Promise? Swaron OS - Page 2

Such fragile emotions are so difficult to capture in words and ensure that they reach across to the reader to convey the same sensibilities...in that u succeeded very much I believe...loved the way u sketched each character, even the peripheral ones of the in-laws...both Sharon and Swayam here touched the heart and appealed to the soul in their own ways indeed...well written...do write more 😊

Originally posted by: --Destiny--

This was so beautiful. Such a good writer you are. Loved this OS. Do write more on SS.

Originally posted by: rinkubathija12

You got me Girl. . It's hell of an emotional and amazing write-up. . Being a medical student myself 😆, I know its a difficult task to keep-up with expectations of people and burden you sometimes feel is unimaginably suffocating! Steth and labcoat are not just any instruments given but a responsibilty! The point of doing all this blabbering is that You have described Her emotional turmoil very well, . I can relate to it; feeling unhumanly human is common.

Keep it up, . 😉

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

really very emotional os ...

just loved it..

the way you show sharon's state of mind...loving family nd best husband...
simply wow...

Originally posted by: bhavz_vrushan

stunning os it is..!!!
Luvd it do write more...

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

This was. . .I dont know if I can put it in words.You grabbed the emotions and crunched them to the extremes where you can either live or die.Sharon's emotions...The opening part. ..Aah!!!Magnificent work.Keeping emotions to yourself and that too emotions like pain,angst and agony can be really exhausting...and you showed that so beautifully. 👏

She thought she has managed to hide her emotiins from Swayam but she forgot she becomes an open book in front of her.The way he soothed her,caressed her was beautiful to see.And the promises they made to each other. . .To be there for each other and with each other. . .Amazing amazing!!!

Lovely Writing 😊

P.S.Is it like your style that you end your story with your title???Anyways,I like it 😛

Originally posted by: pooja123456

Nice os

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

Oh my..
Hinal you really swept me off my feet with this marvelous work of yours..
it was beautiful. the way you described Sharon's bottled emotions, the way she was suffering on the inside and yet showed to the world that everything was alright. I could feel her pain inside me. I could feel every emotion you expressed in this OS, both Swayam's and Sharon and that itself shows how talented you are as a writer.
It was a pleasure reading your OS.
Keep writing :)

Cheers
Nishi.

Originally posted by: MirageSwaron

Such fragile emotions are so difficult to capture in words and ensure that they reach across to the reader to convey the same sensibilities...in that u succeeded very much I believe...loved the way u sketched each character, even the peripheral ones of the in-laws...both Sharon and Swayam here touched the heart and appealed to the soul in their own ways indeed...well written...do write more 😊