||SwaRon FF: Broken Wings|| - Page 6

Totally Superb..suspense..waiting for next part 😊

Superb!! 👏
Ab wo ladki kaun hai
agar uske wajah se mere swaron ke bich problems hui toh main usse maar dungi
Hope Sharon kuch happy news de 😊
SwaRon phone convo 👏

Waitingg
update soon
Thanx for the pm

I just hope the news is happy 😲

But woah well done. A really great SS I must say :D waiting for the update. Update soon :)

Originally posted by: Rhapsody.

Reserved. Ooh, am I happy.

-Edited.-

I'm super happy that you're happy to see me here. But then, where else would I be?😎

Great start to the SS. It does seem a cheery one to begin with, but with a title like 'Broken Wings' and a banner with those images, I'd be a fool to ignore the clear signs of upcoming sadness. Plus, I know how much you love writing sad stuff.🤡(not more than me, though.)

The characters are wonderful, they are happy, peaceful and full of light; something I love to read. Your story telling skills are wonderful. Honestly, your short stories are up by a notch than your oneshots ( Not that they aren't amazing). You've got a knack of writing in continuation which I really admire.

The story's picking up pace now, with Sharon's mystery illness and Swayam's mystery acquaintance. And boy, am I waiting to read more.

So yeah, update soon.

I'll try to be here asap.

Cheers

Rhapsody.

p.s.I'm first.☺️

I love writing Sad stuff, yes! Sadist Me 😎 And obviously one would be a fool to think like that. I am just waiting to get done with all smile stuff. I hate to wait 🤔

Thanks Nish! Its always so good to hear whatever you have to say for me. Because you are the one whose writing I have admired and who has supported me from the start. 😃

Mystery! Yes! I suck at the genre I am writing! I hope I make it through 😕

Originally posted by: Lovestory55

You have me on edge! Sly can't wait to read more ! please update soon, the build up is killing me!

I hope to keep you on the edge with the coming updates too! I will kill one mystery in this update. 😊

Originally posted by: --lavanya--

Red

Will cmmnt on both parts together 😳

Hope you are going to unreserve this!

Originally posted by: --Ana--

Oh my my! What an update.

The way the story is unfolding is very good.

It's leaving me intriguing as to what might happen next.

The language flow was really good too.

The cute lil phone conversation was adorable.

Well I'm not going to draw any conclusions as to who the girl maybe or what is wrong with Sharon .

I'll wait for you're interpretation.

Coz it always happens with me,I imagine something but the writer has something else stored always! xD

So waiting for you to unveil more of the story.

Definitely looking forward for more.

I'm eager to know more of the matter.

PS : Thank you for another break xD

Love Ana <3

Lol!It happens with me too 😆 Thank you Ana!I absolutely loved your comment ^_^ And Thank you for the appreciation. . .I hope you will love the story more with coming updates 😊

Originally posted by: Deeksha02

nice update
loved phono convo part...
plz continue soon

I am glad you liked it <3 Sure! I will!

Originally posted by: swaronaaliya

Hey amazing chapter.do update next part soon.do pm me. ⭐️

Thanks Aaliya ^_^ I will for sure :)

Originally posted by: prajana

Checking our patience level..arent u??

Really cant wait to know what is up with sharon

And you are here with another suspense

Who is that girl??!!

Only 2 updates and i am already smitten to the story

Plz update soon😊

Am I now? 😆 I will tell you whats up with her in this chapter 😛 That girl. . . You have to wait for that! Smitten! Aah! I am loving the sound ❤️

Thanks for the support! 😊