(Dark/Mature) Dangerous Liaisons SS (Complete)

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Firstly I'm really happy with your pace...Whenever I see a PM from you I'm literally jumping in excitement to know that there's a new update! 😆 And that itself makes me so happy!

You really have an amazing command over your language...You play with your words beautifully! When it comes to writing mature content you know exactly how to maintain a balance and it never looks vulgar,and that is a difficult thing to do..good job:)

Although I didn't really like the involvement of Ruhi in Swayam's life to such a personal level,I'm happy that its making Sharon realize her feelings for him slowly..For Swayam too,probably the jealousy is going to do wonders..or should I say that it already is?..

I really like Reyam's bond..Rey can actually make Swayam admit to things which he wouldn't admit to himself.

Rishi is a loving father-in-law and Sharon's growing attachment to him was a pleasant thing to watch.

Waiting to see what Swayam is going to do with the sudden realization and how is Sharon going to go through the same feeling too...

Brilliant work yet again!!..Take a bow! 👏

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pri98.arora

@pri98.arora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

A nice chapter...happy that finally both Sharon and Swayam are realising each other's worth in their life.

Loved rey in this chapter. A mature and understanding soul.

Update the next one soon. Eager to know what will swayam do now the mend the differences.

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Shradha

@ShradhaP13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Awesome👏

how can u write such long updates

but ne ways nice

want to know wht Swayam will do...

Thanks for the PM...😊

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swaronaaliya

@swaronaaliya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Amazing update.love reyam.ruhi and swayam part was shocking.thanks for pm.

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Wow

Awesome update

Loving this ss👍🏼

Loved rey here..

Cant wait to read more..

Update fast.

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Trupti Tamore

@VruShan_FanGirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Amazing update
both are feeling uneasy with seeing other person happy with another
I do really feel pity on Sharon because she has got punishment of her deeds but still
but not liking swayam's and ruhi's relationship status and that point only I do feel sad for shar ,
why the hell he was ignoring her front of everyone
and when she was being professional with other he had problem with it like seriously
I loved rey's explanation and thank god he is thinking on it

please do update fast really waiting eagerly for it

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

I m soo addicted to this story that i want to read it daily.. This chapter ws osme.. I felt soory for sharon.. Its been years nd ppl change in these years.. She is suffering for those things which she did years before.. .i had tears today reading ..hope they clear their air soon..
Nd you are an amazing writer.. Addicted.

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Hello neet

Kind of having mixed feelings.

Hated swayum and ruhis part.

The best part should be the files that kriya bought and her bond with rishi.

Am feeling sad for both of them

Neet pls get some good swaron and get them together dying to read something lighter..

Well writing undoubtedly was amazing and crisp..

But a little lighter chap pls. A clarity and style in writing is ur USP.

Get them together plsss..

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vrushiiii

@vrushiiii

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Awesome update 😊
Loved rey.. i want to read what swayam will do now... want swaron scenes.. but i am scared ab sharon kuch gadbad na kare please please want romantic swaron scenes ❤️ ..
You are an amazing writer... please update next part soon