FF: To Be or Not to Be. [Chap4. Pg 24] - Page 13

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Swayam is crazy ...pheke khud hi paani me dhaka deta h n bhvng lyk I-DON'T-KNW-ANYTHG ...n calculative swayam :-P
bt starting perhaps me dara diya tha...n past memory was i lyk mst in dis prt :-)
n chp was Nyc:-)

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Read chap 2 nd 3..

Awesome updates..luving this ff..

Chap 2 - it was cute nd funny..dramebaaz swayam..😆

Chap 3 - loved it..flashback, der talk nd specially ending part..

👍🏼

Originally posted by: -.wanderlust.-

Reserved.

-Edited-

Swayam and Sharon are two opposite personalities altogether, As our physics book states 'Unlike poles attract each other'; that's with them. They are married & had been friends since long yet they have so much to explore in each other.

Their usual love-hate conversations mixed with Swayam's comic side & Sharon's bitterly sweet anger are a treat to us. That is sweet.

The flashback was nice :D

Swayam's monologue was the best thing about this update.

"And, he thought how fascinating the working of the Universe was. Setting him up with his best friend in a relationship which was as fatal as it was beautiful."

Perfectly penned statement.

-Ayushi

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Nice one dear
Past swimming part was well.penned

Not on your face
Haha
Nd calculative swayam.
Wah

Thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

so cute... loved der sweet fight ... 😃 der "honeymoon" started in a cute tone... 😆 loved it... do update soon...

Originally posted by: Propinquity.

I love the easy friendship that Swayam and Sharon share in your story - it is beautifully conveyed.

You also portray Swayam's inner conflict really well, with a lot of depth and clarity.

You have me hooked, and I can't wait to see your characters truly realise the extent of their feelings for each other.

Well done. I can't wait to read more.

Originally posted by: flyinghigh_ani

i opened my account thinking

'hope aaj nishi update de de...'

n wohoaaa... here i find the pm...

coming to the update...as usual loved it...

sharon called him a moron??? seriously???😆😆

anyways... waiting for more...

love ani

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

i knoe am so early at commenting :P

sorry nish

well chapter two was fun

their cute convos on dividing the chores

poor swayam couldnt refrain from sleeping

i loved this one #epic

swayam I-love-to-Sleep Shekawat🤣

melodramatic swayam in the morning too

swaron in the beach

and the way you ended chapter two mahn i thot it was something else

chapter 3 was nice

it was swayams prank

it turned out really cute

their friendship and hug^_^

poor sharon mr. calculative shekhawat

really in love wid dis FF

keep updating

thnx 4 d pms

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Super chapters! Loving the fights between them and lol that hit was hillarious XD poor swayam! The way she hugged him after he saved her from the water was aww ;')
Lovely updates.
Keep writing!

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Amazing series. Enjoyed reading the three chapters. Very nicely done up, you have really great writing skills. Continue soon :)