SwaRon OS: The Reality.. - Page 3

Originally posted by: .Vrushanholic.

res!!!unres 🤗

omg nishu this is so so awesome...from the tiltle to the end!!

your title perfectly suits the os!! reality <3

swaron meeting again... <3

the way you described each others pain and the joy on they meeting again <3

it was a short sweet magical os which had a very good effect on me :v dil khush kar diya tune nishu!!! this is amazing!!

love you 🤗

keep writing!!!

p.s- me first 😎

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

hayeee,

baby, u made blush throughout the os!

it was so beautifully penned down!

Just perfect.. i loved it!!

The mirage, Rey's snap, Sharon..

Am in love with your stories..

Loved it sooo sooo much jaan!

love u and the story!

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

simply amazing os dear... 😃

i just loved d way u have penned down every emotion in d OS...

swaron emotional talk nicely describe...just loved dat part...

and d ending...was simply perfect...

overall just loved it...

i was quite lucky enough who gt to read bth d parts together... 😆

keep writing swthrt...

love ur Divya Di 😳

Originally posted by: pooja123456

Beautifully written!
U described swayams emotions well

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Reserved.
-Unreserving-
Wow...That was so amazing Nishi.
Swayam cravings,his pain for having his love lost. . .It was wonderfully described 😳
Even I liked Rey's concern for Swayam.Swayam with a hope going in the sand dunes once again to see hia lady love and Sharon's condition was no different. . .They confessed where they met.I loved the way you ended it.The last line literally took the cake away for me.
Great Job. 👏