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Posted: 10 years ago
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The previous thread got closed and I felt like starting this over again so posting in a new thread

concept

swayam had left college after having a ugly fight with the gang nobody knows whereabouts not even rey. sharon doesn't believe that swayam can ditch her or the gang

tum bin is the quest of sharon to find and bring her love back in her life



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Posted: 10 years ago
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prologue

this was actually the os that i had posted but this is the best prologue that i could think of

Sharon was sitting in a corner of terrace crying sliently which din't went unnoticed by simmi who came there looking for sharon as sharon's asthma pump was with her

Si-sharon tum theek toh ho na? sharon I know tum swayam ke baare mein soch rahi hoon mera dil nahin manta ki swayam jo kuch bhi humhe kehke gaya hain who sach hain I still cant believe ki woh aise hum sab ko ditch karke chala gaya

Sh-mera dil bhi nahin manta sim ki swayam aisa kar sakta hain zaroor uski koi majboori hogi mera swayam aisa nahin hain

Si- shayad uncle ke saath phir koi problem hogayi hogi

Sh-nahin agar uncle ke saath kuch hua hota toh taani ko zaroor pata hota baat kuch aur hi hain

Si- baat kuch bhi ho sharon par hum sach ko toh nahin badal sakte na ki swayam ab humhare zidagi se chala gaya hain hamesha ke liye chalo d3 ki practice ka time hogaya hain

Sh- woh chala gaya iss baat ka gham hain main kabhi bhi usse apni dil ki baat nahin kar paaungi simmi mera maan nahin hain u guys carry on main kuch time kiye akela rehna chahti hoon

Si- as you wish sharon but do take care of yourself aur zyada stress maat lena

After simmi left sharon got lost in the bitter-sweet memories of the time spent with swayam

(sharon thoughts in red)

Footloose auditions main maine tumhe pehli baar notice kiya aur phir rdx ke party mein tumhare liye pehli baar kuch feel kiya aur apni unhi feels ko hide karne ke liye main tumhare saath rude behave karne lagi

Tum bin kya hai jeena kya hai jeena

Tum bin kya hai jeena


Jab maine tumhe apni scrapbook banate hui dekha toh mujhe kuch samjh nahin aa raha tha ki koi mujhe se itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hain main bahut confused hogayi thi



Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise kaise jiya jaaye tum bin
Sadiyon si lambi hai raaten sadiyon se lambe huv din


Jab mujhe paata chala ki tum mere secret admirer ho toh maine tumhe misunderstand karke tumhe aur khudko bahut hurt kiya



Aaa jao laut kar tum yeh dil keh raha hai
Aaa jao laut kar tum yeh dil keh raha hai


Jab tumne locker room mein apne mujhe diye hua gifts jalaye toh mujhe laga tha ki jaise mere dil ka koi hisaa jaal raha hain aur issliye tumhe jaalane ke liye maine shivam ka sahara liya



Phir shaame tanhaye jaagi phir yaad tum aa rahe ho
Phir jaan nikal ne lagi hai phir mujhko tadpa rahe ho


Main jab bhi tumhe nicole maam se baat karte hua dekhti thi toh main bahut jealous feel karti thi aisa lagta woh tumhe mujhse cheen lengi



Phir mujhko tadpa rahe ho
Is dil mein yaadon ke mele hai


Phir ek misunderstanding ke chalte humhare phirse ek showndown hua classroom mein uss din tumne mujhe bahut hurt kiya tha swayam main bahut toot gayi thi



Tum bin bahut hum akele hai
Aaa jao laut kar tum yeh dil keh raha hai
Aaa jao laut kar tum yeh dil keh raha hai


Phir tumne mujhe ignore karna start kardiya mujhe aisa lagne laga ki tum mujhse ab pyar nahin karte main bahut darr gayi thi issliye maine humhe ek chance diya aur sach baatau toh humhara trial relation was the best thing happened to me



Kya kya na soocha tha maine
Kya kya na sapne sajaye


Footloose finals ke baad jab tumhari team mujhe blame kar rahi thi aur tumne mujhe support nahin kiya toh mujhe bahut bura laga tha


Kya kya na chaaha tha dil ne
Kya kya na armaan jagaaye


Jab dance camp se pehle tumne mere saath breakup kiya tha toh aisa laga tha ki sab kuch khatam hogaya phir hum phirse saath hoge meri life phirse complete hogayi thi



Kya kya na armaan jagaaye
Is dil se toofan guzarte hai
Tum bin to jeete na marte hai



Jab main delhi se waapis aayi toh tumhe khudse door karne lagi iss darr se kahin tum mere liye dance karna na chodo mujhe tumhara pyar chaiye tha sympathy nahin



Aaa jao laut kar tum yeh dil keh raha hai
Aaa jao laut kar tum yeh dil keh raha hai


India fest ki practice ke time pe humhara who close dance main chahkar bhi apne dil ko nahin rokh payi tumhare paaas aane se



Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise kaise jiya jaaye tum bin
Sadiyon si lambi hai raaten sadiyon se lambe huv din


Phir maine tumhe apne asthma ke baare mein baata diya aur humhara phir breakup hoga mujhe laga ki yeh tumhara fayde ke liye hain tum mujhse achi ladki deserve karte hoon aur hum sirf dost ban kar reh sakte hain


Aaa jao laut kar tum yeh dil keh raha hai
Aaa jao laut kar tum yeh dil keh raha hai



jab tum mere paas mere saath they toh main apni feelings apne actions ko kabhi samjh nahin paayi kabhi nahin jaa paayi ki isse kya kehte hain aur jab tum ab mujhse door chale gaye ho toh mujhe samjh mein aaya ki isse pyar kehte hain I love you swayam tum sirf mere ho aur main sirf tumhari tum jahan kahin bhi ho please waapis aajao main tum bin adhuri hoon main tum bin jeena nahin aata mujhe nahin jeena chahti hoon main tum bin mera waajud nahin hain


sh- I love you swayam I love you a lot tum bin jeena nahin hain par jeena parega tum bin sirf tumhare liye


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waisey I shouldn't comment seeing no comments from your side.

But your Fati loves you more isiliye I will comment 😉😃

Loved it to the core. Thanks for reposting it. Made all Swaron memories fresh in my mind.

Tum bin...the title says it all ❤️ This song is my favourite<3
Beautifully depicted emotions.👏👏 Loved this Sharon.

Waiting eagerly for the next update 😆 and your comments on Love After 😳

Love
Fati 🤗
Edited by HSFA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue
Loved the concept..
title is perfect..love this song
Update soon
Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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please continue... loved d concept...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is great..
I loved the os

For prologue..
It is awesome..

Plz update soon..
Can't wait to read more..

Interesting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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gr8 start
plz continue soon
eagerly w8ing to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I hd readed dis os almost year back (i guess)n i loved it n nw m happy di u r continuing dis in ff
plz di pm me whn ull upd
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Posted: 10 years ago
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cant wait to read more
update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey amazing concept do continue pls update soon

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