Perchance to Dream | VruShan Vignettes [Updt. P30] 08/11. - Page 11

'omg this is sooo awesome😊😃☺️

Kash aise hi kuch hojaye real mein

Want them together😛

thanks fr d PM

Im sorry 😛

I really dont have any words

Wow!!!🥳 I have no words to describe what I am feeling now. Its Every Vrushan's Dream that you have written with so much of ease and perfection. No one an tell that its not real. Not even Shantanu or Vrushika. As someone had quoted above the you stuck to realty and converted it into a memorable event. Only a Fantastic writer can do that .Usually when they write with real characters and real situations its a bore. But hats off to you how you turned the reel situations into a almost real situations with so much finesse and ease. No one can say its not Shantanu or Vrushika.Only a talented writer can do that. 👏👏.Keep on writing..👍🏼

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Oh my god. Dude, what have you written? This is beautiful beyond words. Such amazing writing, such deep phrases used to denote VruShan's friendship, their confused feelings about each other, the insecurities that they have- such a long drabble was an absolute treat, i tell you. All VruShan fans must be in dreamy mode :D
"The pull of magnetic and resistance seemed impossible"
The little chat between Maccy and Shantanu was adorable. Poor Maccy and teasing Shantanu. I adore their friendship. My fav ^^

Vrushika and Shantanu's sharing such cute moments together by their co-incident meet on Valentines day. Their long talks, leg pulling, laughter, smiles- Bliss :') Vrushika's insecurity about people making up stories for both of them, unnecessarily & Shantanu calming her down.
The Ice-Cream part where Vrushika acts as a smart girl saving funds, haha that was cute. Their Vanilla-Mango flavours fight and the little teasing thing, too.
Shantanu's part of being insecure, jealous and what not over that Aryan guy :D
The touch of love their by Shantanu, touching her spine, beautifully penned.

The Rain, the romantic atmosphere that you bought in right at the perfect time for them. It was a Beautiful moment. The crests and trough in their hearts whether to pour in their feeling for each other or stop at that very moment to save their friendship. But in the end, their hearts won.

You described the moment flawlessly. Savoring kiss and then Vrushika's comment, "Air, I need air" :D
Every VruShan fan is gonna fall in love with your writing, i tell ya.

Keep Writing, mate.
-Ayushi

reading all d updates again

U have wonderful power of writing... Do write more on crush an...missing dem...

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Can I first give you a hug for this 🤗
PERMANENCE
The whole story was written so beautifully... The humour quotient of the boys was written with perfection... I just couldn't stop laughing imagining the boys with those piercings😆... The boys enacting the drunk Shantanu😆... Shantanu and drunk!!! A bit hard to visualize 😆 Anyway it was fun reading that side of Shan... Then the way you described his disbelief on what he had done... Again amazingly portrayal through words... The part which made to smile constantly...'His fingers traced across the eight letters, now permanently engraved into his skin and he felt himself give away to the darkness.

Vrushika.'... These lines made me feel something I cant explain what but surely something nice... A hope evolved for reality😊



PERCEPTION
Shantanu upset on seeing Vrushika dancing on PEHLA NASHA with someone else... He feeling hurt to see ajay taking his place... He was angry and jealous with the friendship of Vrushika and ajay... On the other hand Vrushika treating ajay as just a mere friend like anyone else... She not able to understand Shantanu's sudden weird behaviour towards her... She is too innocent for all this... She with her innocence melting shan's anger... Changing the topic to ice-cream coz its a known fact HE WILL give in😊
Summary of your story :P coz it was so well written ^__^
Every shade of emotion beautifully potrayed through words😊

Loved your observation


The final line is inspired by a Holi IV that I watched of VruShan, where she asks him to sing something properly, but he is messing around until he notices that she is annoyed. When he does notice, he grins and starts singing properly. Sometimes I get the feeling, that despite his overt nonchalance, he eventually does give into her :)

A shipper can hope, right?

And yes a shipper can always hope^___^

Ps-Next post further more:P