SwaRon SS: It's What We Do/Breathe In The Air |COMPLETED| - Page 12

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Reserve.

^Unreserve^

Phewww! Draining- Thats the word for this whole chapter! Its so emotionally draining.

And if there is someone who could have written it so beautifully, with so much pain that you nearly cry reading Sharon's story its just YOU.

Nishi, you were brilliant here. To be honest, I am not able to find words to praise you properly for this chapter. Even your "interesting stuff" merge so seamlessly with the situation. It was so beautiful that I want to stop writing because I am so scared I would dilute its charisma with my inadequate words.

I am amazed.

So very fulfulling Nish. So much.

Chitra :)

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

Update please..

Originally posted by: skywalker.

My god, I loved this chapter.. </3 Painful and so well written.

You attached Across the Stars 😲 🥺 what a good way to kill me

Originally posted by: sneharay

Amazing.. 👏

Originally posted by: .Vrushanholic.

That was beautiful. Their emotions were so raw and wonderfully put into words.Something about this chapter just holds onto to.
I want happy updates now :P
Update soon.

Originally posted by: --Ana--

Read this particular chapter, without reading from the start :P

After reading this, I'm gonna go and read it from the very start :P

Lovely update, even though I can't comment, cuz I'm clueless about the plot xD

Will be up to date with in the near future :P

Love Ana <3

PS : My comment is so doltish like me xD

Originally posted by: mythreyii

Painfully beautiful..

The whole update was mind blowing

The way Sharon started to tell her story or be it the point where she feels the old wounds should not have been rigged

Wonderfully penned.

Swayums thoughts in how beautiful Sharon looks is the highlight

Sharon's pain is much more higher and they want a way out from it

Well written

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

Wow !! That was so so unexpected. I wouldn't have ever been able to guess that painful past of Sharon. The amount of guilt and pain she's carrying inside her, I am pleasantly amazed how she's made it through till now.One could have just died of the suffocating emotions. Sharon stole the show completely here for me.I can't imagine how she lived with keeping that inside her for so long.

Finally she found someone to let that all out to .And it surely had to be Swayam. What followed was definitely a need to heal their wounded souls. Maybe no realization of love yet,but they both know it was an act that took place with true emotions. So yeah there's no looking back now.

It would be interesting to see how love is going to blossom from here on.You are totally unpredictable so I'm not even going to try guessing.

The parts written in Italics were my favorite lines here.They simply added depth to your brilliant skill of story telling.

I said you were being evil. Guess you took that seriously and gave us much more than a kiss!😳 Although whatever happened was totally situational. Can I hope next time something like this happens it would be purely out of love?..I guess no. No one can beat you when it comes to unpredictability. So lets just wait to see what you have in store for us. Don't make the wait too long:)

Beautifully written!!

Love,

Shreya

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

I m emotionally drained out..
Awesome update
Oh God
Sharon had to go through so much..

But swayam is with her..
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

amazing update... so emotional...