SWARON FF : FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID *CHAPTER 20 PG:137 UPDATED*

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#311

nice update

i really feel bad for both of them

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Nice update...

Quite emotional... too good

Beautifully written

Liked it

Thnk uh for pm

Update soon

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

dis is very well penned... loved d chap... hope jaldi maan jaye sharon... & thoda romance mile... 😛

p.s- i nvr told ke ur poems r awsm... beautifully penned... keep writing ... god bless... 😊 update fast 😃

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..RiSha..

@..RiSha..

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

good chapter glad that you dint take it the way i expected the story to move

i liked the small convo bw swayam and taani you dint rush there to bring swayam and sharon meet

somewhere i feel it was required and HOPE swayam had that it was him that was nice i liked it

swayams asks sharon the truth and she refuses to give in i feel she is stubborn but her character is strong so i expected this

swayam being a little childish there i expect a convo bw rey and swayam in future i think its needed for swayams character to enhance

and the poem it was very well written

each and everything u wrote in the chapter was sum up in few lines

i feel that this was one of the best poems in the ff so faar

and the last 2 lines of it pulled it off soo well soo proud of you who have written it way to go gal

i expect much more from this ff so lets c how it goes

^_^

love

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Awesome update👍🏼

Loved it..nd ya take it slow m loving it this way.

Felt bad for both of them😭

Especially swayam- "isiliye... isiliye mujhe koi chance nahi dena tha... Isi baat ka daar tha that if I allow myself to feel for someone wo nahi samjhegi... Mai samjha nahi paunga... Kal tune bhi bola aaj usne bhi same baat boli... mai utna important thodi na hoon... Par usi ne majboor kiya... ek chance den eke liye... Aur diya to ye hua... so basically I was right and she was wrong..." 💔

Poem was beautiful..super awesome as always. just loved it especially last lines

"Zehen mein jaga ek kashmakash hai

Kya use mujhse mohabbat hai

Ya fir usne kiya sirf mere awaz se pyaar

Aur mujhe mana sirf apna yaar..."👏

update soon..

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Ritika

@ritz15

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Amazing update😉

It was so painful😭

Swayam confronted sharon bt she lied

Wish swayam had heard d full show ...

Nd d poem like always was superb👏

Nw update super soon

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#317

first of all am sorry i cudnt comment on all updates individually

chap 3

nice update

swayams attempt to console the guy

but to his awe the plan of reverse psychology did not work

sharon explaining to the guy that

he should look at the positive side of

the matter rather than committing suicide

swayam surprised at her way of getting things done

swaron convo was good

chap 4

swayam taking sharon along with him

to his secret place -the orphanage

the stall;swayams friend- the small girl angel

swayam opening up to sharon bit by bit

their journey back home

thanks to the wiper that wasnt working

sharon saving the small puppy amidst the rain

swayam saving her from the accident

he felt something 4 sharon

both of them getting to know each other

chap 5

swaron taani and rey in rehearsal hall

they playing truth or dare

swayam fumbling at the truth to be answered

indeed swayam has changed

swayam confession that he lovs a girl

hurting sharon an she moving out

even swayams mom feels that he has changed

chap6

swarons convo

swayam urging her to sit with him

sharon telling him that she doesnt mean

anything to the person she luvs

and swayams concern for her

taani and sharon convo

and sharon assuring that shes all fyn

swayam had started getting a

connection bw rj and sharon

swayam thinking abt sharon as he listend to the rj

chap7

swayams mom pulling his leg

swayam swaitching on the radio early morning

swayam certaainly has some feelings for sharon

rey asking him to name the girl and he lukd at sharon

poor sharon she wasnt sure if she shud be happy or sad

taani nd sharon convo was indeed needed

sharons condition and poem

swayam heard it

and you gys stoppd ri8 there

chap 8

swayam understood that it was sharon

swayam wanted to know if it was he who sharon lovd

he openening sharons bag to find the file in her bag

asking her to explain why she didnt tell him

swayams confession

sharons denial

swayam thinks that she lovs some one else

shit swayam shud have listened to the radio show

sharon hearing swayam through the phn

this story is getting interesting

i cant wait to read further

i hope i ve compensated for not commenting for so long

the poems you guys write are really awesome

i particularly love the rj part

in each update

update nxt part soon and do pm me

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Finally Swayam got to know it's Sharon..

But Poor he, Sharon rejected him.

Why is she denying her feelings.??

Swayam is so heartbroken..

Taani is such a sweet sister and friend too.

Update soon.

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NUPUR AGARWAL

@--NupurSwaron--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#319

Luved d update so finally d truth is revealed n really felt bad for swayam bt both r ri8 on dre places sharon's action is justified as she thinks swayam loves d voice more den sharon as a person bt i hope soon all d confusion gets clear ...

Once agn loved d poem it was beautiful n each word expresses sharon's feeling

Update soon n thanks foe d PM😊

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A true Shantanu lover *_*

@--Ana--

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#320

Res :) will read all parts & unres jaldi :)
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Finally time mila to unres :p
Okay so the story has been really good till now...
Its a really gripping story 😉
Loved ur writing 😃
U both are such good writer's 👏
Sorry couldn't give chap wise comment
But my school started so no time 😭
I'm really sorry for late unresing
But u guys should know one thing I lovvveeeddd the story 👏
Thanks for pm 😃
Agle time se pakka I wont be late 😛
Ani and nabanita u guys rock 👏
Doing a fine job ⭐️
Do continue the awesomeness 😃
-anagha 😃

Edited by taareyswarond3 - 10 years ago