FF: To Be or Not to Be. [Chap4. Pg 24] - Page 12

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

You are undoubtedly woman of words :3

Longer update this time and sooner too

So it was Swayam only who pulled her into water and well saved too :p

Crazy duo :v who will say they are married and that to to each other :3

Both seem like opposites personalities in many senses

Sharon's past swimming experience is very nicely written

Coming to the end of update Swayam's monologue is the best part ^_^

'Setting him up with his best friend in a relationship which was as fatal as it was beautiful.' Loved this line

Lets see if it turns to be fatal for them or beautiful :3

Thanks Nishi..

Originally posted by: aishamathur

You scared the hell out of me Nishi yesterday😕.. How I hate you.

But this turned out so cute and eepery.😳

Thank you.

As I was reading I had all the points noting down in my mind to put into this reply but the line

'Swayam was calculative' just cracked me up!😆😆

I am still laughing on the same..

Wonder how many similarities would come up. :3

If you know what I mean.😉⭐️

Such a cute edit.Thank youuu for the update. 🤗

Now waiting for next.

Update soon!😃

Originally posted by: Ires011

Whow u Updated Fast n yeh i loved it as Always :)

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Meri seat hai :P

First things first. . .WELL DONE :D

You gained it this time. . .When Sharon said Swayam she wont call him Moron from next time. . .OMG! Trust me I laughed hard 😛 and You-Know-Why 😛

The chapter was great to read. The way Swayam thought he had crossed the line. . .It was again a subtle expression of his care. Swayam's POV was really well written. . .The way he was not sure of future and yet his present is soothing and it is enough for him right now 😊 I really liked how you penned his whole thought process here.

Well done!
Now this well done is 'Earned' 😛

Chitra.

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