IN LOVE WITH THE BAD BOY - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
amazing update 😃
so now kriya is rey's assistant 😳
rey realised his mistake...
eagerly waiting for the next update 😊
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
awesome update
sharmila swayam...😆

rey...😡
idiot uski mom ko btane ki kya jrurat thi

want to know how will rey apologize to kriya
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Great update yr 😊
vicky aapne dad k samne sher se billi ban jata tha
aur goodaftern sun k Kriya ko bhook lag gayi 🤣
Oh no Rey ne yeh kya kiya? 😲
par a66i baat yeh hain ke kriya rey ki assistant hain 😳
ab kya hoga kriya ka?
update soon
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
amazing
all d chappy were amazingly written
keep it up
update soon
u r just amazing jaan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
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Amazing update...
Kriya as the assistant was the best part😆
Rey abhi se kriya ka naam lene laga hai...
Uff bol diya uski mom ke samne...bechari kriya woh isse innocent samajthi hai
Waiting to see how Kriya reacts when she gets to know Rey did it purposefully
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

hey guyz here is the 6th part.hope you like it,do share ur viewz

IN LOVE WITH THE BAD BOY

CHAPTER 6

(KRIYA)

REY NE MAA KO MERE DANCE KE BAARE ME JAB BATHAYA,MAA EK DAM GUSSE ME THI ,ME UNNE JAB GHAR KE ANDER LAYi tho unhone mujhe se shaq se poocha "so aaj college ke pehele din tumne...tumne dance kiya".

"maa mene dance kiya per uske peeche ek wajah thi ,please mujhe bolne dho.

"kriya tumne mere mana karne ke baad bhi dance kiya ,how could you kriya!!!.tumne hi kaha than a ki tumhare liye dance se zyada me important hun aur ab tumne ye kiya ,mere mana karne ke bawajood".

Mene unnhe samjane ki koshis kiya per wo kissi ki baath sun na hi nahi chahathi thi.

Mene socha ki ek dho din ke baad sub kuch teek ho ja ye ga ,per... maa ka gussa tanda ho hi nahi raha tha.

Me din count kar rahi thi ki kab maa ka gussa tanda hojayega aur wo mujh se kab baath karengi.

Mujhe rey ko dek ke gussa tho zarur aatha per usse control kar lethi ye soch ke ki usse kuch patha nahi he

(rey)

Mene usske bare me aade adure info leke usse mushkil me daal diya tha .

I was regretting my deeds, iss guilt ko apne ander se nikalna tha.

Usse nazre bhi nahi mila pa ra ha tha me.usse such tho bolna chahatha tha ,per itni himmath nahi thi mujme,

Sub ke saam ne nahi bol paraha tha issliye usska mera assistant hone ka fayda utaya.usse thoda zyada kaam diya.mujhe patha tha ki wo jaldi ghar jaake apne mom ko manaana chahathi thi per ...muje bhi tho apologize karna tha.

(four days paased... Kriya's mom was inconvincible,even rey could not apologize to kriya... He kept on giving kriya loads of work.becouz of this kriya was annoyed with him)

(rey.. getting dressed to go to college and talking to himself)

Aaj job hi ho me usse sub kuch boldunga..aur jo saza wo degi mujhe manzoor he.

(then something stick his head)

Me maafi kyun mangna chahatha hun?...mene tho ithne saare pranks kiye he per I never felt sorry ...then why now?

(his mood again swings)

Per usske saath mene ye bohut galth kiya ...aur usksi mom aaj bhi usse gussa he ,sorry tho bolna padega.

(kaka comes in )

"rey baba !aap abhi tak gaye nahi !!!".

(rey gets back to his senses)

"haan kaka!! Me late ho gaya ...ammm bye" (he runs from there)

(Kaka notices that he did not carry his bag )

"Arre ,rey baba aap apna bag bool gaye ,college me bag ke bhina jaake kya karoge"

(rey comes back running and collects his bag from kaka )

(kriya)

"hey universji ,mom kub maanengi... Almost ek paanch dhin honeko aaye ,per abhi bhi nahi naan rahi ,aapko hi kuch karna padega ... jaldi se kuch karo".

Me universji ko apna request letter deke katham hi karne waali thi ki mene dekha ki mere same Rey kade he .

Per ajeeb baath ye thi ki wo hamesha ki tarah ladkiyon ko paagal banana waala unka smile nahi de raha tha ...

Wo mujhe chaar dinonse sirf kaam de tha he ,wo bhi bohut sara.

Mene socha ki aaj bhi kaam dhene hi aaya hoga aur poocha

"aaj kya phirse kuch kaam he?... ithni bhi kya jaldi he ,me aarahi thi na! thoda inthazar kar lethe.

Wo kuch nahi bola ,ek baar right,left ,aage,peeche sub hi taraf dekha aur suddenly mera haath pakad ke kahin lejaane laga.

Me chilaathi rahi aur apne haath chudane ki koshis karthi rahi per koi faaydha nahi,wo bohut tagda tha.

me koshish karthi rahi. Thodi dher baad I gave up ...kyun ki wo mujhe high speed me le jaarah tha and agar me gir jaathi tho wo mujhe nahi utaa tha.

(rey)me usse seede fire escape le gaya .jub mene usska haath choda tho wo mere saamne aakar kadi hogayi.

wo apne bade bade ankon ko choti choti karke mujhe goor rahi thi. Me pehele se hi nervous tha aura b usse apne saamne mujhe gur the hue dek ke aur nervous ho raha tha.

Me ne man me bagwaan ko yaad kiya aur kaha "kriya blah blahblah..."

(kriya)

Unnone jo kuch bhi kahan ussme mujhe apne naam ko chodkar aur kuch samaj nahi aaya tha. Per phirse ithna kuch bolne ke liye bhi tho kese kehethi, wo takk nahi jaayenge!

Issliye mene kuch nahi kahan,per wo chup hi nahi ho rahe the. Mujhe hassy bhi aaraha tha per mujhe nahi patha tha ki wo jo bol rahe the wo happy news he ki sad, issliye me chup chap kadi thi.

PRECAP:-will rey be able to tell kriya the truth?.WHAT WILL HER REACTION BE?

Edited by devilishpam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
awesome update 😊
it's very interesting...
rey,the bad boy is so nervous...
kriya ko dekhke rey ka halat always aisa hi hota hai 😆
hope kriya usse maaf kar de 😳
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
It was full on entertainment 👍🏼
bole toh ekdam jhakkas choti
Kriya apni haath chhura nahi payi kyun k Rey bohot tagda tha 🤣
aur kriya gusse mein bhi yeh soch rahi thi k Rey ko agar puri baat firse bolna pade to woh thak jayega 😳
Rey ki halat sochkar Kriya kya mujhe bi hansi aa rahi hain 🤣
Rey k dil me Kriya k liye something something <3
awesome update sweetu
nxt update jaldi dena
thanx 4 the pm :)
Edited by kreyafan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
poor rey
itni himmat krke usne kriya ko apologise kiya or usse kuch samaj bhi nhi aaya 😆
aww kriya is so sweet
rey thak na jaye isliye usse dobara bolne k liye bhi nhi kaha
awesome update
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
supab update poor kria uski mom kitna gussa he usse n rey uski to baat hi na kro itni mahenat se kria ko kuch bol raha tha but kria ko to kuch samja hi nai n ullta wo uspe has rahi thi love it jab kria ko sach pata chalega tab to I m sure dhamaka ho jayga update soon next part

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