3# *The Random-erz* invite only ~Note pg 123~ - Page 66

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

ohk saz waht about sensual seduction update ?????? 'm waiting for it yaar ~.~

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

hey so sry for da late comment di.. actually ma cousin came nd he was buggin me, nd den splat... he put cake all around my face nd body. .lolzz i had to take another shower...

hehehe i'll update it yaar, i havent even wrote reveneg yet..! lolzz

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

it;s ok sazzz ~ r u going to update revenge before sensual ??

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

either dat.. o both at da same time!

ohk😊

hey guys wassup

hey shraddha ~.~😊

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

either dat.. o both at da same time!

ohk😊

hey guys wassup

hey shraddha ~.~😊

Originally posted by: guju_girl1

nothing much i am super bored my

internet wasn't working finally got it started

how about you?

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

hiam di, this is wat im gonna write for da criticism for da one shot RED!

The positive aspect of this ff would have to be it's heart wrenching plot. Although the plot is justified, if a reader who haven't seen this show, wouldn't comprehend with the story. I personally haven't seen this show, so understanding the characters was a bit troubling. The character development is weak in this One Shot' In order to understand the plot of the story a character must develop throughout the story, in order to understand their motives.