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Posted: 10 years ago
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In love with the bad boy

Kriya ghai who don't know anything about anyone in the town .she wouldn't be a definition for a good girl, but also not a bad girl. Reyaansh singhania , sh and his 4 friends , rule' the town.get on his bad side your screwd but once you get on his good side things just become more complicated

Chapter one

(Kriya)

Me aur mere maa deheradun se Mumbai shift ho rahe the humne train se aaneka socha tho tha per achanak maa ka mood badal gaya aur hum aeroplane me aaghaye .plane se aakar taxi se hum apne naye ghar jaarahe he

"maa aur kithna time lagega "mene poocha deheradun se Mumbai ka safur ne mujhe taka diya tha .aur me bechean bhi thi.

Maa ne kaha "thoda hi door aur beta.thoda sabar rako ".unhone apne bag se ek kitaab nikala aur muje diya aur kaha" tum ye pado"

"me uss kitaab ko theen baar padd chuki hu aur kithne baar padon"

"Tho apni doosri kitaab padlo"maa ne phir se kaha "maa me abhi padne ke mood me bilkul nahi hu .universji app hi samjavo inhe 'me ne chidkar kaha

Maa ne phirse kaha "apne ipod me gaana suno ya phir mobile me games kelo" me aur chidd gayi aur boli ki "mera mobile aur mera ipod dhono ki batthi buj chuki he maa " maa confuse ho gayi aur poochi "batti buj gayi?" mene unhe jawab diya "maa wo dono dead hain"

Me bore ho chuki thi maa ne kaha tha ki thode hi dher me hum pohoch jayenge pher kithna bhi me inthzar karlu hum pohoch hi nahi rahe the. Abb mere paas tho koi kaam nahi tha tho mene apna seat piche karliya aur socha chota sa nap hi lelun.patanahi meri anken kaab band ho gayi aur me kaab sogayi .

Jab me ne apni anke koli tho meri maa muje jagarahi thi"kriya ...kriya uto beta "

Me tho utna chathi hi nahi thi "maa kya hua aap itni excited kis baatho ko lekar ho " maa ne kaha "beta hum pohoch gaye" mene apne anke poori thara koli aur deka tho humare saamne ek ghar tha aur meri maa apne haath me chabhi lekar muskurathe kadi thi .wo boloi"beta ye hammara naya ghar he"

Muje ghar itna pasand nahi aaya tha kyun ki wo thoda purana dik raha tha mene ghar ko deka phir meri maa ko aur ek aur baar ghar ke tharaf deko"tho hum iss ghar me rahenge maa "

Maa ko patha chal chukka tha ki me ghar ko dekk ke itni kush nahi thi per unone muje samjane ki koshi kiya "beta ye ghar puraana tho diktha he per bohotha accha ghar he,thoda ghanda bhi he pher hum isse saaf kar sakthe he. Right beta ??

Me iss baath se sehemath thi ki ye ghar gandi thi per me sure nahi thi isse saaf kiya jaa saktha.pur mere paas ko option nahi bacha tha is liye mene haan kehediya.maa ko phir meri dil ki baath samaj agayi aur unhone kaha is "ghar ki safayi karthe humara bhi bond majbooth ho jaye ga nahi?" Me ne phirse apna sir hildiya.per man me chal raha tha "maa apka aur mera bond tho alredy itna strong he islike hi wajaa se tho meri man ki baath aap jaan jathe ho".

Maa ne meri tharaph dekha aur kaha "kya tumne..".uthne ne phiche se ek avaaz aya avaaz tho ek admee ka hi tha.hum dono unke tharaf mood gaye .uss admee ne kaha "aapka naam smriti ghai he hum apke padosi he aur hammra ek chota sa dukkan he is ghar ke maalik ne humse kaha tha ki yahan naye kirayedar anevale hain aur unone ye doosra chaabhi hamare paas choda tha apko deneke liye isliye hum yaha aaye the".uthne me unka beta wafa aa pohocha.

Wo admee ek baar ke liye serious ho gaye aur bole"ye mera beta he aur is ka naam mene vickramjeet kalsi rakka he per iske dost isse Vicky bulathe he ".me hello bolne hi waali thi ki unkle ne phir se apni baath shuru kardi "aaj kal ke bachon ko wo naam pasand nahi aatha jo unke maa baap rakthe he, isliye apne dostho se phir se naaam karan karvalethe he".Vicky sharam se laal ho pada tha wahan se nikalne ke koshih me busy tha .per mr kalsi ka baashan katham nahi ho rahatha tho wo bichara kya kartha.unkle ne apne bete ki burayi bhi karna chaalu kardi.

Me aur meri mom ye saab dekker ander hi ander hass rahe the.vicky akirkar waha se nikla aur bag gaya.uthne me kisi mahashay ne mr kalsi kho phone lagaya aur hum dhono ko bacha liya.mujhe tho darlagne laga tha ki kahi meri maa bhi meri shikayath karna naa shuru karde.

Ab hum apne naye ghar ke andar aagaye.ghar ander se itni gandi nahi thi.hum dhono suffer se tak chukethe apne apne room chunkar waha soogaye.

agle dhin maa ne mujse kaha ki wo apne office join karrahi hai aur usse related kaam se bahar jaa rahi he.unke jaaneke baad me akeli ghar me bette kya karthi isliye me tehelne chali

tahelthe hua mene ek dukaan deki aur mujhe mr kalsi ki yaad aagayi.wesebhi mujhe pyaas laghi thi tho socha kuch karidloon .andar jake kuch cheese karidli aur jab counter me pay karne aayi tho deka ki counter pe kaoi beta hi nahi he. Mene yehan wahaan deka koi nahi tha.

Mene ek baar jor se kaha"muje ye saara chize mufth me lejaana accha nahi lage ga, agar koi yahan he tho plzz akar paise le lijiye".tab hi table ki neeche se ek avvaj aayi "haanji boliye me aapki kya madad kardoon".wo ek ladka tha dekne se mere age ka lag raha tha.mene uske haath me paise diya aur poocha "app niche kya karrahe the." Usne muje jawab diya "wo me sooraha tha"surprisingly use bhi patha tha ki me iss shahar me nayi hu wo bola"aap yahan nayi hona mera naam swayam he aur ye mera kaam nahi he wo actually na ye me yaha apna punishment serve karraha hun".me chok gayi thi ek baar keliye.swayam ek intresting character tha puche bagher hi apne bareme subkuch boldiya usne .me wahase niklitho bahar mene theen aur ladko ko deka mene swayam ko bulaya aur use poocha ke ye log kon the tho swayam ek baar ke liye hyper ho gaya "ye lo ! in logo ke hi wajja se me yahan hu ,inlogone muje pasaya he"then again wo apne shanthe roop me aakar bola"me yahan apne bayi ke ghar aaya tha !chutti he na,ye sab uske dost he aur shayaad mere bhi dost he ,hum saab yahaan dukaan ke saamne betkar carrom kelrahe the per rey bore ho gaya aur bola ki kuch intresting karthe he,aur stricker ko apne haath me liya,phir..

Me bohut intrest se sun hi rahi thi uski kahani per usne wahi rok diya.mene kaha"arre roka kyu me sun rahi thin na bola age kay hua"

Wo phir flash back me chalagaya "rey ne stricker ko mr kalsi ke taraf peka per...stricker mr kalsi ke bajaye unki dukaan hi window ko lag gayi aur bad kismathi se glass toot gayi,, wo sub tho bag gaye me akela puss gaya mr kalsi ne mera band bajaya aur muje punishment diya ki me ek hafthe tak dukaan sambalunga".

Muje pehele un ladko per gussa aya hir me soochi ki ye tho uska personal problem hain me isme kyu padu aur me wapas apne ghar ke liye nikalpadi.per mujhe swayam ke liye bohut bhura lag rahatha ,me usi soch pe padi hi thi ki age kya he dekinahirahi thi .ithmeme me swayam ke dostoki toil mere saamne thi muje iska koi hint nahi tha .suddenly me unmese kisi se takkra gayi.

Mere haath me jo saaman the wo aab jamen pe gir gaaye aur me bhi gir gyi,me jisse takrayi thi yo ladka jaldi se ut gaya

Me expect kar rahi thi ki wo mujse apologize karega or apna haath dekar muje utaye ga per aa kuch nahi hua.

Wo apne dostose bolne laga "guyz patha nahi aaj kal ladki yon ko kya ho gaya he, handsom ladka dekthe hi janbooj kar saamne aajathi he".

Wo muhje wesehi chod kar aage challa gaya. Swayam ne muje uthaya .me bohut gusse me thi aur swayam se uska naam poocha

Tab muje patha chala ki wo hi tha "Reyaansh singhania".

Me boli"universji ase koi kaise kar saktha he , kud muje giraya or sorry bhi nahi bola GAMANDI kahika"


HEY GUYZ ITZ THE 1ST TIME IM WRITING SOMETHING LIKETHIS AND ITZ JUST A TRY PLZZ READ IT AND IF YOU HAVE ANY COMPLAINTS OR IF U DID NOT LIKE IT PLZZ LET ME KNOW 😊


INDEX

IN LOVE WITH BAD BOY CHAPTER ONE

IN LOVE WITH THE BAD BOY CHAPTER 2 (SCROLL DOWN)

IN LOVE WITH THE BAD BOY CHAPTER 3(PAGE 2 )

chapter 4 (page 3)

chapter 5 part 1 and part 2 (page 4)

chapter6 (page 6)

chapter 7 (page 8)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like the start...
Vicky's intro and that scene was fun...
Kriyam's convo was good...they bonded well
Waiting for Kriyaansh first convo...
Continue soon
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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if u like it plzz click on like button
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i loved the start its really different.

and nice concept too..

love all intro i mean Kriya's, swayam nd vickys

waiting for Reyaansh intro

well amazing start

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely concept 😛
nice starting...
bad boy rey will be interesting
update soon 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting start
loved it
i liked mr.kalsi he is fuuny
kriyam convo was awesome
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesum start panchu...
Loved it...
Maine kaise isse pending rehene dia...
Bt aab will read them regularly...
Love u cute writer...
muah...
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HEY GUYZ ,THIS IS THE SECOND CHAPTER OF IN LOVE WITH THE BAD BOY.HOPE YOU PEOPLE LIKE IT .PLZZ DO GIVE YOUR REVIEWS .

In love with a bad boy

Our kriya already has reached Mumbai and has settled in her new house. She also has a new friend swayam, swayam tell about his brother and his friends .kriya feels bad for him after coming to know about his story and becomes annoyed by his friends.she just dump into one of swayams friend REYAANSH SINGHANIA .she wont like his character and becomes more annoyed.

Chapter 2

(kriya)

Me ghar pohochi tho mene deka ki maa office se waaps aa chuki thi aur mera inthezaar kar rahithi

"tum kaha chali gayithi ,me dar gayi thi kabardar agar agese ase bhina bathaye kahin chalegayi tho ".

Mere maa bohot acchi aur pyaari si sthi muje woonki saari bathe acchi lagthi per kuch bathe asi bhi thi jo mujhe unme pasand nahi thi unmese kuch thi ki wo overprotective thi.me apne soch me koi hui thi aur maa bole jarahithi"arre anjan shahar he anjaan log kese akeli jaa sakthi ho... tum sun be rahi ho me kya bol rahi hun ".

Me apne soch se bahar ayi "haan maa I mean sorry agese dhyaan rakungi ".phir mujehe laga ab maa se bohut datenge kyunki maa ko bath karthe wakth agar unki naa suno tho bohut gussa aajathi thi isliye mene kaha "maa me ab apne room me jakar apna bag unpack karlethi hun"

Maa ne haan bolidi,me chok gayi ki maa ne mujhe kuch nahi kaha aur thodi kush bhi hogayi aur waha se dhirese nikal hi rahi thi ki mane phir rok li wo boli."kriya mene tumhare college ka admition form laadi he wo wahan table per aka hain fill karke dedo beta".

Me ne kaha "Maa apne mujhe se poocha bhi nahi ki muje kon sa college join karna he".waise mene iss bare me kuch socha tho nahi tha per ase hi koi bhi college join kese karlethi me.

Maa ko ye baath acche se paatha tha ki mene koi plan nahi banayatha .wo smile karne lagi aur bolne lag "beta ji muje patha he ki apne iss bareme apna dimmag chalaya hi nahi he aur hum deheradun se ab Mumbai aagaye he iska matlab ye tho nahi he na kit um college nahi jawogi ,aur tumhe yahaan ke bare me kithna path he ".

"one of the best college chuna he mene tumhare liye".mene ye sunkar socha ki koyi highly reputed MBA college hoga. Form apne haath me lekar mene poocha kya naam he iss college ka"mee anko ke saamne jot ha aur jo naam maa ne liya wo me belive nahi karpayi. Kyun ki uss college ka naam tha "ST LOUISE ".

ST LOUISE ek reputed college tho tha per wo MBA ke liye famous nahi tha ,wo famous tha "DANCE"ke liye. muje dance se pyaar he aur dance mera jaan he per maa ko mera dance karna bhil kul pasand nahi he aur me unse joot bolkar dance nahi karsakthi ,kyunki maa mere liye uthni hi important he jitna dance he.

Me chok gayi thi mujhe se khushi control nahi ho rahi thi ,mene maa ko piche se ek tight huge di ,dil me ladoo poot rahe the aur saath me sawaal bhi ut rahe the .

Me chilaathe hua "maa ST LOUISE WOW THANK U THANK SOO MUCH".phir meri awaaz choti hogayi "maa apne mereliye ye college chuna yakeen nahi hota maa " maa ne apne serious tone me poocha "kyun tumhe kyu laga ki me ye college kyun nahi chunugi"

Me unke saamne aakar kadi hogayi"maa apko mera dance karna pasand nahi he na,phir..."

"Phir kya kriya bolo"maa ne apne gusse wale tune me kaha

Me thodi dar bhi gayi thi "maa ST LOUISE tho dance ke liye famous he"

Maa aage chalthe hua boli"haan muje patha he ki ye ek dance college he aur mujhe tumhara dance karna ab bhi pasand nahi .tumhe dance se door karne aur tumhare sir se ye dance ka bhooth utarne ke liye hi me ye kar rahi hu".

Maa ke kahe ye bathe mujhe bohut bure lage .poora shaam mere kano me yahi sunayi de rahi thi'

Me universji ko chod kar aur kisi se bhi baath nahi karna chahthithi

"universji ye sub kya hogaya meresaath mene socha tha kin aye sheher me nayi zindagiki shuruvaath karungi per apne mere man ko waaps dance ke taraf mode diya ,"

Raath ko apne bed pe lati huvi thi aur mere anko se assu nikal ne lage me universji se baath karthe hua ro rahi thi" universji agar dance ke paas jaungi tho kese apne aap ko rok paungi me "

Ase hi mere chutiya beeth rahi thi, mere man me yahi baath gum thi rahethi jab me akele hothi ,aur jab me swayam ke saath rehethi tho ye baath thodi bool jathi .ase hi swayam mera accha dost banchuka tha

Uske dosto ki toil mujhe bil kul pasand nahi thi kasker wo reyaansh, use dekthe hi mere koon galne lagjathi

Mene usSe kabhi baath ki nahi thi nahi karna chathi thi , jab bhi use dekthi tho uske gamadi bathe yaad athi, wese wo dikne ne handsome tho tha aur swayam se path chala tha ki ameer bhi tha.

Per ameer aur handsome hone se koi fayida tho nahi tha kyunki wo mujhe dil se patthar laga tha

Ase hi chutti yan katham honeko ayi aur chuttya katham hone ke dho din pehele swayam ko mene uske bag ke saath mere ghar ke tharaf athe deka .mene bahar jaakar dek aur use poocha "ye sab kya he swayam tum kahin jaarahe ho kya?"

Usne muje smile ke saath jawab diya "haan me apne ghar waapas jaa raha hun . dho din me mera college start horaha he tum se agli chutti yo me milunga". Me use poochne hi waali ti ki wo konse college me padtha he ki usske unkle mr kalsi ne use bulaliya . usne muje good bye huge diya aur chala gaya.

Muje buraa tho lagaa ki mera akela dost bhi yahaan se chala gaya. Aur phir se mujhe maa ki bathe yaad agaya ,ye mujhe aur bhi low feel karvaraha tha.

Per mujhe apne aap ko consol tho karnahi tha isliye mene soch "dance karnapaungi tho kya hua dance ke kareeb tho rehe hi sakthi hu na".

Chutti yon ke aakri dho dhi bade mushkil se kate . aur aakir meri nayi zindagi ki 2nd chapter shuru ho hi gayi.

Me excited thi ki pehela dhin kesa hoga ,man me hazaro sawaal gum rahe the .me khud se pooch rahi thi

Kya me yehan adjust hosakthi hun??

Kya yahan mere dost banenge??

Aur sub se muskil sawaal "KYA ME DANCE SE DHOOR REHE PAAUNGI".

Muje admin me thoda kaam tha isliye me admin office gayi thi .wahan se kaam katham karke bahar ayi tho mene college ke atrium deka , wahan me center me aakar kadi ho gayi,mujhe bhil kul heroine waali feeling aa rahi thi.

Tab hi ek ladki chillayi " GUYZZ DEKO WOLOG AAGAYE ".sub kuch ajeeb lag raha tha .sub bag ne lage ,asa lag raha tha koi important aaga ya he muje laga ki koi professor ya phir chief guest hoga" but me sure nahi thi ,

Mene ek ladki ko roka aur use poocha kon agaya .usne ajjeb se make up ki huyithi ,dark sa lipstick aur chota sa kalda pehena hua tha .meri bhashaa me titliyo je sa. Wo angrejan banke boli "leave me im gonna be late ,stupid girl".

Mereko gussa aya aur laga ki me uske moo thod du .per wo wahan se bag gayi.

Mene apne aap se kaha "in logo se pooch ne se accha hoga me kud jaake deklun ,ajeeb logon se bhara pada he ye college ,ladkiya itni chote chote kadke pehenthi he kya inke paas itne paise nahi ki ye acche kapde karidsake ".

Mene deka ki ek jage pe log ekatte hue the aur me bhi wahan jaakar kadi hogayi .

Jo log aarahe the une dekkar me chok gayi, muje zor se jataka laga .kyun ki jo log ayethe wo vip nahi the wo reyaansh aur uski toil thi .

Mene apni anke rub kiya aur phir deka ,kudko pinch kiyaper wahi sach tha"wo fi the wo important log"

Me waha swayam ko dekkar kush thi per shock ne kushi ko overtake karlya tha"

Muje samaj nahi aaraha tha ki me hasu, ya chilaaun

Swayam ne mujhe deka aur secretly wave kiya .unke saath ek ladki bhi thi. Muje swayam ne uske bare me kabhi kuch nahi batha ya tha. Wo sub mere saamne se pass horahe the . ki reyaansh suddenly ruk gaya , aur mere taraf mooda aur usne kaha"tum...mene tumhe kahi deka he..."achanak saari ladkiya meri taraf gusse se bare anko se gurne lag gayi. Mene phir reyaansh ke taraf deka wo bola"khan deka he mene tumhe , party? Ghar? Vicky ke ghar?" muje laga use yaad nahi aaye ga per unfortunatle use yaad aa gayi"

Wo silently hassa aur bola "haan tum wahi taker wali hona ...tum bohot lucky ho ki mujhe tum yaadrahi".

"tum mere saath chalo". Usne mera haath pakad liya aur mujhe apne saath le kar jaan laga .ne apne haath waaps lekar kaha "zabardasthi he kya? kaha le jarahe ho tum muje ".wo mere taraph moda aur bola "tum humare dost swayam ki dost hona "aur usne swayam ko age kicha. "ye tumhare bare me bohut baath kartha he

Mene swayam ko deka aur muje uspe gussa bhi aa rahatha

Man me chal raha tha "universji swayam ne mere bare me iss patthar se kaha ,kya bola ho ga mere bare me, ayr ye ladkiya muje ase kyun dek rahi hain,muje thoda dar lag raha he!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update 😛
kriya's selftalking 😆
loved kriya's charecter...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update panchi...
Oh Kriya's mom isn't okay with her dance...plz unhe jaldi manalo
Ab swayamne yahi college kyun join kiya???
Rey remembers kriya...baki girls to jal chuke honge
Hmm interesting to see how kriya tackles Mr. Attitude
Update soon

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