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flirteyed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

U r a brilliant writer. Keep up d good work :D
more so on vrushan :P

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sbhanot65

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Wonderful peice of work
Plz keep writing and dis tym don't delete it

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mythreyii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Hey
Before saying anything on ur updates
Ur writing skills are owsm. Kudos to it
D way u use d language is simply gr8 .
D way u play with words in ur updates r a treat. Girl u seriously rock with ur writing skills. Amazingly thought and penned...!!! Do write as much as u can surely will find ppl loving ur works.ur work makes me love crush an more and easily imaginable
Now on to d updates
1. It was different with no actual crush an convo it was still a beautiful writing on dem
Shane thoughts on seeing his friends were Good. His happiness on seeing him normal to his stupidity in front of vrush on jealousy to her name tattooed all in all a gr8 one

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

2.loved it 4how simple and sweet it was
Totally portrayed vrushi her innocent self and how she seeing her friendly with an AD shan goes all uncomfy and trying to understand his own thoughts on y is he feeling so.. Den d end part
He was angry on himself but he did not want to be confused state
Den vrush comes asking him to drop her he tries not yo sound rude
But vrush shows he is wat she likes going with and gets his smile back on face
3.
A short and hilarious end
Vrushan planning der honeymoon
Shane thought process was well penned and vrushys words tat breaks all d solution he finds
Whatever he thinks will work will b broken by vrushyy
And vrushyys answer to Sam d obvio funny part of update
Liked how u maintained d humor all thru out

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mythreyii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

4. One of d best one on vrushan...
Totally vrushanish...
From the teasing part to d gale to shop..
How dey hide behind trees. Shans confused state wen she says something on dem
D dialogue s too reminded of vrushan
Stingy vrushy being a gujju and he making fun of it and she makes him mad with her answers..
Wen he goes back to get one again cud imagine a blushing shan on d countegirl words
His worry on not finding her and his instant reaction to action on seeing her with a guy and naming it tit 4 tat was nice
Den vrushyy giving it to kid and how she refuses to give to shan
And d end d confession how effortlessly he blurts it and vrushyy thinking how he had hid it all while behind d teases and smile
5. Okkk dream come true
Every vsm fan wants did to happen
Well did update was not usual vrushan bit still vrushanish.. Do I make sense I don't think so
Anyways d best part was he keeping his eyes closed all long his wait for her
You nicely managed d thoughts of shan without making it look bad tat shed b d best part of ur writing and her irritating him was cute beautiful update

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mythreyii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

@d end
Guess mene summary hi de diya on wat u have written :P
Anyways keep writing
Mythreyi

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies
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unres
This was pure brilliance and perfection..👏
Fabulously written!! I don't really know how to start praising you😊
Ok so I loved how she was calling Vrinda or Sam but Shaan came hehe that happened in the show too😉
So I knew he would come😆
So that all ritual thing that can't see the guy before the wedding type was awesomely incorporated😳
the feelings and emotions were wonderfully described!
Shaan had his eyes closed all the while was so nice of him and the romance aww too cute!😃
Their talks were sweet and lovely..
I loved how she did not say I love you too but at the end his charm made her say that..😳
Beautifully written!
I wish you just keep on writing and never stop⭐️

Oh i forgot one most imp. thing I am first..u know i read this on IF and so wanted to comment on it asap but had not joined till then but i m so happy to be finally commenting here!
Does that make sense?? Sorry if it doesn't but your works are really phenomenal and obviously u know that😉

Hi, thank you so much for such a sweet comment.

I hope that I never stop writing either - it's the only thing that keeps me sane.

So glad you enjoyed this.

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: --Ana--
res :)
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unreserved :)
OMG!!! you gave an update
I was waiting for it for the last two months!!!
I just love ur works and you already know that 😃
Now coming to the update...
well what do i say? awesome? amazing? PERFECT?
Words are less to describe ur awesomeness and ur talent 👏
VruShan getting married
A dream of every shipper
I cant believe myself as I have never read such awesome stuff👏
You write the Romantic VruShan effortlessly 😳
Ahhh!!! those kissess
I'm imagining ☺️
Shantanu doing all that to vrush ☺️
You just proved shan will always be the gentleman :')
He had closed his eyes all the time :')
I can imagine vrush and her blushes
ahhh!!! It was surreal
You made me blush again ☺️
My folks are wondering whats wrong with me, why am i blushing hard 😳😛
Just loved it as usual 👏
A BIGGG HUGGG 🤗
Thank u for the update and re posting ur stuff 🤗
LOVED IT 😳
---anagha--- 🤗

Thank you so much Ana.

I love reading your feedback.

I'm pretty sure I blushed while writing that as well.

Hope you like the next one too :)

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QueenofGreen

@QueenofGreen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--
Reserved! 😃
Unreserved

I don't have words to describe how it is...

Ahh! Soon to be Married Vrushan.

This is so, so dreamy.

Yet again beautiful piece of writing.

"You ought to know that you're marrying quite a creative guy."

The creative Maheshwari lol. Isn't he. 😆

And "I Love you"
And I know ❤️

Sigh..

Dream mode on.

Thanks for coming back with such a awesome piece of writing.

Loved it.

Love
Shivani

Hi Shivani,

Thanks for your comment :)

Hope you like the next one too!

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QueenofGreen

@QueenofGreen

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Rhapsody.
This is so beautiful and dreamy. <3

Soon to be married VruShan are so good to read. Its wonderful as to how you incorporate their primary characteristics in your works. Makes all of this more appealing.

Shantanu has proved his creativity now and then, hasn't he? 😆

I really loved the 'I love you'-'I know' exchange even if Shantanu didn't. It reminded me of the same exchange between Han and Leia in Star Wars V: Empire Strikes Back. <3 Have you seen it by any chance?

Great work.
Cheers.