From Mauritius to US via India and Norway! :D # 6

First Previous

Page

107

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Bus..has something really good to do to you :P

Quote

Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

I'm SO HAPPY, i took a leave from Clg today

Btw, will you come afterwards..i mean what time?? please come ok? aaj hi ka din hai merey paas :|

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

black_haze

@black_haze

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Where is the 'love' button for your story?

i want to click that a 123456789 times !!

Quote

Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: black_haze
Where is the 'love' button for your story?
i want to click that a 123456789 times !!

Awwwwwwww... :D :D D: seee i told you na :D

Love you tooo G <3

I sooooooo enjoyed writing this you know, it was like my DREAM :D

And now, I love you guys more, it like i know you guys more now and am an integral part of ur lives =))

Quote

Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Thanks G, you made my day, you are the Critic you know =))..

Quote

Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

G, are u busy???? :P..reply me na :P..am all bored =))

Quote

black_haze

@black_haze

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

quick things i absolutely loved:

--The bus connection(in dream cum reality)

--The mysterious end about being 21 and being in love.(very very nicely put.thumbs up vaish.am not lying.)

--Deep's description throughout the story-bang on.That is HER.Very nicely put!

--Mine and Virina's description-kudos for getting it right!

--Top dialouges!made me laugh out loud at the shocking similarity to reality.

--@last line-Please remove it.I never intended to look for words.Writing is a peice which is meant to touch people's heart and not their brains.Dictionary use karke koi bhi bade bade words use kar sakte hai,but this way a writer will only capture a person's mind.You have seen right through our hearts and written a emotionally beautiful peice!

Dont degrade the love for writing and reading i have by claiming i look for 'words'.I beg to disagree,vaishnavi.

Edited by black_haze - 14 years ago

Quote

sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Nooooo wonder I couldn't find your guys.. cause you moved 😆

Quote

Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: black_haze
quick things i absolutely loved:

--The bus connection(in dream cum reality)

--The mysterious end about being 21 and being in love.(very very nicely put.thumbs up vaish.am not lying.)

--Deep's description throughout the story-bang on.That is HER.Very nicely put!

--Mine and Virina's description-kudos for getting it right!

--Top dialouges!made me laugh out loud at the shocking similarity to reality.

--@last line-Please remove it.I never intended to look for words.Writing is a peice which is meant to touch people's heart and not their brains.Dictionary use karke koi bhi bade bade words use kar sakte hai,but this way a writer will only capture a person's mind.You have seen right through our hearts and written a emotionally beautiful peice!

Dont degrade the love for writing and reading i have by claiming i look for 'words'.I beg to disagree,vaishnavi.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkzzz.. :D

Aye G, i put that ONLY because i consider you as a judge =)...and it was particulary done for one word>> argumentative =)) :P

I'll remove it NOW :D..dont worry, loveyou sooo much

Nice getting to know tis side of you G :D

SHILPAAAAAA..pado :D