KRIYAANSH OS! Your Craziness is What Made Me Fall FOR U!!

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KRIYAANSH OS
"YOUR CRAZINESS IS WHAT MADE ME FALL FOR U!"

Hope u guys like it!😊
This one is written for my sweet, devillish MD! Here u go jaan..
Aapki khwaiish hamne puri kar di hai.
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"Baatcutter! Sit down for God's sake, u really dont need to do that damn step with them!" shouted Rey

"Shut up Rey! Let me focus and by the way stop getting jealous. I know what you are thinking if you arent jealous, come dance with me!" challenged Kriya

Kriya was dancing on the song, Disco Diwaani from Student of the Year. She loved that song and the steps a lot!

Whenever that song used to play, she would just start dancing not even caring when or where she was dancing. Poor Rey always had to bear his best friend's antics everywhere.

Rey, Reyaansh Singhania- The hottest and the king of Dazzlers!

Rey was the hottest dazzler on the outside but inside his cover, there is a sweet, caring and loving guy. One of the best dancers of St. Louis. Girls drool over him everyday, every single time!

Kriya, Kriya Ghai- The craziest Dazzler in the whole St. Louis college!

Kriya was the craziest girl in the whole college but inside this craziness, there is a sweet, loving girl who loves having fun! Fun = Anything whether its dancing in the auditorium, singing in the washrooms, jumping and entering the college or even playing pranks on professors!

Both of them were best friends and by now seeing his baatcutter do crazy things was just a daily routine.

Now, was that one moment Kriya was going MAD!

"OK Fine, I'm on!" agreed Rey

They danced together, sometimes as a dance battle or sometimes as a group! Both of them were one of the bestdancing couple, India has ever seen. Even though Kriya's antics were crazy but they were always fun!

"That was damn fun baatcutter!" shouted Rey

"What, u think I am boring just like u? Well Breaking NEWS, Kriya Ghai is always fun unlike Reyaansh Singhania!" shouted Kriya

"Dream on Kri!" answered Rey

"Hmmph.. U just dont talk to me, GO!!" shouted Kriya

"Oh really? Alright Princess." agreed Rey

Not even 5 minutes had passed when Kriya apologized and started talking to him. Rey knew this was going to happen like always. His baatcutter couldnt be alive without talking to him at all.

He smirked and said," Its not even a minute baatcutter and u already gave up. See, this is the effect of the Reyaansh Singhania." boasted Rey

"Rey, I swear u are going to die by my hands!!" shouted Kriya

"OMG, I am scared!" said Rey putting on a scared face.

"U!" shouted Kriya and started chasing Rey

They ran and ran. Anyone who would have seen them would have thought that they were 2 WILDCATS fighting for food!

But unfortunately while running, Kriya tripped. She shut her eyes tightly in fear knowing that the hard ground was ready to eat her and break her head. Just then someone kissed her cheek, it was none other than Rey! Kriya hadnt even touched the hard ground when Rey enveloped her in his safe arms. Kriya opened one eye and then the other.

She saw Rey staring at her, she wanted to get back but her eyes couldnt stop themself from staring back at his sparkling black orbs.

The next minutes, seconds, hours, they were just in eachother's arms grasping all the comfort, care, warmth and most of all their LOVE FOR EACHOTHER...

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THE NEXT DAY:

Kriya walked in the St. Louis and like always millions of students whether they were freshers or seniors had come to see her walking in. Afterall she was one of the Divas of this college.

The air was full of gossips, the sounds as low as whispers, the news reaching out to everyone's ears.

"What was happening?" thought Kriya

She pulled a random boy by his collar and asked him," What the hell is happening here?"

"Reyaansh Singhania is going to the Prom with Rhea Shah. He just asked her a few minutes back." answered that boy.

Kriya was hurt, she was damn hurt. She just slapped that boy hard and shouted," Just Shut Up!"

Kriya had never known about this feeling before, her heart was jealous, possessive, hurt, betrayed,lonely only beacuse of Rey!

"How could Rey ask someone else for the prom! How!" thought Kriya

Now she realized that she was in love with Rey but he was just her friend according to him. She couldnt even believe he hadnt told her about asking Rhea. Tears started finding their way out of her eyes but she just wiped them off. She couldnt fall weak, she was STRONG and moreover she was crazy! Now, the word 'crazy' didnt suit her anymore, she couldnt be crazy and free as before. The only thing she wanted to do now was clear this mess out.

She searched the whole college for one person, Rey. Atlast she found him in the abandon corridor flirting with Rhea. This was the limit, she couldnt bear it anymore.

"Rey?" she asked

"Hey baatcutter! This is my girlfriend, Rhea." introduced Rey

"I know about it already Rey. Anyways I just came to tell u that after the prom night, I'm leaving this college forever. Oh and am sorry to disturb your romance." answered Kriya

Kriya couldnt say those 3 words to him, she just didnt have the courage to break her heart into pieces. She just wanted to leave, she couldnt even see Rey with someone else. She just ran away.

On the other hand, Rey was shocked!

"How could Kriya leave college like that! How could she?" thought Rey

He couldnt even live without talking to Kriya even once and now she was leaving college. No! He wouldnt let this ever happen. But why, why was he caring so much for her when he already has a girlfriend.

His mind was confused, his thoughts were scattered, his brain could only focus on one girl- Kriya.

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The next few weeks, Kriya just lost her craziness. She was just lost. Everyone missed the old Kriya, everyone but most of all it was Rey who missed her the most. Her craziness, her smile, her antics! He just used to love them and now Kriya was just lost. He couldnt see her like that and whenever he tried to talk to her, she made some escuse and went away.

THE PROM NIGHT

Kriya wore a pink backless dress with a sparkling belt in the middle. She tied her hair in a bun allowing a few flicks to fall on her face. She wore her pink heels and left the house.

Her dress

Her shoes


She reached the party, every one had a smile except for her.

The hall was decorated, the couples were on the dance floor, the music was loud! Her eyes caught Rhea and Rey dancing together, her smile dropped forever and she was about to leave the party but just then her hand was held, it was Sam, her brother's bestfriend. He asked her for a dance and she agreed. We both swayed out bodies on the dance floor looking perfect, My craziness was back!

Someone gripped Kriya's waist and pulled her towards him. It was obviously Rey! My smile dropped, my eyes lowered, my knees started shaking. Rey was jealous, he was full of envy! He could never see his baatcutter with someone else. He just loved her and there was no way, he was letting her go.

"Baatcutter, you're only mine! Dont u even think about anyone else except me!" shouted Rey

"But why Rey? U already have Rhea?" asked Kriya innocently.

"Rhea, my foot! I love u and only u, get that!" shouted Rey

Kriya was on cloud 9! Finally she had heard those magical words from his mouth. Yes, he loved her! Kriya started jumping up and down madly leaving Rey confused.

"Baatcutter?" he asked

"I love u too dammit!" shouted Kriya

"Baatcutter, u are not going to leave this collge and most of all your CRAZINESS WHICH MADE ME FALL FOR U!" shouted Rey

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Hope u guys liked it!

Pls do like and comment! I would be eagerly waiting for them!
Jhootas and chappals welcome!

MD, I know itna acha nahi hai, jhoota marde!

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sharif_lafungi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ab tym aa gaya hai muje bi tujse kuch likhwana padega...isse phle ki tere bhav badh jaye...
diya...swthrt this was amazing...
crazy kriya nd hot hunk rey
loved it...
one more thing...u hv improved a lot dear...congratulations
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
reswaaa
unreswaaa😛😛
firstllyy i loved this os so muchhh
meko ye concepts bht pasand haiii
rey krria bff
kria is a crazy girlll humesha dance karte rehthe haii place dekhe binaa😆
poor reyyy kria ko nhn rok paraha thaaa😆
fir donon milke shhuruu hogaye dancee
then their fight that was so cuteee😳
their cheek kiss hayeee☺️
and next dayyy kria shocked kyunkee rey kisse aur ko prom pe poocha😲
then wo ladka ko marrdiya poor himmm😆
and rey huh kisse aur ko apna girlfrnd banadiyaa
poor kria usse rey se pyaar karna shuru kii😭
aur ab collegee chodkee jaa rahi haii because wo rey ko kisse aur ke saath nhn dekh sakte
rey shocked and confuse haii ke usse itna farak kyun pad raha
gadhaa reyyy u love herrr😡
and kria lost her craziness and rey missing old kriya aww
finallyyy prom day came kria kisse aur ke saath dancing rey jealous😆
hayeee finaally rey ne confess kardiyaaa😳
they become officialll
then their kisss hayee maar daalaaa☺️
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Unres
It was beautiful .

everything from start to the finish was wow.
But doll thoda sa aur jealousy wala part dikhati toh it would have been like sone pe suhaga type for me.
Still it was beautifully written and this arc of best frends coming together is something I always enjoy.
Edited by arshafan94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kriya ka character khudko sochke likha na drama queen??😉 bdw loved this one... it was cute sweet I knew u love jealous rey ... oye mera os kahan hain???? 😡 sabki demand puri kr sirf meri hi nhi *pout*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute os
Love the jodimof crazi kria n hot rey

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

kriya ka character khudko sochke likha na drama queen??😉 bdw loved this one... it was cute sweet I knew u love jealous rey ... oye mera os kahan hain???? 😡 sabki demand puri kr sirf meri hi nhi *pout*

Oh hello,
tune os ka demand kab kiya?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haye rabba..
Tu kitna acha likhti hai..
Mind Blowng Dia..
Keep writng aise hi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Res😊
Unres...bohut jaldi unres kardiya na😛

This was crazily superb...just like KR in this!
Loved their friendship turned love...their jealousy and possessiveness...sab mast ta!
Super adorable OS!
Once again love you for this🤗
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
as sabar kaa phal mitha hota hai
unes
outstanding morre than i expected from u jaanu
luv u
Edited by SweetDevil_KR - 11 years ago

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