SwaRon SS: Stay with me forever! (Finished) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
this is very cute story
swaron being all lovey dovey all swaron fans would love to read such stuffs

ua doing a very good job writing this

m already in love with the bubbly sharon and her pranks

with each move its totally clear that they both are madly deeply and truly in love

thats wat makes it beautiful do continue

love *_*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Here comes the third part of the SS! I was free today from tution and schools so I wrote the three parts today itself! The SS will have its next two updates quite long bt this one is small!
PART-3
He went to his room n entered the attached washroom and cleaned himself. As he came out, Sharon played another prank. She was standing just outside the door with a jug of water and as soon as he opened the door, she threw the water on him and there he was standing, completely drenched in water.
Sharon was expecting a revenge and as soon as she saw Swayam raising his eyes she ran into the washroom pushing him aside and closed the door. Bt Swayam didn't reply in any way. He just went towards d cupboard, took out a towel and wiped himself. He had a smile on his face bt when he saw Sharon peeping out of the washroom door, he put up a stern face again and pretended to be angry! Sharon made a cute puppy dog face and came close to him bt Swayam completly ignored her and went outside the room. Sharon was disappointed and soon realized that her man was angry on her. "So ab to use manna hoga! Chal beta Sharon, lag ja kaam pe- MISSION SWAYAM KO MANAOFY"
She rushed outside calling his name bt angry Shekhawat didn't stop. "Sharon se gussa hone mein kitna maza aata h! Dekhtein h ye kya kya karti h".
When they reached the living area, they found the gang getting ready to go out and explore the place. It was around 2pm when all of them reached the activity zone of the place. Swayam was standing with Bharat when Sharon came from behind and asked him to join her for walk around the beautiful garden area bt he showed off some attitude and asked Bharat to come to the activity area. The entire gang along with Swayam and Sharon went on to try out the military tasks. First one was the Mowgli sway where they had to hold on to a rope which would swing and take them from one end to the end. Sharon planned along with Simmi and Bharat to somehow send Swayam n Sharon at the same time so that they could hold each others hands and sway as there were two ropes and so two people could go on the ride at the same time bt Swayam spoiled it all and took Amar along with him since only he, Amar, Sharon and Bharat were left. Bharat and Simmi would never dare to go against Sharon's orders but poor Amar knew nothing abt the plan and became the target of Sharon's deadly glares. After this, they moved to the net climbing where they had to climb up a net and ring the bell. Nilesh won in the net climb race and this was followed by the activity where they had to use a rope to hang on and cross the stream with its help. The gang enjoyed a lot bt Swayam enjoyed Sharon's efforts n her puppy dog face more than the activities!

Finally after an hour of enjoying the other tasks, the gang moved to the rock climbing zone where there was a 50 feet tall steep cliff and one had to descend down from the height to the ground while gears and harness attached.
Sharon loved rock climbing and this time she was in full mood to take Swayam along with her bt Swayam refused to go. The entire gang insisted and he being the kindest of all men on earth decided not to put their request down and go along with them despite the fact that he was an acrobat, cliffs and mountain views scared him. He didn't fear from small heights like 10-20 feets after all he had performed so many aerial acts but beyond that, he was scared of heights. He didn't want Sharon to drop her plan to climbing becoz he knew that if Sharon came to knw about it, she would surely cancel her plan to climbing n he would never let that happen. Swayam was standing near the dress up area where all of them were made to wear their safety belts, helmets, bands, guards and harnesses. Soon they were asked to step out and start.

Precap: Swayam shocked to see Sharon fall off the cliff in a rapid speed!!😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
luved all d 3 updates...so nycly penned down swaron stories related to track are always a treat bt a small request to see sharon being d lover girl jst lyk our majnu always wanted to read somethng on sharon's unconditional love for swayam i knw dis is ur frst wrk bt its jst a request if u wnt to consider bt nyways update soon waitng foe d nxt update n lyked ur story😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Of course I will consider this bt I hv already written the following 2 parts and will be posting them tomorrow so I will make sure to include this point in other writings of mine! Thanx for commenting! Hope u all r liking my writing and hope I will b able to stand up well!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
I am loving this ss!!
please update soon and do pm me pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Like sharon ke trys but excited for next update update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Wow, an update so soon. It was a lovely update but was short. Loving it more since its related to the unfocused D3 track. Swayam is scared of heights but don't wanna reject the idea cuz of Sharon. Aww, he is such a sweet boyfriend😛 .You are doing a good job with this SS. Thanks for the pm and update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Here is the fourth update, the second last one for the SS.
PART-4
As all of them were standing near the edge of the cliff, Swayam maintained a safe distance so that he would not be able to see down from the 50 feet height and hence could avoid the panic attack! Bt our diva thought that Swayam was doing so in order to avoid her! And this could not be tolerated by her. And thus she made a plan. She went near the man handling the harness and asked him to lower down the harness at a go to a small distance when Sharon would pretend to fall! Yes, she planned to fake an accident and make Swayam realize her importance in his life. While they were standing on the edge all ready to go down, Sharon called out Swayam's name and waved a hii! He replied to her hii with a fake smile as he was to scared to smile at that moment.
Sharon: (standing at the edge while the others started to descend) Swayam come here! Please! (as Swayam made a stern face looking at her in compliance with his pretence Sharon shouted again) Swayam, what if I don't come back to u ever!
This line hit Swayam and his heart started pounding, what if something happened to his Sharon? He started walking towards her but she was in full mood of joke! She shouted:
Swayam, do you forgive me?
Swayam (realizing her joke): No! You think its a joke to stand here at the edge of a cliff and blackmail me to talk to you? This has just triggered my anger.
Sharon: (this was enough to hurt her self esteem and she shouted) If you won't forgive me, then this life of mine without you is not worth living!
And she opened her arms and fell back as Swayam stared at her angelic face! He came near the cliff only to find Sharon descending down at a high speed taking his name and saying those three magical words! Swayam was overtaken by a shock when he saw Sharon slipping down! He ran on his left to catch her harness and tried to pull her up bt heard her shriek! He didn't even have a look down the cliff and stood on the edge stone still! Sharon's plan was successful! She had descended only 15 feet down and the man had caught hold of her harness and slowed the pace causing her to stop abruptly in between which forced a shriek out of her mouth bt Swayam took it wrong. He thought he had lost his Sharon! He was already feeling short of breath and drops of perspiration covered his head and face! He was feeling very helpless and felt that he would fall off his feet any minute. He got a panick attack and soon he lost his balance and fell on his right, hitting his head on the iron box fixed to the ground consisting the pulley and fainted!
Every1 standing on the cliff top ran to him except the ones handling the harnesses. They got him up and made him lie on the table nearby. They called for the medics of the resort and the men shouted and informed the gang about Swayam's unconsciousness and pulled them up. Sharon was too below to hear that without a loudspeaker and this she was the last one to be pulled up and informed abt Swayam! Rey was the first one to reach him and he was terrified to see Swayam's face smeared with blood! The medics arrived and that's when Sharon came to him running. She too was broken to see Swayam in that state. The doctor checked him and said that the symptoms prove that he is an acrophobic and that he suffered from a panic attack. He asked the gang to use the resort ambulance and take him to the nearby hospital as soon as possible. The gang hurriedly got off the cliff with Swayam, Sharon holding his head in place and her hand over his roughly covered wound to stop the continuous blood flow. Sharon was devastated to see Swayam like this. Moreover he was angry on herself that she played such a prank which can cost Swayam his life. He was rested on the bed inside the ambulance. The doctor adjusted some machines in case they were required while Nilesh and Sharon sat beside Swayam. Swayam was taken to the nearest hospital which was luckily one of the best hospitals of Mumbai. On the way to the hospital, Swayam's breathing got heavy and he opened his eyes. He could only see the Nilesh's face. He tried to ask about Sharon and in reply Nilesh nodded a no, trying to ask him not to worry she is fine. Bt before Nil could finish, his breathing got even more heavy and he closed his eyes thinking about Sharon! He relived the most beautiful moments of his life spent with Sharon, his promise to never let anything happen to her and when he saw Sharon falling off the cliff in his subconsciousness, his heart went into a cardiac arrest due to the trauma. Due to the lack of medicines and machines, the doctor could only give him CPR to get his heart working! Sharon asked the doctor abt Swayam's condition bt when she didn't receive an answer, she held his hands and started asking him to stay with her, to fulfill his promise, asking him not to leave her.
In a minute or two they reached the hospital and the doctors rushed to Swayam while the one already attending him continued with CPR. Pumps were given to him in order to revive his heart till the time they reached the OT. As soon as Swayam entered the OT, Sharon completely broke down in Rey's arms who reached there at the same time. (The other friends were following the ambulance in Rey's car and reached there just when Swayam was taken into the OT). Rey consoled Sharon and said that Swayam would be just fine! But Sharon wasn't in a condition to be comforted. She started remembering each and every moment spent with Swayam and dats when she was reminded of the locket. She took the Radha Krishna pendant in her hands and screamed: "Why?? Why did you give your good luck charm to me Swayam! This was supposed to be with u to protect u. Y did I accept this! Y,...????" And she fell on her knees and started weeping and praying for her Swayam to come back! Dats when a nurse came out and informed that his situation is very critical, his heart had stopped beating already! They were allowed to enter the OT where they saw a huge glass in front of them and Swayam lying on the OT bed on the other side of the glass wall! It stabbed Sharon in her chest to see Swayam in such a condition. His forehead was bleeding and a nurse was wiping his blood but the doctor's were busy in reviving his heart! His heart lacked carotid pulse and one of the doctors was giving him injection while the other one was preparing for a shock. They looked at the pacemaker device bt it revealed zero pulse. They gave him the first shock, his body moved up and down bt it failed to revive his heart. The second time also it failed bt the third time it worked. Sharon murmered: "Not him god, plz not him, he is the best person on earth jisne kabhi bhi kisi ka bhi bura nhi chaha so y him ? Plz Swayam don't leave me! Dont break ur promise baby please."
And dats when the third shock was given! It was successful in finding a pulse and the doctors were relieved a bit. They placed an oxygen mask around his mouth and continued to treat his head injury. It was a deep one. A lot of blood was already lost. The nurses put a drip and a bottle of blood for him and the doctors were operating his injury. Sharon couldn't see him in such a state and rushed out of the OT. She kept running till she reached the idol of Ganesha placed at the end of the hospital corridor. She went on her knees and prayed for Swayam. Rey and Simmi followed her and when they saw her praying, they too joined her. They had sat there for some time when Vicky texted Rey to come to the OT asap. He left Sharon there and eyed Simmi to look after her and ran to the OT. Rey completely broke down to see his better half, his best friend Swayam in that state. Swayam's breathing had gone heavier and the doctors were trying to bring his breathing under control. Bharat and Amar hugged each other and started crying while Rey fell in his knees, covered his face with his hands and wept silently. One of the nurse came out from the OT and on being insisted by Rey and Vicky, she informed that internal bleeding had started and that's why the situation has become worse. Their eyes became moist again and just as the nurse left, Sharon entered the OT. She had heard the nurse's words bt now she came in with a confidence that nothing could take away his Swayam from her. She held the pendant in her hands and said: "Agar tumne mujhse kabhi bhi ek pal ke liye bhi sacha pyaar kiya h Swayam to tm mujhe chodkar nhi jaoge"
Her prayers worked. Swayam's breathing came under control and internal bleeding also reduced within the next 15 mins. The doctors were happy that their treatment worked bt somewhere even they knew that it was Sharon's prayers that forced this miracle to happen. The doctors closed in on Swayam and the nurses cleared his wounds and wrapped the bandages. The doctors came out and patted on Sharon's back saying that he has improved a lot and he would be fine. The gang was asked to leave the OT.

Only one more update left! Hope u liked this one!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
read all d parts
liked them👍🏼
nice wrk
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Emotional update. Well written. Update the last part soon.

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