SwaRon OS- Love Sustains, Not Always Stories! - Page 3

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

it was too emotional
separation arghhh thought hi pasand nhi mujhe
beautifully wriiten dear

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Dew..

@Dew..

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Posted: 10 years ago

U wrote this os direct dil se. . .i wish the writer write something like this in the show...
U beautifully penned down the current situation. .the end of this os was so painful..
Loved the os. .keep writing dear

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nida

@mystery75

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Posted: 10 years ago

love sustains not always stories... abeautiful and such a deep thought

this os portrays the inner feelings and turmoil of swayam and sharon perfectly

but the ending is undoubtedly amazing so far yet so close

their love can only break them apart not the world and this is so true for swaron in all ways

the dialogue, the emotions, the feelings ahh cant stop reading this piece of writing again and again

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@Incorrect

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Posted: 10 years ago

heey sakshi

it was soo emotional

loved the way to described their love

and pain but the best part was that both understood the other one was not at fault

the longing was heart wrenching all in all a very well penned os

keep writing

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

heya sakshi

nice take on the current track

it was emotional

thnx 4 d pm keep writing

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is one of the beautiful and very well written OS I've read till now..

Vei Emotional OS...

You made me cry while reading it...

Both Swayam and Sharon emotions were beautifully penned down...

The pain, hurt, love for each other was clearly visible in each line...

Didn't wanted the End to be like this.. Won't even ask...

Loved the OS...😊

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