SwaRon OS: The Reality.. - Page 4

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Freaking Heaven!

That's how this was. I was glued to the flawless emotions that flew beautifully throughout. I was captivated by his thoughts. I was loving every bit of it.

Of course, She couldn't be forgotten so easily. She isn't meant to be just a mirage, she is supposed to be a reality.. they are supposed to be a reality.

The way her reactions were been penned were realistic. Such a perfection. Losing in a moment, and the other trying to get away. While he was being adamant. I loved that. Not letting her go. I was like Go Swayam, Go!! Get your girl. ^_^

Do I still need to say, 'I loved it' :*

Originally posted by: Meghna_kriyansh

awesum os...
Have u written a KR version of it too???

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

Loved it Nishi...ur way of expressing...love short sweet and i loved it to the coreee

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

this feels sooo good yr...

finally no more mirage...
it turn out to be reality..

loved it dear

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

wowww.. its fab... i ws a bit sad to read Mirage coz of its melancholy end. bt thank u for d continuation... & trust me i m more dan happy to read Reality. 😃

Originally posted by: GlamourousPearl

Mirage to a reality...not a very long journey...until u put in all ur efforts wholeheartedly...
BT u my dear effortlessly made da journey a bliss...completely unxpectd...swayams thought process very well penned...a writers price...
Loved DA intense cum dominative bit of swayam...I won't let u go attitude of his...was cherry on top...
Gud job must say

Originally posted by: HSFA

Sharon is for sure Swayam's reality and vice versa. I loved how you completed them.

Beautifully written OS and yes you completely justified it with the previous one. I enjoyed reading. Loved how you expressed their emotions and Sharon standing there staring at the sunset was really awww.

Do write more.

Originally posted by: shalomshini

Res
Unres
Hey nishhh 😃
After reading the mirage I Soo wanted to read it's next part
N u fulfilled ma wish so thank u Soo much
Now abt the os
It was jus amazing
Swayams pain was portrayed very well
N the last part of the os swaron meet was superbly explain
So all in all a amazing work dea do write more n more

Love
Shini

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

reswao nishi tis was amazingg

as a writer i can see a tremendous change

in ur writing stlye buddy

its been so mature even thou

u write about love stories and emotional stuff

each of ur stories takes

a different perspective of love

coming to ur os

it was more about swayam n sharon's

everlasting love for each other tat cant keep them apart nymore

tat emotion was very well expressed

the way you handled swayam was so nyc

he is unable to bear the pain of seperation

meanwhile poor sharon too is stuck thr

thr meet was beautifully penned 👏

i hav to say it was emotional n heart-touching

swayam din want to let go n he kept on fighting for it was superb

but the last line aww it held my attention

tis is wat i can say is a perfection of liberal and flexible writing

i hav to say tis u hav a remarkable narative voice

i completely loved the end n the kiss was like

a perfect icing on the cake

all in all a very heart touching pleasing read 🤗

Originally posted by: kapoormenka

Amazing beyond word beautiful OS. Finally swaron r together. Happy ending keep writing.