SWARON OS : FORBIDDEN TEMPTATION

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

god whenever i saw this scene or remembered it i always has goosebumps
n u penned it jst like that
i can feel that pain
im totally speechless

Quote

Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

its lovely... loved it... keep writing more... 😃

p.s- thank u for posting it.. 😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I love this scene
My all tym favourite scene ind3
Love SwaRon
N abt OS
Really amazing os
U write so well
Superb
Short n cute os

Quote

Renu Rajpurohit

@--RENU--

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

this is beautifull os..

u wrote it amazingly...

even I also wanted this scene on vrushan...

I love ur all work...

kese likhti ho yr itna amazingly...

keep it up dear...

Edited by renu_vrushan - 10 years ago

Quote

Nishtha

@Nicky-nish

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

luvly...
after dis scene I actually started luvng swaron...
dats y I luv it more...
glad u wrote an os on dis scene..

Quote

sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

I'm so happy you posted 🤗

Quote

ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Beautiful os

Loved it.

kaise likhte ho yaar itna accha

U knw I soo wanted to see vrushan on it..nd u wrote it..dat too so beautifully..thank u fr writing this..

Loved this - "he is not my temptation... he is my peace.."

Quote

Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Superb OS
Loved it <3
Very well written 👏
Sharon's feelings were protrayed beautifully :)
VruShan performing this scene would have just been perfect <3
Keep writing!

Quote

LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Gooshhh i still remember this scene 😭

One of the beautiful moment of swaron's life...😳

and the part which made me fall in love with shan and sneha...when i was watching this i couldn't take my eyes from the screen ... they both were nailed it...

even i wanted to see vrushan to portray it. but as u said some wished are beautiful when it was unfulfilled...

really beautifully written..👏

and u know ani the canteen scene before this was the first ever swaron scene i have seen... and i became a constant viewer of d3 and a crazzy fan swaron 😳

really loved it

keep writing about the beautiful scenes 😳

Keechu

Quote

NUPUR AGARWAL

@--NupurSwaron--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Absolutely brilliant piece of work ...n yeah I too wanted a flashback of dis scene wid vrushan bt nevertheless u fulfilled d wish n I cud only imagine vrushan in dis scene as it was so beautifully penned down

Keep writing more n thanks 😊