KRIYAANSH FF:- 'Don't u dare! Rey sirf mera hai, SIRF MERA

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sneha-arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Opppsss... Sryy for late commenting

Anyways mera aashirwaad :p

.kitna twist ... Osm chapts

.reyna n kriya ek hi hai na diyu??

.aisa Kya hua kriya ko ki woh cold hearted ban gayi

Hate fat naani... -_-

Continue soon

Mujhe wage jaanna hai Kya hoga

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@KrazyRedMary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

HI Little Devil!!

Sooo much suspense!!!

Smh

How will I take this all?

It seems like a thriller show

Can't wait you unfold everything.

Love the update.

And now cant wait for the next one.

Update super soon!!!

Lots of love,

Didu.

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Sunaina

@sunu.nainu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

U little devil now I get what u meant by ur maha maha twist!!!
Kriya not kriya... She is Reyna...
Then why is she here... Ok Shivam sent her here...
Then why did she introduce herself as Kriya to all of them... Arhh I am so confused...
After reading the first part again... Rey reacted as though he met her.the.first time... N if that is true how did she directly become ags...
I am really confused yaar...
Maybe things will get cleared in the next update...
But the little krisha n shareyam part that u included...
Update the next part soon na... Mee very eager to know what will happen next...
So plzz update soon...
N ya 1 thing I understood is that she has forgtten her past... But wanna know more !

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@devilishpam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

res
unres

mujhe aada samaj me nahi aaya ,per jithna samaj aaya ,uthne me mazza aaya,
shivam aur kriya dost how ?when?what?
kriya ithna kese badal gayi?
ithna saara twists ke beech to ek aur twist laageyi
just cant wait to know he reason behind her changing soo much

Edited by devilishpam - 11 years ago

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

A KRIYAANSH FANFICTION

Hullooo!!
Am back!! I know, I haven't updated my stories for tooo long but now am back!
More stories, more mysteries, more delights!
I definitely need ur support to continue my writing.
So enough of my crap and here's the story!

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PRECAP

"Reynu, I'll talk to u later!" I bid goodbye, gulping the word, Kriya.

It was time, time to remember the past. Running from it was the worst idea ever, the most terrible decision I had ever taken. A thought was born:-

!You have 2 options in life: Run and allow it to hurt u

OR

Face it and let it goo...!

I pushed open the mahogany door, peeping into the past. Everything was depicted: Dance, Stories and Love..

SHIVAM'S P.O.V

Old memories gave in, each and every little thing was a rememberall, from a light golden brooch to a hidden diary, no source of information was destroyed.

'Past...Antiques...Sorrows' the 3 words glimmering as the shining lustre of a rich diamond. A promised pledge was sworn on the 18th November, this very day, this room was forbidden to enter, not even a slight touch was appreciated.

Endless months passed, this ancient oak door was never opened. A coating of unpolishedness could be seen, the atmosphere had changed, itsy-bitsy spiders crafted their own shelter, huge webs dangled by the spotless marble. Swishing my hands, absorbing moments of joy, ignoring times related to the drastic world of hell. My sharp eyes caught a beautiful - violet book, I carried it, patting dust out of that prized possession. All questions would be answered, the evidence, the key to every secret was found.

The hard cored, safety lock was broken, thoughts racing to the past. I still remembered a slight view, the urgent emergency theater - no-longer-vacant, the red, glowing light switched on, a familiar face coming across. Astonished, the poor receptionist was literally burning with fury after being asked the same loads of questions endlessly, Was that Kriya Ghai by any chance?

"Whatever I do, how much ever I try, they will never leave me! Dear God, a small favour would have been heartily accepted you know." I spoke, gritting my teeth, tired of recalling those dreadful times. I fell on my knees, head facing the ground, ashamed. Facing a harsh truth, no one but me could be the reason Kriya was... was critical.

Not now, the times not right! Kriya cannot know the real her, Reyna's her new identity, she had no choice. Every situation had atleast 2 options but this one, there were none. My twins of vision rested, shutting down, completing leftovers.

Foggy trails twirled their way towards the past, a horrid reality ...

*FLASHBACK*

Days passed by, my cold-hearted revenge was fulfilled. Yet, a twinge of guilt crowded inside me, overtaking a path of glee.

Tring, tring! My brand new IPhone- 6 rang, a call waiting to be answered.

"Yep, what's wrong?" I asked.

"Shivam, I know u don't care about Kriya but.." a voice answered, startling me at once.

"Kriya? She's gotta be fine. What the hell happened? Just tell me dammit!" I cut him, loud screams of desperation replacing my cool-classy voice. There was no doubt, the whole world knew, Kriya's only enemy, rival was ME! The only person who would pleasure her agony!

Okay, okay, I agree with them but still, a demon? That wasn't me. I do care about her, I always have, hearing her wince in pain would kill me.

***

"Damn! I love Mumbai's amazing traffic so much. Its the best way to make someone wait FORCEFULLY!" I let out a loud sigh, banging my fist on the grey, leathered steering wheel.

"Honestly, instead of huge piles of corruption. Guys, SOME TRAFFIC RULES WILL BE A BIG TIME HELP, YOU KNOW!" I muttered, tired of staring at those unmoving fleet of cars.

Atlast! Finally, after a long spell of cursing and swearing, I reached the hospital.

"Kriya Ghai please? " I asked a lovely young lady - the receptionist.

NOTE TO SELF:- ''' Flirting is very good for health just like yoga. '''
Come on, she's hot!

I sprinted hastily towards Kriya's wardroom, clashing into an anonymous qualified doctor on my way.

"Mr. Doc!" I yelled. Wow, mindblowing, that old idiot was totally deaf. How many times do you expect me to call you! Seriously, who made him a doctor! Wait a minute, IDEA!

My strong arms caught hold of his wrist firmly, swinging him face to face.

"Escuse me?" answered the doctor, suspiciously. Yep, now you ain't deaf, how noble.

"Hows Kriya?" I asked instead, a slight hope born beneath me.

"She's ..." he started, gathering enough courage to blurt out what went wrong.

"She's Kriya Ghai, it's obvious. So?" I teased, waiting for a bit more explaination.

"You cheeky ... control! Kriya Ghai has developed a memory loss, this dangerous accident is the reason she needs to change her identity, never remember, she was once Kriya Ghai. Any pressure will cause death or coma and scientifically, recalling her old life again would take a lot of pressure. Not to forget, concentration. Starting fresh would be better, perhaps, she might start remembering eventually. If she does so, you can let things go in a flow but for now, let by gones be by gones." explained the doctor, my fiery emerald orbs glaring at him, that idiot cleared my doubt as if Kriya was some random chapter in history that he had just memorised a couple of days back.

"You mean Reyna. She's not Kriya anymore doc!" I demanded.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

The known-famous naughty jerk, the troublemaker was no more alive, regrets and confusions browsed his smart brain, innumerable droplets drizzled heavily from his sights.

"Shivam calm down. Everything's okay, everything's fine?!" asked someone, comforting me with her angelic shadow, engulfing me into a huge, warm hug.

"Yup girl! Now you are going back to St. Louis. I want the show up to perfection!" I commanded, mimicry done in disguise.

"Oh give me a break! Not you like Ms. Raiprakash now!" Kriya groaned, obviously bored of working hard.

"Are you going or not huh witch?" I ordered, glaring at her.

Bang! The noise of the mahogany door replied me. Beep! A message arrived.

"That's good. Rey's message?" I muttered, surprised.

SHIVAM'S P.O.V. ENDS

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KRIYA'S P.O.V

Wow! So the great genius ordered me to get my precious foot back to St. Louis hmmph. Es-ca-use me! I donot work here. Oh and a moment of silence is needed here, that jerk has no way spoiled or pampered me. NOT AT ALL!

"Kiru, a little help right here? Please get this stuff to Rey, they're hell important." requested Sharon, her attitudy diva look plastered onto her soft, mesmerizing face.

"Okay!" I agreed. Perfection, perfection, perfection, ain't she so good at being perfect! Okay Reynu, I mean Kriya, enough cursing now. Get your dream world back to work. I marched, walking steadily uptill Rey's cabin.

"REYAANSH SINGHANIA!! Lovely, an amazing man sleeping oh-so-peacefully and here, we are supposed to work." I muttered furiously.

His head rested on his black coloured, cabin chair, his mouth lying wide open, snores escaping. Hmm, a few seconds later, his sleepy eyes shot open, enlarging like enormous dinner plates, his carefully cropped jet black hair now dripping wet, streams of icy cold water reaching the earth.

"Rey! Would you mind working? Sharon's orders you see?" I said, chuckling.

"What the hell!! How in the world am I wet! You freaking ... KRIYA GHAI, YOU'RE SO DEAD!" he yelled, frustrated, exiting his beauty sleep land.

"Nope! I wanna sleep!" he argued.

Urgh, this guy deserved a gold medal in laziness. Second time, yes second! This was the SECOND TIME, I've found him SLEEPING! How the heaven can Kriya fall in love with him, I have no idea! God! Okay Reyna, you can do this.

1..2..3.. Puppy face in action!

"Please Rey! Cant you even do this much for me?" my voice changed itself, a chameleon's behavior merging with my blood, sugary sweet, soft, persuading talks flourishing, eager enough to melt any individual.

"Umm, I cant. I have to rehearse. Sorry." he rejects, tossing attitude against me.

"Rey... Rey please. I have to get Sharon's orders finished to perfection." I plead, dropping attitude in a trashbin.

"Can your Chabilal ever reject his Ramaira huh?" he accepted, agreeing atlast, a humungous grin growing more second by second.

"Ramaira? Chabilal? Who?" I whisper, racking my forgetful brains crazily, deactivating a memory loss bomb.

"Kiru, I, I mean your Chabilal loves you. Don't you ever forget that!" he spoke huskily, making my delicate heart skip beats.

Wait! Gift wrap me time please, will you? I really need to breathe, my oxygen supply is reducing, my lungs not able to transfer any oxygenated blood. Did he just, just tell me those 3 magical words, did he just? Oh my God! Calm Reynu, calm. Ignore those words for now.

"Thanks. Umm I'll see you!" I say, heading briskly towards the awaiting exit.

Bang! The creamy-white door was shut, a living figure leaning by, demands for an answer arising, impatience grooving.

"Rey!" I protest, eyeing the only barrier between me and a joyful escape.

"Shhh..." he whispers, marching soundlessly towards me, his strong arms capturing me defensively, refusing brown orbs unable to drift away. My slim body was carried effortlessly, both our eyes uninterested to leave eachother.

"Worry is faraway sweetheart, chillofy baby." he breathed, promising, rejecting to ever hurt me. My exotic scent lived happily on him, abandoning his proffessional cabin, escorting me safely till a large, noisy crowd.

That's it, a glance and he vanished, the mist swallowing his visibility.

"Was it so easy for him to say those words and leave. Was it so easy? Love is never happiness, its purely pain!" I whispered, tears threatening to walk on a ramp.

"Kriya? Babes, a century is over, you know girl, it would help me a lot more if you stop dreaming please." Sharon joked, shaking me violently, enveloping me back to thr present.

"Yes ma'am. Extremely sorry for the inconvenience." I joked back, giggling to the limit of infinite.

"Oh puhlease, now get back to work!" Sharon ordered.

Woah! Now the Sharon Rai Prakash, SRP, the diva was back! Agreed, I gotta admit, pushing myself to enact the role of Kriya Ghai actually had a special effect. Happiness shone throughout my life, experiencing the various joys of life, the memories which trusted my luscious lips a smile: friendship,love, flirting, work ...

This wasn't a task nor was it a job for me, it wad a new, beautiful life blooming into a world glooming with harshness, pain, hurt, sorrow or shall we say : ""Welcome to my world"". If, Universeji hadn't pittied me, errors would doom a sorrowful book, the reason Shivam was bought into my life, as an angel, my guardian ...

*****

Phew, that's the end!
Hoped you guys like it!
I know it hugeee! Hehe
Sorry didn't update it before!
Please do comment and like!!
Jhootas, chappalz and eggs welcome
Thanks..

Edited by diyaswaronholic - 11 years ago

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Meghna

@meghzzzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Res
unres
me first...
party tou banti hai... 🥳
actually late hoon... 😆
part k kya kehne...
Awesum... 👏
superb...
Update soon...
Dare u say ki m leaving writing...
samjhi ya samjhaun...
N ya technically m first... 😉

Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 11 years ago