SwaRon OS Series : #3 Pg10.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: i.am
It's fantabulous..
I loved both the parts...
and would like to request you to turn the last os Into an ss or ff.. but it's totally up to you.. these are brilliant pieces of writing.. and I really wanna read more of it...
Thank you

Thanks a ton for liking this. I would consider continuing it, but I have so much on my plate right now, with minimal inspiration to continue. I'd like to end some stuff before taking up something new. Though I would personally like to consider it.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: -spongy-
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OMG!

This was too good. The writing, the story and the spontaneity.It was short but it showed a complete image. I really enjoyed reading it. You are a really good writer.Please do write more OS's like this. You guys are the reason why SwaRon are still alive in our hearts.

Thanks a lot for the PM. Update soon.
Sorry for the late feedback. Exams.. 😊

Hey. I am glad you liked this one. :)

And geez, thanks. I really don't think I keep the SwaRon alive, but it is a huge compliment anyhow. Thanks again.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: nidhi.nidsnicks
well written
loved it
do continue soon

Thanks a ton.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: ujwalv
loved it..
great wrk.👍🏼

Thank you mate.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Well its great piece..
Loved it
Poor sharon
Hahaha
She still wanna break his teeth.aww

Thanks a ton for liking this. :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Its great ...
Loved it...😳
God sharon is tooo 😆...Loved her anger...
it was so simple still was nice 😃

Keechu

Hi Keechu.

I am glad you liked this.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: vrushanlove
Loved it...well written...keep writing...

Thanks for the appreciation. Glad you liked it.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: aneesha93
Nice one. Do continue soon

Thank you so much for your appreciation. I will try and continue, though not promising anything as I have too much on my plate.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Rhapsody.
Reserved. I am going to come back after 20th too. 🤔
-edited-

I did come back after 20th. Just not very early. Sorry for that. Life has been shitty. 😳

I really enjoyed reading this one Nivriti. It was quirky and amusing.

Swayam and Sharon's conversation was helluva cracking. Sharon's fixation on Swayam lips and Swayam's reaction on knowing that. He must have been really pleased with himself. That sly.

Keep writing.

Cheers.