar talk again for arnav.

arnav scaring her on wedding day on stage abt suhaag raat like i wrote that thing

i wnt let u feel pain when i will enter you tearing you soft tissues apart... like this adding their childhood flashback again...their emotional yet funny acts on wedding day.

if u dnt mind tufan mail we both can write this time later on after wedding u can write chapter on your own.

i hope appy u wnt mind me writing again wid tufan mail.

mera tufan mail bujh gaya kya why i m feeling you aren't feeling good

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Im so sorry for reacting that way.
i was feelin a big left out LOL dunnno why...i think im updating so much of my FFs...and all the pms and everythin...then this FF..updatin...grrr LOL

ok we cn include that way...sandy u can write the traditional part..tell me what i have to write i will...

and appy u can correct okay?
but hey appy...i dun think it shud be emotional..lol..it shud be, him giving her all that taaveez and waistband..and then makin fun lol :-p
that she thinks too much :-p

im not sad
i just over reacted lol

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

ohh thank god my baby is fine now dumbo i felt really bad tufan mail araam say baith gaye.

i knew u didn't felt it good but seetheart shaadi ko beech main nahi choor saktay

mayoon kay baad ke raat ka you have to write

shaadi hai emotional tu ho ge na.

Ok you can add taveez thing waist band mat likna yaar dosray muslims peechay char jaye gaye not everyone believe in waist band black thread.

y i added note coz what i wrote in mayoon isn't islamic culture

well back to plot for chap three

u can write from after kiss scene she ran away or from night khushi thinking abt kiss

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

hahah ok i will b back i hav to go^^^^

no waistband..ok

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

okay she thinks abt the kiss and then the taaveez scene is it?
she will say he shdunt have done it in front of so many ppl now guys will make fun of her..she feels so bad nowaydays in teenage and all? then he comforts her lol

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

fine u get ur plot wen ur back ur part of update

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

id dint get u..
what is my part?
erm...ok i will write that whole starting part...whr arnav khushi meet
and u can write after tht :-p

:-D

ok then bye...
i will submit u mine soon...lets update it on next saturday

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

vani chill dude.

kya ho jata hai tujhe?

you dont sound good babes when you are serious.

aisa mat kar

Chocked ho jati hoon 🤢

tu chirpy achhi lagti hai.

Tu kiss ka part se suru karle. at the end you can show when khushi and her family leaving everyone is giving gifts to khushi.

even arnav is called to give the gifts, his mom hands over some gifts when khushi mocks him but on in front of others. (the one which i said)

he felt a little bad. and then goes to his room he thinks about that money and then goes to mosque to sit alone for sometime. just when he gets the tabiz with that money.

he then goes to her at night and she was hell scared.

you can put some naughty things here and ultimately when he was about to leave he gives her the tabiz

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

lol im sorry yaar i was a bit busy and cracked up
nd ok its true it was my concept..but tis FF is urs too...and appy's too..
im sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry yaar...for hurting u both...

ok..wat i hav to write u tell me..bcoz u kno i cant write emotional parts...like arnav feelin bad sittin in mosque..so its better u give me small parts, but fun ones.