Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Hello hinal its a pleasure to come across such a brilliant writeup. I cannot explain what i felt when i completed reading the whole OS, a whole new serene feeling and a certain warmth you have in your writing which touched me, like seriously its one of the amazing work i have ever read on whole of the India forum!
The minute detailing of the characters, their state of mind and the reactions, wow! You picturised swaron on this one inspite being written on another couple is a great thing as i can easily relate to them here. Kudos to you for writing such a masterpiece. Likes or comments cannot raise or low the beauty of this work. I know i am saying too much sweet stuff not enough for you to digest :p but thats the truth. Isse zyada detailing i cannpt pen down as i loved each and every thing. Moreover that part where sharon woke up in the middle of the night just to find swayam crying, it was amazing.Then that part over the terrace when he whispers those trustful words in her ears and she stops him. Brilliant work.Do Write more on SwaRon Hinal :))
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