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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

nice concept dear...
is it supernatural kind of story...
I think so..
bt have to wait till you update 1st part...
so update soon..
n do pm me plz


Thank you so much
haha no please . Nothing supernatural .
Thank you so much . I shall update soon .!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: .Vrushanholic.

the concept seems very interesting...
waiting for the update!


Thank you !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

Really eager to read this Avaah!
Do update soon :D


Thank you !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
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Thank you everyone for all the comments . I just want to tell you that this story's characters are completely different from what in the show.

The chapter below is just an introduction to the story which basically explains the characters of everyone in the story.

So yeah.

Avaah.
Edited by avaah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Chapter 1 ( a )

Dil.

"Tum pyaar karte ho use?"
Swayam gulped a sip from the glass and sat on the floor thinking about what just happened few hours ago.
Kria had come back and everyone still thinks that he loves Kria

"Tum pyaar karte ho Kria se?"
Sharon asked to his boyfriend . She had this belief that Swayam would say no ;
She remembered how he said
"Main tumhaara ; aur tum meri...humesha"
"Bahut zyaada"
Swayam replied emotionlessly ; he remembered how Kria asked him to not to tell the truth to everybody. He could see her face sulking in betrayal ; who knew Swayam shekhwat could betray Sharon ? Sharon excused herself and went somewhere where she could stay alone for sometime.

"Swayam tum mere saath humesha rahoge na?"
"Jab dance bhi tumhaare saath nahi hoga na Sharon , tabh bhi main honga tumhare saath"
He remembered the promises he made to her
The very confident Swayam now had changed to someone who hated himself.

Where Sharon Rai Prakash was drowning in a pool of betrayal here Reyaansh Singhania was in a state of dilemma.
Falling in love with Kria ; facing heart break and then meeting someone who meliorated his broken heart : Taani .
"Reyaansh Singhania is so busy with his college life that he has completely forgotten about his future"
He stood up with a jerk and looked at his father
"Dad , just chuck the sarcasm and get to the point"

He sat again in frustration keeping in mind what his dad just said . He had challenged him to earn a good amount of money in a month or he would be forced to join his family business. Reyaansh had to do something and the coming dance competition was the best opportunity for him. 50K for winning the competition ; he had to win it , by hook or by crook.
"Swayam and Reyaansh will be competing against each other and the one who won would be awarded 50K as a prize and direct entry to the national level competition"
The dean said with a stern smile ; where Rey was stressed as he had to anyway beat Swayam in the competition.

"Dude ; Swayam ! I need to talk to you"
Reyaansh said to Swayam to which Swayam agreed.


"I will see you later, bye!" Reyaansh said and went . he knew that his work was done now , but somwhere he did felt bad for crossing his limits and ruining his best friends' life.

Swayam was there,lifeless.Physical relationship with kria? What was he talking about ?
"Swayam , I have no problems with you keeping a physical relationship with Kria , but Sharon .. She is disturbed but that's life , isn't it ? You just concentrate on the competition right ?"

Swayam knew that he had to clear the misunderstandings and had to talk to Sharon.
"Sharon mujhe baat karni hai tumse"
"Swayam , baat karne ko kuch bacha hi kahaa hai?" She asked him.

"Sharon , I just want to say that there is nothing physical between me and Kria" He mouthed and turned to leave
"I wouldn't be surprised if there is too , what more can I expect from you - Weakling?"
The emotion of hatred and anger was perfectly depicted by her words.
"Sharon , I have always been loyal to you"
He said to her to which she mercilessly replied "your bad , then"

Reaching the point of saturation , he slapped her.

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P r e c a p

He tightened his hold on her wrist and she winced in pain
"Swayam stop!"
"Dare you raise your voice on me Sharon!"
He threw her on the bed and continued what he wanted to.

-

"Do you even realize what mess you have created in my life?
You are such a selfish idiot Kria Ghai"

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Edited by avaah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Nice start.. 😊
But u stop in cliff range...
Do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
awesome update
really intriguing!!
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Ok! This is something interesting! Update soon! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Damm interesting and exciting one swayam is reallt different and ppls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Quite interesting it has everything to make readers addict to it
Do continue :)

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