SwaRon SS: It's What We Do/Breathe In The Air |COMPLETED|

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Credits: .annihilation.





P r o l o g u e

It shouldn't have been a surprise.


She should've seen it coming.


But as he stood on the railing of his balcony, all thoughts lost coherency. She could see his back and it terrified her. What was he doing up there? What was he planning to do? With each steady step she took, she hoped it wasn't what she thought it'd be. He wasn't that kind of a person. Never before had he shown any sign of such a weakness.


"Swayam?" She called out softly, wishing she didn't startle him.


He turned his head sideways, his back still facing her. His face was calm and devoid of any telling emotions. She saw a smile come up his profile as he acknowledged her presence, with an air of a person meeting a friend in the park.


He should've known she'd definitely come here, try to reach him, stop him from doing what he was never planning to do. He had seen it coming. Who wouldn't, knowing about her need to care for others, despite whatever pain others might have caused her. Somewhere, he was glad she was here, by his side, caring for him. On the other hand, he wished she would get a life and stop caring about the people who screw her over.


But then, you can't always get what you want.


She was unnerved by his silence. His profile in the moonlight told her he was in deep in thought, but she didn't know if his thoughts were in her favour. She wrapped her jacket tighter, in an attempt to ward off the chill freezing her very bones. Come on Swayam! Say something!


"Hi Sharon."



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Posted: 9 years ago
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A/N:

HEY GUYS.

This is a new short story I've come up with and do not fret, unlike my other short stories, this one won't be left hanging. Four-Five parts and I'll finish it off.

So, how was the prologue? 😈

Kindly like and comment if you've read and liked this chapter. The responses on my works have been depressing for the past few days and if it's the same with this one, I'll discontinue it.

Next update on page 4.

No pressure though. 🤣

Cheers,
Rhapsody.

P.S. Add 'itsneverlupus.' to your buddy list for PMs. If you want them, of course.
Edited by Rhapsody. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved. Yo B|

^Unreserve^

Hey Nish. New Short Story even though I do not trust you with them but you said you definetely would finish this off. So I am going to trust you with it.

Errr. . .You literally started this off on a high, didn't you? 🤣

The prologue was quite nice. And I want to read more now given the way you have set this whole setting.

Waiting to read more from you and waiting to read it fast 😳

Chitra :)
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heya
That's a beautiful one
Prologue seems interesting and the best part is it kind of tells and still manages to hide the plot
Love the title of the ss too..
On the whole jus amazing prologue
Waiting for the story to unfold and the first chap to come our way
Plss don't discontinue at any point
Sure that ur work would glue ur readers
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unreserved dear friend :)

The banner looks Beautiful ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love ur works Nishi 👏
But pls do continue this OK 😊

I'm still lil sad u didn't update ur previous one 😔

But as u said u will update this I'm happy 😃

Waiting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Am stuck. Like, literally stuck!. Nice writing. Love reading your works & would definitely love to read further.
Thanks for the pm.

PS: Lovely banner
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue.. 👍🏼
Waiting for story to unfold.. 😊
Lovely banner nd title..liked it 👏
Do continue it..Update ASAP...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start...continue .. 😊

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