FF: To Be or Not to Be. [Chap4. Pg 24] - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Reserved.
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Swayam and Sharon are two opposite personalities altogether, As our physics book states 'Unlike poles attract each other'; that's with them. They are married & had been friends since long yet they have so much to explore in each other.

Their usual love-hate conversations mixed with Swayam's comic side & Sharon's bitterly sweet anger are a treat to us. That is sweet.
The flashback was nice :D

Swayam's monologue was the best thing about this update.
"And, he thought how fascinating the working of the Universe was. Setting him up with his best friend in a relationship which was as fatal as it was beautiful."

Perfectly penned statement.

-Ayushi
Edited by ayushimehrotra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one dear
Past swimming part was well.penned

Not on your face
Haha
Nd calculative swayam.
Wah

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
so cute... loved der sweet fight ... 😃 der "honeymoon" started in a cute tone... 😆 loved it... do update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love the easy friendship that Swayam and Sharon share in your story - it is beautifully conveyed.
You also portray Swayam's inner conflict really well, with a lot of depth and clarity.

You have me hooked, and I can't wait to see your characters truly realise the extent of their feelings for each other.

Well done. I can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
i opened my account thinking

'hope aaj nishi update de de...'

n wohoaaa... here i find the pm...

coming to the update...as usual loved it...

sharon called him a moron??? seriously???😆😆

anyways... waiting for more...

love ani
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice...swaron love fights is soo cute...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Edited on page 15.
Edited by ayushimehrotra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i knoe am so early at commenting :P
sorry nish
well chapter two was fun
their cute convos on dividing the chores
poor swayam couldnt refrain from sleeping
i loved this one #epic
swayam I-love-to-Sleep Shekawat🤣
melodramatic swayam in the morning too
swaron in the beach
and the way you ended chapter two mahn i thot it was something else
chapter 3 was nice
it was swayams prank
it turned out really cute
their friendship and hug^_^
poor sharon mr. calculative shekhawat
really in love wid dis FF
keep updating
thnx 4 d pms


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Posted: 10 years ago
Super chapters! Loving the fights between them and lol that hit was hillarious XD poor swayam! The way she hugged him after he saved her from the water was aww ;')
Lovely updates.
Keep writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for an update,soon😕

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