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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_girl1

nothing much yaar
I am gonna go voulenteer at a sience fair
and my mom keeps pestering me to do the laundry lol😆

lolzz.. eww i hate doin the laundry... lolzz
i gotta wal kall da way to da garage nd put in da machine nd everything.. lolzz
datz y i make my mommy do itt.. hehehhee😆😆...
so read this paragraph nd tell me how it is okay!

The positive aspect of this ff would have to be it's heart wrenching plot. Although the plot is justified, if a reader who haven't seen this show, wouldn't comprehend with the story. I personally haven't seen this show, so understanding the characters was a bit troubling. The character development is weak in this One Shot… In order to understand the plot of the story a character must develop throughout the story, in order to understand their motives.

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Posted: 16 years ago
ooohhh nice very nice
LOVED it
are you writing a one shot
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_girl1

ooohhh nice very nice

LOVED it
are you writing a one shot

noo.. itz like for this newsletetr thing on da ff section!
Lets just get straight to the point 😛

We have decided to start a Newsletter for our section! 🥳

This newsletter will be a fortnightly treat with contributions from a special group of members that keep you up-to-date with the happenings of our section!

It will feature Spicy Twists, FF Reviews,Thought-Provoking Quotes, Latest Arrivals, and much more!

**

But who will this team consist of?


YOU!


This is a hunt for our special team!


Do you think you have it in you to contribute to this exciting venture? 😉

Are you a dedicated worker, with creative ideas and analyzing skills? Will you be able to follow a time commitment?


Then move on down and fill out the following application!


All applications should be submitted to the ID: FF Contests by August 14th!


--

-FF Newsletter Application-

Name you like to go by:

Are you a reader, writer, or both?

How many FF's total have you read/are reading?

Why do want to be a part of the NL team? (4 sentences max)

--

Task:

You must review 3 stories. Use your own judgment to choose the criteria.

Two one-shots are provided, while the third can be an FF or one-shot of your choice.

The critique must be of a reasonable length, and it can either by negative or positive.

The Two OneShots that you must review are:

I Would Die

&

Red

--

Looking forward to the applications! Send em in quick! 😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
nice idea yaar did you think of it?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_girl1

nice idea yaar did you think of it?

yeah it is, but i didn think of it yaar.... itz an FF contest by Madz, nd i wanna join it.. but da problem is dat, we have to give our opinions in those two ffz dat mad required us for nd we have to choose anotehr one on our own..
da problem is dat da 2 dat MAdz chose for us, one of them is mine... How da fuk am i supposed to critique my own ff...??? itz so muc heasier for da otherz😭😭😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
SHRADHZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ YAAAr, tu mujhe phir se chor ke chaligayi...???
where r u! do i hav to call da cops to go find u.. lolzz😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

SHRADHZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ YAAAr, tu mujhe phir se chor ke chaligayi...???

where r u! do i hav to call da cops to go find u.. lolzz😆

heheh no I am here
actually i had to go help my mom make paani puri's thats why soory😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_girl1

heheh no I am here
actually i had to go help my mom make paani puri's thats why soory😆

oo lolzz...
mmmm pani pure.. lolzz
i just ate dal puri.. hehehehe😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
hehe
so that paraghraph was that for you own one shot?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_girl1

hehe

so that paraghraph was that for you own one shot?

nahi yaar,
it was for da contest thing dat i pasted for you..
okay c like in da ff section dere havin a new newletter thing, and ucan become a part of it...

This is a hunt for our special team!


Do you think you have it in you to contribute to this exciting venture? 😉

Are you a dedicated worker, with creative ideas and analyzing skills? Will you be able to follow a time commitment?


Then move on down and fill out the following application!


All applications should be submitted to the ID: FF Contests by August 14th!


--

-FF Newsletter Application-

Name you like to go by:

Are you a reader, writer, or both?

How many FF's total have you read/are reading?

Why do want to be a part of the NL team? (4 sentences max)

--

Task:

You must review 3 stories. Use your own judgment to choose the criteria.

Two one-shots are provided, while the third can be an FF or one-shot of your choice.

The critique must be of a reasonable length, and it can either by negative or positive.

The Two OneShots that you must review are:

I Would Die datz my ff!😭😭

&

Red

--

Looking forward to the applications! Send em in quick! 😛

and i wanna try out for this thing yaar.... but da problem is how am i supposed to give my opinion about my own ff yaar.. this is so not fair!

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